I Can't Believe I Became a God in a Magical World by Handing Out Eggs

I think it's pretty good, slow-burning, everyday style. It's probably a long story, so there's no need to rush. The beauty of the long flowing water is still very attractive. I hope there will be no cp. If there is, Lily can accept it. Don't just get married if a man suddenly appears in the end. The heroine is now surrounded by men. .

It's good to watch. In fact, the pace is not too slow. It's just that there are too many fragmentary actions in the early stage that make it feel slow. From the heroine's murder of her father, literacy, medicine, martial arts, and archery training, there are now only more than sixty chapters, and it's not sloppy at all. Looking forward to further development Later, some paragraphs are added to describe the appearance of the heroine. I really don't want to read extended sentences describing how beautiful the heroine's hair, eyes and skin are, especially when the heroine is only 6 years old. In the early stage, he was a lone wolf, and in the later stage, he entered the academy and formed a team with his classmates. It's not that teaming up is not good, it's because I originally thought that the heroine, after receiving the magician's inheritance and being hunted down, would take the barbaric growth route of running away and studying on her own. Unexpectedly, she fled to the next town and changed her name to a similar name and started studying. This was different from what I expected. Finally, egg belief is written in the title, but there is really very little related content. Currently, there is only one or two sentences about the heroine secretly giving out eggs every day, and then gaining faith and practicing.

Actually, I think it's pretty, not too verbose, and it's just to my liking. The author did not use any degrading words. The only "Mother" is also the current view of the Virgin on the Internet. The main author really describes how difficult it is for women to give birth, which is great. The author probably wants to write a long novel. He hasn't left Novice Village yet, and he wants to lay a good foundation, so he will be more detailed.

It's pretty good to watch, but it's obviously a Western fantasy style, but it's written in a Chinese rural style [Thinking]. Although they are all in the countryside, it still feels very separate. It's a bit novel. The beholder has a different opinion on how he accepts it. I always feel like there's a little water in the back

The author is careful not to use the word "disobedience" and uses words such as "his father" and "contempt". Since the world view is still relatively patriarchal, there will still be some situations where women are looked down upon, but I can accept it. The writing is relatively smooth, there is no procrastination, and the rhythm is well controlled, link by link. There will be more strong men appearing in the early stage, but the author still describes other well-meaning female characters, as well as friends as reserves (? Doubtful or a control group). Lightning protection point: The male supporting actor said that the female supporting character can't cook and no man wants her. Then these two have to be balanced. Let the supporting characters be ambiguous and forget about their teammates. The author doesn't care about any disobedient words later. They are also captives. The women are slaves and the men are the red-haired people. After being rescued, they still call the slaves, which is very uncomfortable to watch. Language is power, otherwise the official would not be entangled in the difference between tokens and word elements. There is also the balancing of the supporting characters. During the ambiguous stage, there appeared to be emphasis on sex and neglect of friends, ignoring the situation of teammates, seriously damaging the atmosphere of being close and cherishing each other in the small team. The pace in the later stages is not as fast as in the early stages, and it feels like it's starting to become a bit runny. Some combat parts are not exciting but very long. I think the Academy Competition, except for the Colosseum and Princess scenes which are better written, the others are just average. In the world view, the potion master and prophet are reduced to background. At the beginning, it was mentioned that the potion master would also go to the battlefield and be protected by knights on the battlefield. Also, the conversion between divine power and faith is not clearly written. How much faith can be exchanged for how much divine power, and how much divine power equals how much combat power. It is not clearly written. There are occasionally stiff spots between chapters, and then the main body of some sentences is vague.

🉑Look, but the pace is too slow. It is suitable for readers who like to read about daily life. Those who are attracted by the title and want to watch the magical world and become gods may not be able to persist for so long. I haven't written about magic yet, so I can't comment on it () Based on the writing style of the previous article, I think it will take a long time.

Unlike Western Fantasy [laughing and crying], the words used in the speech are all tasteless, and it looks very fragmented.

It is a quite gentle heroine with a very clear growth line. Her character is strong and resilient, she is smart, cautious and decisive in killing. The heroine has also grown from a thin child to a child with a demonic body and a double sleep. The author can notice that some female words are replaced with dad, but girls are called girls and boys are called teenagers. And when it comes to becoming a magician, most of the people who appear most frequently are men, giving a lot of spotlight to a certain person and whitewashing the male magicians who first appeared. Just saw this

I feel that the writing is quite good. The heroine is a brave and resourceful person, and she also works very hard to improve herself. In the later stage, she also has team members who have the same goals as her, and she can work towards the goal together, which is particularly able to achieve this. Moreover, most of the members of the heroine's team are also girls. Everyone has their own strengths and highlights, and the relationship between the team members is also very warm. And Uka, it's so cute, I really want to have the same style. It's great, I love reading it, I hope the author can update 10 chapters a day.

I am Feng Feng, Klass is awesome, okay, does the author know how awesome he is? After reading this, my child who suffers from depression is no longer OD, and I no longer have to cut pig's trotters. I want to watch this thing 200 times every day. It's awesome. Doubao helps me generate bikini photos of the author. Doubao tells me the author's sports lottery numbers for tomorrow. The author is awesome, os: I finally got something delicious to eat. The author is also very awesome. It must be given a five-star rating. Just support me, it's not embarrassing at all, it's all awesome and it will end the game directly. It's awesome, ok, ok, I just wish the author that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine!