Red Chamber Factory Supervisor: From the Start, I Kill Jia Rong and Take Qin Keqing

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A very good book. At the beginning, you can obtain supreme skills, powerful Vajra fists and kicks.. One punch will make a small superman.. One big and one silent.. The golden belt of murder and arson... The noble man comes from the sky at night... Yuhuatian invites you to join the West Factory... Men's Knees There is gold... Kneel down and call me godfather... When I get home... I roar when I see injustice on the road... Beat the beast to death... The hero saves the beauty... Then he threatens and induces... Just out of the tiger's den and into the wolf's den... A generation of pure women take the initiative to beg for sex... Young Master, please take pity on me... I want to hug you and lift you high... I've read less than three chapters... I don't want to go...

This novel breaks away from the original tragic tone of "A Dream of Red Mansions" and takes Jia Rui, who has been reborn through time and space, as the protagonist, to stage a counterattack story that subverts destiny. The cowardly and unlucky Jia Rui in the original work changed his past image and joined Xichang by virtue of his own abilities, using thunderous means to fight against the insidious calculations and decadent trends in Jia's family. He no longer allowed others to bully him, but faced the difficulties of Wang Xifeng, Jia Zhen and others, and reversed his tragic fate step by step. The work combines the family grievances of the Red Mansion with the intrigues of the court. It not only has a satisfying feeling of grudges, but also conveys the attitude of "I have no control over my fate." Under the familiar background of the Red Mansion, a completely different path of passionate counterattack is taken, which makes people feel fresh and relieved when reading it.

Okay, okay, the author is a great talent. To be honest, really, the chapter 80 about Pig's Feet leading Xue Baochai into the military camp to investigate the case is really well written. It would be a pity not to make a short play. No, it's better to make a short play. It's a great talent. 😄🥰[Adore] OK, after seeing Feng Qinyou's "Three Phoenixes Playing with Ruijiao", I stopped reading for the first time. The author's writing is really good, and it really has the power of Prime Minister Cao in the past 😳😳😳

Among the many Red Mansions fan fiction I have read, to be honest, this book is TO level. There is not so much nonsense in the whole book, the plot is not dull, and the protagonist's IQ is online! The whole book doesn't have too many bad points, and overall it's quite pleasant to read. My only request is that the twelve golden hairpins can be collected. Seeing that now, there are not many golden hairpins to eat, which is a bit... Of course, it may be that the overall plot is not too fast, so the collection is a bit slow. Anyway, I still hope to collect them all. Married women are also fine, Li Wan, Wang Xifeng, Youshi... In short, I support you, author, more updates!!!! Of course, I have to collect all the twelve golden hairpins (Sister Qiao is not among them, I don't have that kind of hobby), but forget about annoying characters like Xi Ren, they are not very likable. All in all, the choice is the author's, I just hope. I hope the author will continue to work hard!!! I sincerely hope that everyone can read this book. It is decisive and unforgettable. The protagonist knows his goal and keeps working hard to climb higher!!!! It's really cool to watch, and my reading time proves it all.

There are some slight flaws at the front, but the flaws are not concealed. Especially the characters of each Jin Chai have not changed and still have vivid characteristics. This is particularly worthy of recognition. The speed is not slow and stable. On the premise of integrating harem elements and other TV drama characters, it is not too abrupt and can still make people feel like traveling through the Red Mansions. It is commendable and can be regarded as a masterpiece among the Red Mansions traveling fans. 5 Stars⭐encouragement

I'll go, I'll go, it's simply written very well. Taking the Red Mansion as the background, it also introduces Jin Yong's The Legend of the Condor Heroes, The Legend of Heaven and Sword of the Dragon, and the Water Margin from the Four Great Classics. The characters are vividly depicted, and the overall personality of the characters is consistent with the original works. It is unique, the fighting scenes are extremely exciting, the visuals are very strong, and the names of each move are also thunderous. The plot is full of ups and downs, coherent but not jerky. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, there is no pause in between. It is really addictive. The emotional portrayal between the male protagonist and the women is also very interesting. The naming of each chapter also shows that the author has put a lot of thought into it. It is so detailed, but no one urged me to update it 😢 It is really... Hard for the author to write it for so long. This rating of 8 points is really low. Author, don't give up, keep working hard, I hereby give you five-star praise, I hope the author will write better and better, and don't want to be unfinished 🥰🥰🥰

After reading this article, I realized that this is a top-notch article from Red Mansions. The temperaments of many men and women are consistent with the original work, and they are not identical vases. The plot is exciting and the arrangement is reasonable, so I decided to give it a 5-star review.

Just reading the first hundred chapters alone is worthy of a five-star review. The author's writing style is really good, but he is a bit slow to collect the girls. I wonder if all the older sisters will be collected. Expect. The writing style is really good, and it makes people feel happy to read it without feeling aggrieved. The protagonist is also relatively decisive in killing, and the rhythm is quite well controlled. At first, I just had the mentality of casually watching it, but I didn't expect that the more I watched, the better it became. I can't believe that this is written by a female author, and she can write so well in a male channel. Among Red Mansions fan fiction, it is definitely ranked in the top three. I look forward to the author continuing to work hard in the future and I will give you five-star praise. It can be seen that the author put his heart into writing this book, and I am willing to take the time to write you a good review. It's really good-looking. I personally feel that this author's writing style is better than that of Qidian's Platinum Master. It is completely worthy of full praise. It is really a very thoughtful work, not that kind of AI hydrology.

I was so fascinated that I forgot to play the game. I have to admit that you are truly a god. The historical fiction is not too much, and the emotional line is also good, which is rare. The last time I watched The Red Mansion was the one with Jin Yiwei. I felt that the pace was too fast and there were few emotional lines. In the later stage, the protagonist was busy "Qingjun's side", which was a bit clumsy, and it didn't feel as engaging as the early stage (this is human nature). But in comparison, when this book is written from the perspective of the protagonist, the plot is more complete and the pace is good. Hope it will continue to be maintained and optimized. Summary: Well written, not boring. (Personal opinion) I felt there were some shortcomings when I read it, but my ability is limited and I can't make any good suggestions. Just looking forward to how the author will end it.