人在天龙：开局认母叶二娘

A new and cute author is here to report. This is the author's first book. His writing skills are insufficient, please read it lightly. I will do my best to tell this story. I will try to write it strictly according to the original settings. I will make slight changes where the plot requires it, and I will not write it casually. If you have something you want to see, you can write it in a book review or paragraph review, or you can leave a message here, and I will watch it carefully. Then I try to meet everyone's needs. I only need to change the outline a little, but everyone will be happy with it [laughs] But it should be within the allowed persimmon limit, and don't be too explosive. In addition, all the female protagonists are over 18 years old, and the younger ones have been adjusted up. Finally, thank you all again for your support, I love you [blowing kiss]

Five-star arrangement, yes, it is not a brainless collection, at least it has a description of the emotional process and psychological transformation. This is not watery, but a must-have detail in the novel. Many novels recruit girls who are purely brainless, which is very good. The only drawback is that there is a little less work [smile]

Really well written! Kang Min is very charming, you must accept her!

I think it's well written. There is no such mindless beauty as those who travel through time. There is no such thing as invincible martial arts training or killing. Systematic daily life, unsystematic daily life. A touch of warmth, feels good. Compared with those novels that are systematic but still lay down everyday, I feel that this kind of unsystematic but still daily description is more comfortable.

A sincere 5-star review. I would like to thank the author for writing such a beautiful novel in this time when mindless novels are rampant. This is a novel that people can read normally. It has depth, connotation, story, and beauty. The author will try his best to write more novels.

Not bad! Very pretty. The author's opening is very novel! Come on more! It must be completed normally and don't end badly! As for the plot... I think the protagonist and heroine can take as much as she can! Like A'Zhu, Zhong Ling, Wang Yuyan and so on! Collect everything you can. When I read a book, what I hate the most is that some women from the author insist on keeping them for the protagonists! Why! I've already traveled through time, but I still have to follow the plot and leave the heroine to the protagonist. Isn't it fun to not find the heroine? Isn't it a waste of time to travel! What A'Zhu! Zhong Ling! Wang Yuyan! Li Qinglu, plums, orchids, bamboos, chrysanthemums, etc., I'll take them all if I can! Even someone like Li Qingluo is not impossible... In short, since you have traveled through time, don't think about leaving opportunities and women to the protagonist, otherwise wouldn't it be a waste of time?

If the protagonist is single-minded, will all the other women belong to Duan Yu? Hahahaha

The pacing is well controlled, the plot advances smoothly without lag, the characters are vivid and three-dimensional, and the characters are likeable without being stereotyped. The daily scenes are relaxed and natural, the conflict setting is just right, the suspense foreshadowing is very attractive, and the reading feels very immersive. The writing style is clean and neat, there is no superfluous word count plot, and the arrangement is reasonable and not artificial. The overall viewing experience is comfortable and engaging, and the reading experience is very good. I look forward to the subsequent plot development and continue to update!

Looks good, the Supreme Bone is moving [punches]

Not bad, not like a newbie, and the plot is not draggy

Four stars given. So far, the writing is pretty good. Some of the paragraphs are well written, but I can't accept the setting of wiping Duan Zhengchun's butt, so it's four stars.

Clear logic, fluent language, and clever ideas

It's well written and worth reading. Cheers to the author!

Good-looking, a real man will do it when he deserves it [laughing evilly]

The imagination is strange, and it makes up for some of the regrets of Tian Long Ba Bu.

It's okay, right? A lot of what modern people wrote in the past was quite self-serving.

The author ✍️ is very good, keep up the good work

Come on, author, stop being a eunuch.

You can't learn martial arts if you're in a small section Duan Yu can't be said to be a bad person. How can I put it? If you want to have a harem, it's best to keep a distance from Duan Yu. [Laughing awkwardly]

Many novels are written well in the first few chapters, but then they seem to be a different person. I hope the author of this novel is not like this. Keep up the good work!

This kind of subject is quite interesting...

Not bad! For the first time, I saw the protagonist led by the four villains.

The writing is not bad, please encourage me [please read carefully] Tips: In mental activities, the use of personal pronouns is inappropriate, which somewhat affects listening and reading [Chigua]

A very good novel, worth reading

The second creation is good, but the plot is pushed too fast, and there are few details and branches, which is not enough to watch. If there are more original branches and details, this could be a second creation classic.

It looks good, the plot is good, and the writing skills are good

It is well written and very beautiful. This is one of the few excellent books.

The writing is natural and coherent, without any trembling!

This kind of writing is something that a connoisseur will know right away. Not to mention the plot, this concise writing is worthy of five stars. I'm really satisfied with it. The pace is slower than most of Tomato's cool novels, but it's more delicate and the emotions are written very naturally. Some people may say it's a noob, but this book feels like a novice to me. It's all normal people's emotions. It doesn't flatten the characters for the sake of traffic and reader preference.

It's a good book. The plot doesn't drag on, the girl doesn't take any time to get you, and you dare to love and hate. This kind of book is rare.