Red Mansion Factory Supervisor: Kill Jia Rong at the Beginning and Take Qin Keqing

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A very good book. At the beginning, you can obtain supreme skills, powerful Vajra fists and kicks.. One punch will make a small superman.. One big and one silent.. The golden belt of murder and arson... The noble man comes from the sky at night... Yuhuatian invites you to join the West Factory... Men's Knees There is gold... Kneel down and call me godfather... When I get home... I roar when I see injustice on the road... Beat the beast to death... The hero saves the beauty... Then he threatens and induces... Just out of the tiger's den and into the wolf's den... A generation of pure women take the initiative to beg for sex... Young Master, please take pity on me... I want to hug you and lift you high... I've read less than three chapters... I don't want to go...

This novel breaks away from the original tragic tone of "A Dream of Red Mansions" and takes Jia Rui, who has been reborn through time and space, as the protagonist, to stage a counterattack story that subverts destiny. The cowardly and unlucky Jia Rui in the original work changed his past image and joined Xichang by virtue of his own abilities, using thunderous means to fight against the insidious calculations and decadent trends in Jia's family. He no longer allowed others to bully him, but faced the difficulties of Wang Xifeng, Jia Zhen and others, and reversed his tragic fate step by step. The work combines the family grievances of the Red Mansion with the intrigues of the court. It not only has a satisfying feeling of grudges, but also conveys the attitude of "I have no control over my fate." Under the familiar background of the Red Mansion, a completely different path of passionate counterattack is taken, which makes people feel fresh and relieved when reading it.

Among the many Red Mansions fan fiction I have read, to be honest, this book is TO level. There is not so much nonsense in the whole book, the plot is not dull, and the protagonist's IQ is online! The whole book doesn't have too many bad points, and overall it's quite pleasant to read. My only request is that the twelve golden hairpins can be collected. Seeing that now, there are not many golden hairpins to eat, which is a bit... Of course, it may be that the overall plot is not too fast, so the collection is a bit slow. Anyway, I still hope to collect them all. Married women are also fine, Li Wan, Wang Xifeng, Youshi... In short, I support you, author, more updates! ! ! ! Of course, I have to collect all the twelve golden hairpins (Sister Qiao is not among them, I don't have that kind of hobby), but forget about annoying characters like Xi Ren, they are not very likable. All in all, the choice is the author's, I just hope. I hope the author will continue to work hard! ! ! I sincerely hope that everyone can read this book. It is decisive and unforgettable. The protagonist knows his goal and keeps working hard to climb higher! ! ! ! It's really cool to watch, and my reading time proves it all.

Okay, okay, the author is a great talent. To be honest, really, the chapter 80 about Pig's Feet leading Xue Baochai into the military camp to investigate the case is really well written. It would be a pity not to make a short play. No, it's better to make a short play. It's a great talent. [Laugh][Admire][Adore] OK, after seeing Feng Qinyou's "Three Phoenixes Playing with Ruijiao", I stopped reading for the first time. The author's writing is really good, and it really has the power of Prime Minister Cao in the past [shy][shy][shy]

There are some slight flaws at the front, but the flaws are not concealed. Especially the characters of each Jin Chai have not changed and still have vivid characteristics. This is particularly worthy of recognition. The speed is not slow and stable. On the premise of integrating harem elements and other TV drama characters, it is not too abrupt and can still make people feel like traveling through the Red Mansions. It is commendable and can be regarded as a masterpiece among the Red Mansions traveling fans. 5 Stars⭐encouragement

I was so fascinated that I forgot to play the game. I have to admit that you are truly a god. The historical fiction is not too much, and the emotional line is also good, which is rare. The last time I watched The Red Mansion was the one with Jin Yiwei. I felt that the pace was too fast and there were few emotional lines. In the later stage, the protagonist was busy "Qingjun's side", which was a bit clumsy, and it didn't feel as engaging as the early stage (this is human nature). But in comparison, when this book is written from the perspective of the protagonist, the plot is more complete and the pace is good. Hope it will continue to be maintained and optimized. Summary: Well written, not boring. (Personal opinion) I felt there were some shortcomings when I read it, but my ability is limited and I can't make any good suggestions. Just looking forward to how the author will end it.

The routines are smooth, the excitement is intensive, and the killings are decisive. Even the fighting scenes are written with great feeling, and the courtyard scenes have the charm of Red Mansion accent. The descriptions of several women are also very interesting! It is worth reading the Red Mansions.

After reading this article, I realized that this is a top-notch article from Red Mansions. The temperaments of many men and women are consistent with the original work, and they are not identical vases. The plot is exciting and the arrangement is reasonable, so I decided to give it a 5-star review.

It looks very cool. It is different from other fan styles. There are no twists and turns and designs. The killing is decisive. If you have super power, you don't need super intelligence. The storyline is also okay. It is not so cookie-cutter. Let's see if it can keep the eye-catching look at the beginning.

Just reading the first hundred chapters alone is worthy of a five-star review. The author's writing style is really good, but he is a bit slow to collect the girls. I wonder if all the older sisters will be collected. Expect. The writing style is really good, and it makes people feel happy to read it without feeling aggrieved. The protagonist is also relatively decisive in killing, and the rhythm is quite well controlled. At first, I just had the mentality of casually watching it, but I didn't expect that the more I watched, the better it became. I can't believe that this is written by a female author, and she can write so well in a male channel. Among Red Mansions fan fiction, it is definitely ranked in the top three. I look forward to the author continuing to work hard in the future and I will give you five-star praise. It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing this book, and I am willing to take the time to write you a good review. It's really good-looking. I personally feel that this author's writing style is better than that of Qidian's Platinum Master. It is completely worthy of full praise. It is really a very thoughtful work, not that kind of AI hydrology.

After reading many Red Mansion fanfics, this one is the one that suits my taste best. Although the system rewards are a bit outrageous, the plot in the article is coherent and smooth, the description details are vivid, and the writing is smooth. There is no other nonsense, so there is no need to skip reading.

The writing is getting better and better, and there were some minor flaws at first, including a routine of defeating monsters and upgrading to rank on the list. Later, the plot became much smoother. Currently, it is considered a good book with a 9-point quality, and there is no problem at all.

The author's description of the fun part is very good. From the fighting to the emotional aspect and the image description, I feel that it is very good. It combines the Red Mansion and the West Factory, with a delicate description of the Red Mansion, as well as the fighting in the rivers and lakes and the power struggle in the temple. It can be said that in recent years, it is a high-quality Red Mansion fanfic in 🍅. You can read it in the book shortage 🉑🉑🉑

Let me talk about the evaluation first: This is probably the best book among all the Red Mansions fans that is most similar to the original work. It is incomparable. As a daughter, the author has unique vision and delicate writing skills. At the same time, I think she must have studied the Dream of Red Mansions deeply. It can be said that whether you are reading Red Mansions for the first time or you are an experienced Red Mansions, the reading of this book will not be too bad for your senses. This is indeed a movie with multiple female protagonists, but it is by no means a stud. How the emotional drama between the protagonist and each woman develops and how to advance is described. It is by no means a bad book with vulgar routines posted for free, where good looks are justice, where one's face depends on God's will, where the protagonist's golden light attracts her, and the woman is like a magnet. I admire the protagonist's decisive and decisive temperament. This attitude of getting stronger step by step is also in line with our expectations for the development of things. I have read 100 chapters so far. The rhythm is great and there is no sign of collapse. The resourcefulness and strategy scenes in it are not written randomly without brains, nor are they solved by using the so-called system to solve the problem. It's a real step-by-step plan, and take action when it's time to take action. Everything is based on what the strength should be. At the same time, as a world of high-level martial arts, the protagonist's strength value can be improved reasonably. After all, it can be regarded as a refreshing article. The protagonist has indeed never suffered any big defeats. This book has the potential for long-term development. It will definitely get a high score of 9.2 Or above in the future. I am looking forward to its future.

The rating is low. There are slight flaws in the officialdom and the logic of dealing with things, but the overall structure and details are well controlled. The content is substantial, the plot is compact, and the character creation is similar to the original text. There is no deviation. It is a good fan work. It is really good! Keep up the good work! !

This is the first time I have seen such a satisfying Red Mansion fanfic. The plot is reasonable and the pace is tight, the setting is novel and the writing is outstanding. The characters are also richly portrayed. It is a rare masterpiece on Tomato. I hope the author will continue to work hard! In addition, I haven't read the back yet, so I would like to make two comments on the current progress: First, I hope the author will be more selective and not just collect stamps from the harem. There is no need to forcefully arrange some unpopular ones, and pay due attention to the rationality of the characters and plot; second, I feel that the system rewards can be appropriately enriched, not It is necessary to simply pile up various martial arts. The essence of martial arts is not too much. In a fight, a few of the strongest moves can be used in seconds. It seems redundant to give so many various martial arts, and many of them are not used. You can consider buying some Tianshan Plum Blossom Hands, which integrates various martial arts, to make full use of various rewards.

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It's beautiful, this is a really cool article, not cowardly

The plot of this novel is exciting, with a grand structure and rigorous logic. The characters are vivid and three-dimensional, the emotions are described delicately and movingly, and the profound themes are presented from a unique perspective. It is a rare masterpiece.

I used the shell of a red building and used some of the female characters inside as a foil. Mainly for upgrading to solve crimes. The martial arts and other upgrades are just a little bit more interesting than some traditional crime-solving upgrades with a little bit of Red Mansion elements added. Well, I'll take a look at the latest. Gone

It's very good. Some novels are just bad. The protagonists are all pretty good at it. None of them can be touched by Jia's family. But even if the protagonist's surname is Jia or another surname, he is pretending to be a grandson in front of Jia's family, especially Jia's mother. The officialdom is proud and the Jia family is angry.

The rhythm is tight, the writing is smooth, and it is a rare and refreshing article! I saw that chapter 113 was discontinued, so I went back and gave it a second review. Red Mansions + Water Margin + Martial Arts is one of the more enjoyable novels among the brainless novels. It's a high-scoring article. The author will continue to work hard!

It is a very authoritative vulgar book. It is full of details and arouses people's imagination. Unlike some books, it is vulgar and formulaic and has no characteristics. It is either a VIP content or a passing mention. Later, it not only has romance but also has chivalrous tenderness. What is the role of Mei? Although the positions are different, the character is still there, which is very impressive.

The rhythm of the plot is not sluggish, and it is also very rich. The world of martial arts, officialdom, and the Grand View Garden are all well connected together. Especially when listening to the song "Return to Zero", the feeling of a real ancient martial arts world arises. Come on, author!

When I see the author asking for a rating, let me give it a 5-star rating first. Book lovers who are interested in cool novels, harems, Red Mansions, mixed martial arts, and systems. This book is worth reading. The author does not suppress the protagonist, nor does he try to suppress his desire to advance. Although his strength is not It's invincible at the beginning, but I haven't suffered any losses along the way. The plot is quite satisfactory. At least so far, I don't think it's poisonous to me. The characters are well written, especially the female characters, which are not facial expressions.

It's a purely entertaining story. The protagonist is not only ruthless, but also capable of some low-end tricks. Those who are stronger, especially those who are invincible than the protagonist, will never appear when the protagonist has the same cultivation level, so don't worry. Hold back after being slapped in the face. The protagonist wants to collect a harem, but there are principles. The last thing is that since you are here to read the novel, there is no problem at all, and there is nothing to criticize in it. However, if you want to read the original version of Dream of Red Mansions, I suggest you go directly to the novel and don't get in the way. The reason why I have less time to read is because I listen to books, but occasionally I will read them because of the more exciting chapters.

Advantages: fast pace, intensive cool points, decisive killing, rapid progress in plot writing, certain research on Red Mansions, not a scam Disadvantages: The combat power is broken, and the realm is meaningless. Opponents of similar realms will be refreshed like mushrooms after the rain. The martial arts rewards are just in name, and the characteristics of the martial arts are not understood. In addition, Factory Flower has been well received. Although it only appears twice, once for the appearance and once for the curtain call, it does not prevent Factory Flower from being unparalleled.

The overall style of this book is similar to that of another book, Jin Yiwei, but this book has a faster pace and fewer tricks. It focuses on a story that is so refreshing when you throw your brain around, as if everything is waiting for the protagonist to encounter [laughs]

It's a very good book, but the character Cui Hongying is not very likable. She always acts for justice, and the people around her are killing people, setting fires, and robbing homes. Later, after her husband reveals his true nature, he still turns to him. Is this kind of woman really worth the protagonist's efforts to please? [Smile]