The Host of Quick Travel Is Being Pursued by the Target Again

I secretly wrote a review for my first quick travel book (◍•ᴗ•◍). Regarding this book, at first, it was just because I accidentally remembered a character name I had chosen in front of me - "Mo Yanqing". Be careful with your words and keep your heart, and be virtuous and befitting the minister. If you are prudent in words and deeds, calm and self-sustained, cultivate your moral character, and cultivate elegance, you will become a virtuous person in the future, with a noble and upright character. You will have restrained and steady wisdom in life, and a gentle and noble personality. A very driving name, isn't it? (｡･ω･｡) Suddenly the idea of giving him a story came to me. I also secretly drew some pictures... Oh, I won't talk about it. There is no doubt that this book is relatively inexperienced in terms of characters, plot, writing style and other aspects. But I am already very satisfied with it, because I wrote more than 300,000 words in advance before publishing it. During that time, I was actually very worried that I would not be able to persevere, because the time span was quite large, more than three months... A lot of the time I just entertained myself without getting any response, which was a kind of training and challenge for myself. I never thought that such an idea would become a motivation for me in a sense, haha. It's good. I met a lot of loving babies, which made me go from being hesitant about looking at the screen to looking forward to comments... Now I have started to prepare the second book~ Thank you!

I looked at the first two worlds first. They are very warm and cute, with gentle brushwork. Qingqing is excellent and feels like a being with a soul. I like to read this kind of article that treats the protagonist as an adult, and I will continue to read it. The author's writing style is also very stylish, and there is no obvious sluggishness when reading. However, the character dialogue can be slightly processed, and the characters can be slightly distinguished in multiple dialogues, but it is not a big problem. Judging from the first two worlds, there is no bloody heart attack plot. It is very healing. In short, it is a good article. Great work for the author, good writing will never be buried, Qingqing is really an excellent protagonist with personality, not too stereotyped or weakened, awesome!

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The author's writing is new to Novice Village. The plot is good but a little childish, and the characters are quite interesting. He likes to use emojis to express emotions, and there are a lot of ellipses. I haven't finished it yet and can't stand it anymore. I hope the novel uses words to express emotions instead of relying too much on emojis and a lot of emotional punctuation. Give me a five-star encouragement (Representing only personal views)

It is extremely friendly to controlled people. The first two planes are a bit novice. If you don't like them, just skip them. The third plane is very sweet. It is the kind of warmth that blends in with the scene. I like the third plane very much [send my heart] [send my heart] The level of writing in the fifth plane is very high, super awesome. I feel like the author has learned a lot since the previous planes.

Very good to read, looking forward to the new book

Good looking

It's good to watch, the plot is fast, the emotional line is fast, and there is no crazy plot. The character design of the protagonist is really great, but the only drawback may be that it's a bit confusing.

The writing is pretty good. It's the type I prefer. I like to watch small worlds that are not particularly long.

It's not bad. The immersion in the small world is quite strong. It can be seen that the author is trying hard to make every small detail innovative. Come on, come on •ᴗ•

🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑🉑You should read such a beautiful novel

The first world is very nice, it's a crybaby puppy, and the content is not too outrageous. Personally, I think it's okay. I recommend it [Sending Hearts] ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ