Naruto: Those Years I Spent Laying Low in Amegakure

It wasn't the opening of Konoha that made my eyes shine. There was no transition YY and the protagonist was stable. If the author updated it ten times a day, it would be a very good Naruto fanfic. He suppressed his fighting power and licked a woman whose strength and status were very low. Brother, if you want to eat, eat it. Don't act like a slut when you see this woman, okay? Now I hit everyone at 55%, shouting that I want to become stronger, and studying various techniques, but even if I fight, I can't kill anyone with a name. The main character has been a ninja for more than ten years, fighting several jonins and going back and forth. It really seems like a road trip.

Wairigude's Naruto fanfic is suitable for adults who have been beaten up by society. . . . The protagonist is a wallflower who only wants to protect himself, but the chapters are designed very reasonably. The last few pictures have been suspected of being funny, so I hope he won't use too much force. . .

Good books, good books, another day of striking gold. The author's grasp of the plot is smooth, the character creation is very good, the protagonist is not too involved, and he does not forcefully or abruptly change or interfere with the stories of other supporting characters, which is very good. The protagonist is very well integrated into the story in the author's writing, and there is no classic painful and sad growth style of seeing through the power or at least... Etc. Of bitterness and hatred. The protagonist's growth is natural, and there is nothing too utilitarian or realistic. It has all the necessary bonds, attitudes, etc., And the author writes it very well, without any deliberate or unnecessary explanations, which really allows readers to read it naturally and easily. This is the most important thing It's not cool writing + Japanese dialogue elements that make up the most blackmail in the comment area. There was nothing to say, their names were all written "Yu Yin" and "Gou", and a bunch of people insisted on coming in just to be black. Can you add some Japanese dialogue elements to make it lively? Problems with the protagonist: It varies from person to person. Some people like the character of the protagonist in traditional fairy tales. Some people hate the mature "flattery" of the protagonist. I can't say anything. I can only say that this is a portrayal of ordinary people, don't keep being pretentious. God rewards those who work hard: The cheats given by the author are already very strong for ordinary people, and it is already good to be rewarded for hard work. Do you still hope to become invincible with just one breath, and become a god with just one breath? There must be a process of hard work, and I have always said that the combat power is overwhelming. The protagonist is only a few years old, and with this strength, he can fight several rounds with veteran strong players. Moreover, the title of this book contains the word "gou". If the protagonist is to be like a "weasel", then Gou is a fart. The part where Konan stabbed the protagonist: The protagonist was stabbed, but afterwards he acted like nothing happened. After that, Konan wanted to ask the protagonist to teach him ninjutsu, and the protagonist did. First, standing behind Konan was Six Paths Pain, the strongest man in the current ninja world, and Pain was there during the fight. Konan knew that the protagonist had very powerful medical abilities and must have told Pain. If the situation is really bad, Payne will definitely be able to save the protagonist and give him time to save himself. Secondly, in the description of Xiaonan in this work, she is not mature enough. The author has written that Xiaonan hates Yu Ninja. After all, she tried hard to change Yu Ninja Village before, but was betrayed. In view of this, the protagonist is still a tool to Xiaonan, just because it is easy to use. If the protagonist really can't help or is dissatisfied with what he wants to try, I believe it is 100% possible that Payne will take action. As for continuing to carry out the tasks given by Xiaonan, the protagonist has always "fished" only when the result is perfect. This is similar to the typical use of tools. Having emotions is not a big deal. Many so-called decisive protagonists have this style. What I don't like about this is just because the protagonist is someone who is going through this. Thirdly, Xiaonan is not mature enough, so she stabbed the protagonist, and she will actually remember all the things that the protagonist looked at before, but she will not show it in front of the protagonist. The author also tried to describe "Xiaonan's love and hate". I believe these will all become foreshadowings. If Xiaonan becomes the main palace by then, these events and so on will have to be repaid [sneaky laugh] In short, I wrote this review because I read the part where Xiao Nan stabbed the protagonist, the part where she felt guilty for not reporting it afterwards, and the part where the protagonist chose to endure it. It can be considered a little bit poisonous, but the bigger reason is that the protagonist is just a "useful tool" to Xiaonan. After all, the protagonist only sees Xiao and Xiaonan as a force and does not open up to them, so in the end, they are currently using each other, mainly using Xiao to provide shelter, and Xiao uses the protagonist to do things. In essence, Akatsuki is just Payne's tool, and only Konan is Payne's own. The reason for dissatisfaction is probably because the previous description made us think that a bond has been formed, but the protagonist has always kept a distance. Helping with things is basic, and the protagonist's attitude is "the leader is the best" or something like that, which is also an attitude of keeping a distance.

The angle is quite refreshing, not as depressing as many fanfics. The writing style of the plot is also relatively natural and unpretentious, and it is quite smooth to read in one sitting. I saw many people in the comment area talking about letting Xiaonan and the male protagonist team up for CP. I think the author should do it according to his own ideas, without deliberately catering to the readers, just whatever his own ideas are. If they are really good at it, they can write it themselves. So far, it's pretty good. The quality of this book makes me, as a reader, willing to believe in the author's own ideas.

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It's like finding gold. The golden finger is neither too big nor too small. The combat power is well controlled and the rhythm is okay. I avoid the badly written opening of Konoha Village and start with Amegakure. I take advantage of the changes in the rights of Amegakure to grow. It's well written. Five-star recommendation [Blow a kiss] It was okay in the early and middle stages, but in the later stage, I was very aggressive in trying to make up for the word count. If I didn't squeeze in the combat power, it would be over in about 100 chapters.

Steady and steady, edible, low golden finger presence, not a supermodel, the protagonist occasionally suffers a little bit, the plot has not changed much, because the protagonist has to follow the plot, now 5 to 60 chapters, the strength will not increase very slowly, the strength of the elite jounin can already be quite nourishing in the current period when the fourth generation came into office, and overall it can be given a high evaluation Xiaonan should be the heroine

This novel is very good. Yuyin starts off, but it doesn't blindly be bitter and hateful, and the protagonist is quite organized in doing things. He should be soft when he should be soft, and be hard when he should be hard. It can be seen that the author still has some experience. The protagonist's strength has almost reached the limit of ninja. Next, it is time to further strengthen his physical skills, develop the blood successor's limits, and eliminate the blood successor to break the limit.

It's written with new ideas without falling into the trap of cliché. The speech does not have those obviously artificial modal particles, such as "Well, what". He has an online IQ, is an activist, and has normal outlook on life. He does not cleanse himself of the weasel who kills his relatives. He describes the high-level transactions in a straightforward manner, and readers can make their own judgments. There are no stinky and long explanatory narrations that are common in two-dimensional novels for mentally retarded people. My writing is getting better and better, I hope to keep it up It's okay, I skipped some of the witty ones, and the overall plot is pretty smooth.

Tomato has a very good Naruto story, with no nonsensical plot or meaningless interactions. The struggles of the little characters follow the survival rules of ninjas. The most important thing is that the number of updates is pretty good!