To Make the Mobile Game Iron Breaker, I Fictionalized Ompharos

Well, I have read more than 120 chapters from the first chapter. The relationship between the protagonist and the character is an ordinary good friend relationship. There is no stallion, only daily fights and pranks. It is quite similar to Qiong. It is just a little more abstract, it would be better. Healthy food, feel free to eat it😋

I won't talk about the rest, but the number of people playing is too small, only tens of millions. Plus Star Iron's world view game and Black Tower, even if the game has only been launched for a day, there should be over 100 million players!

Start the journey with love, romance will always be there, flowing with gold, watering the years, the posture of a fairy, watching the dawn, the ripples of the past, just as we first saw, as I wrote, Lianmen will last forever!

Presenting Ompharos in the form of a game is a bit similar to watching a movie, but it is better than most movies. Currently, the author said that he wants to give a relatively happy ending. As long as he accepts the protagonist elbowing the iron tomb mentioned in the beginning, the plot is very good.

To be honest, when I first saw this book, the title quite dissuaded me. Recently, I ran out of books and accidentally turned it over. It turned out to be surprisingly good. The protagonist got out of the car early and killed the Iron Tomb Elbow. There was no system at the time. He had only been here for three years (he was simply Superman). He had a deep bond with the Golden One, and he probably had multiple female protagonists. The ones with more obvious meanings are Xi Lian, Xia Die, Tiriscipios, and Hessein. As for Aglaiya, they are not as obvious as these. I feel that the Black Tower is just a very good relationship. This book is somewhat similar to watching a movie, but it is in the form of a game, starting directly from Omphalos, and gradually synchronizing with the progress of the real train set. There are a lot of laughs in it Yes, after all, the protagonist made up everyone in Omphalos, and the original Omphalos was just a shell. As a result, the entire development of the star was acted out. Only the three little ones didn't know that they were tricked by the Japanese for Xing [laughter]. In addition, after each performance, they had to go back to interact with the protagonist. It was quite funny. Later, the star returned to the train and it was discovered that the protagonist was acting. She probably had to beat him up, and she couldn't stand it just thinking about it. Overall, this is a novel worth reading. In terms of interaction, the Golden Descent and the Black Tower don't have OOC, which is quite natural. I felt a little disappointed after reading it. After all, the interaction between the protagonist and the Golden Descent is really heartwarming. I have been working hard with the protagonist for the rebirth of Omphalos.

Why didn't the protagonist become the Time Star God? And didn't the protagonist protect Ompharos with mystery? Do you dare to tell others that the mystery has not disappeared? Wasn't the mystery revealed that led to Gallagher's death?

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 When the soul comes back... When the soul comes back, the flaw will be revealed, and the ridicule will be like a tide; At the second watch, the expression of anger faded slightly, and the spectators began to turn their ears; At the third watch, a slight reputation sprouts, and an alliance is formed in the future; At the fifth watch, righteous men and women gather together and argue; At the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars and the nobles are revitalized, and the sound of praise fills the thoroughfare; At the twenty-first watch, the name of the green slip will remain fragrant for thousands of years. Sigh! Nine times out of a hundred, the disadvantage lies in the delay; only by waving the keys like rain can the crowd's beaks be stopped. May your ink be as long as a long river, so that the starry night will be flawless and readers will forget to eat.

This must be a different romantic story

Let's read the new book for wisdom teeth

When watching a movie on Star Rail, the audience is not human (at least there is no OOC, and the timeline is not messed up), the plot is not boring, and the interaction outside the movie is also very good. The connection between the movie plot and the plot outside the movie is of appropriate length, and the movie will not be too long or the plot outside the movie will be too long...

It's okay, but there are some small problems, but they are insignificant [Chigua]

Even if their destiny rises and falls, pioneers should have their own opinions Even in the face of rough seas, train crews should move in the same direction Even if we advance or retreat in the depths, our lives are at stake, we should still fight against injustice. Even if it is forgotten by the world, it still does not remember the consequences of the incident Even if the Milky Way is dim at dusk, it should still illuminate the long night Even if the situation is chaotic, you should still look ahead and crush the chaos I hope this trip will eventually reach the stars

Author, please update soon! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

I have followed more than 100 chapters, and the overall impression is still very exciting. I just feel that the protagonist has released too few PVs. Many PVs of High Flame and Riddler have not been released. The protagonist is very Riddler, and there is a certain delay in promoting the plot.

The author writes so well and has his own little ingenuity. The current rating is low simply because not many people have watched it. Anyway, I'm chasing it every day. Probably if the number of ratings exceeds 500, it will be 8.0. It feels like everyone was so absorbed in reading it that they forgot to rate the book.

A very good reading experience. Although there are some logical loopholes (such as Gui Naifen not suspecting the protagonist, the game live broadcast screen and real time synchronization, etc.), The barrage has a good look and feel. The interaction between the protagonist and the golden descendants behind the scenes is also very warm, full of happiness and joy, tenderness and touching. I just feel sorry for Xing and Xiao Sanyue. They were played so thoroughly that if they were exposed afterwards, they would definitely cry and make trouble.

Very good, the ending meme is the greatest meme in the world. I hope that after the filming is completed, we can see more about the daily life of the golden descendants, so as not to be led astray by the two-phase paradise.

In theory, there is still a way to save Xi Lian. There must be external memory power or time system power to help Xi Lian go back to the past, so that she does not have to consume her own power to help her past self restart the reincarnation (the past Xi Lian consumed the future self's power to restart the reincarnation). As long as the future Xi Lian has the power to replace the consumption when she returns to the past, then the past will Lian does not need to sacrifice himself (the complete Xi Lian who is close to the memory star can directly trigger the power to replace him in the future), and there will be two Xi Lian, one is the Xi Lian of the heart of Omphalos and the future Xi Lian. At the end, the Xi Lian of the Heart of Omphalos returns to the past again, and the remaining Xi Lian can move towards the future. Finally, I would like to add that Xi Lian was able to directly ascend to the gods in the end, but in order to complete the cause and effect, he gave up ascending to the gods and returned to the past.

Beautiful, love watching. [Petrified] [Petrified] [Crying] [Petrified] [Almost crying] [Laughing awkwardly] [Pouty] [Shocked] [Cover face] [Cover face] [Punch] [Stare] [Full] [Learned] I am not a human machine.

It's okay. It's a different kind of movie-watching article. Just watch it without thinking. At least when I watched it, I did recall the plots that moved me, and there was a wave of excitement in my heart. This is enough.

I gave five stars purely because it gave Ompharos a good ending🙏🏻 Otherwise, I actually wanted to give it four stars and three stars. Others have said that about the number of people, so I won't talk about it. Xing, just tell me if this article has overshadowed Xing) The characters who originally had a deep connection with Xing have basically become the protagonists, and the extras also have the feeling of opening a harem [facepalm] I stopped reading the extras after finishing the main text. I couldn't stand it. How could it be written about Liu Ying competing with Xi Lian for favor? I couldn't stand it (the wording may be wrong, after all, I couldn't stand it anymore)

Don't read this book like other fanfics. Reading this book feels more like a summary of the plot of 3.0. After all, I didn't read the plot very seriously, so I wanted to give it a better ending. After all, the ending was really powerful at the time [facepalm]

Yes, when reading this novel, I feel like I have returned to the time when I first experienced the plot of Ompharos, but the success is also the plot and the failure is the plot. The demise of Beng Tie's golden descendants one by one, and the protagonist's salvation after a thousand years of delay. These touching scenes are reproduced very well, but the plot that was planned and delayed by Beng Tie and the water-injected novel that spanned multiple versions was not missing. I ate them all again, whether they were good or bad. Overall, I'll give it four stars. Alas, it was a novel that I really liked at first.

The perspective is unique and the story is exciting. Write it quickly!

An excellent book. It has the pleasure of watching a movie and the sweetness of daily interactions. The characters and stories are also well written and updated quickly. You can also relive the plot. It is very interesting.

Everything is fine, just don't add fate randomly. You only need to use the power of myth to save Xi Lian. This thing was originally born to repay the loan to memory.

It's nice to watch, a little bit disappointing, it reminds me of the feeling of the plot.

All I can say is that it's a good knife, a good knife. Give you - the dawn of all stars!

It's good to watch. I've watched so many fics. This is the only movie I can watch.

Why give five stars? I can give 4 reasons. First, this book is written very smoothly, because the version changes are very coherent, and it depicts the characters' expectations or curses for the version; second, this book is very addictive, let's just say, I read half of this book in one night, can't you explain it? Thirdly, this book is very impressive. Damn it, this author can write about knives... Bah bah bah, Sugar's teeth; fourthly, the characters she writes are very vivid, let alone the most low-level ones that are not OOC. The golden people written by the author are really vivid. I like them very much. They surpass all the golden people described in fan fiction I have seen. Just read it. Anyway, I don't know if you will like the style of this book. I can only taste it for you.