Thousand-Year-Old Shrimp Dumplings

The characterization of the protagonist is very detailed, and the descriptions of each character are also well done. It's nice not to have that kind of inexplicable invincibility (of course it may be that I don't like reading invincible articles). The storyline is also very good without any inexplicable plot, and Haki's combat performance is also well controlled without falling apart. Although it is not as interesting as some of Ha Jilan's books, it is still more worth reading. After all, most of the BA articles in Tomato are about invincibility, and there are very few student growth articles. Of course, it is a new book after all. Although there are few people, it will definitely get better in the future. (Let me tell you secretly, Ha Jizuo still has a double-digit number of manuscripts saved)

Starting from BA, the original regrets (such as Meng, Caesar Group, FOX Team, etc.) Have been resolved, and some tepid students (such as Toki, Rin, Utahara, etc.) Have also had memorable scenes, and popular people such as Yuka and Alice have also gained the growth they should have. The shortcoming is that there is less daily writing (definitely not because I want to watch [smile]). After all, daily life is one of the main themes of Kivotos. Starting from the knight, there are not many people who write about 01, but most of them only take care of their own parts of 01 (many like Barkan, Qianqi, Thunder of Destruction, etc. Just appear as speed bumps for 01's new form), and the reputation of 01 in the circle is more Not many people understand the things about 01 (such as technological singularities and the pros and cons brought about by technological development). At least you, the author, have successfully made me understand 01 again (although I have to criticize what should be criticized, but I also have to praise what should be praised. Except for the plot, 01 is all online)

It's really good to read. The single female protagonist, no system, and no hostility are all plus points for me. Other BA fans have gone crazy to some extent, but I really don't like it. I usually don't want to read it after a few chapters. This one's main character didn't go crazy, which surprised me. It was the only one that kept me reading for so long. It wasn't enough, so I finished it in a few days (I wanted to see the protagonist transform into Yak Reiichi, he's really handsome).

It is a very good book among all BA fans. The plot is neither procrastinating nor incomprehensible. The characters are also well drawn. Moreover, it is a student novel, it is a Kamen Rider but not an invincible novel, and the combat power is well controlled without collapse. It is a fan work worth watching.

Yes, it is better written than Zero One [laughter] Then, the characters are delicately drawn, and the growth of the protagonist is also very clear, from man-machine to the emergence of emotions to the first singularity breakthrough, and then being broken, only to break through again after sacrificing himself, learning to rely on others, and having trustworthy partners, teachers, and lovers. The most important thing, the portrayal of chivalry is also very good. The protagonist has a better understanding of protection, dreams, and technology than anyone in the main drama [laughter]

I finally finished reading it. It is a masterpiece. Not only is the story well written, the details are delicate, the emotional scenes are also very comfortable, especially when it comes to the tear-jerking part, I really want to make people cry. Moreover, the New Year's episode is actually linked to the next door "The Physicist of Ghenna", which is really exciting! I hope the author can continue to write and create better Azure Files fan fiction! [Top post][top post][top post]

I saw Chapter 14. Personally, I feel that the appearance of the armor is only that of the 01 series, but the inside is not. The numerical values ​​​​have not kept up. The 8.4-Ton high-leap flying locust cannot easily lift the 1-ton Sword of Light.

New author, if you have any questions, please point them out in the comment area. Please give me a five-star review from readers.

The author's writing is really good. It was because of reading his book that I decided to read the entire Kamen Rider

Great! It's been a while since I've seen such a good article that suits my taste [Like] I hope the author will update more, come on!

It looks good, I love watching it, it's not a U-shaped shrimp dumpling image. Sure enough, the little shrimp dumplings on TV were beaten silly by the little devil in the theater version.

I'm very curious about how the author will handle other emotional lines of the protagonist [laughing]

Good news. Also, I want to watch Yak One as a hacker.

I want to see Pedestrian and Noah [Banchuang Fusion]

I watched it in 3 days. The plot is pretty good and I won't be bored.

A very nice student novel. Overall, the protagonist looks more like a student than an adult.

Come on, big brother who writes BA

It's well written and the protagonist's character changes very well without being too rigid.

The plot is reasonable and there are no character breakdowns. To sum up, it looks good and I love watching it.

It's good to watch. As a ba novel, it can be considered to be above average. It can be compared with Haji's prison story. The writing is good, the characters are vivid, and the plot rhythm is well controlled.

Very nice, very informative, very well described

Five-star praise for you, don't run away

Very good, better looking than the original one

It's really beautiful and well written.

It looks good, no need to say more

Incredibly good-looking

Please add a 0.1 Rating [laughing]

Good luck to Kang Haji!

The writing is very good and beautiful. I recommend it!

..., That's it for now, let's eat first [makes a face]