Naruto: Gou Zai Yuyin Becomes an Immortal

It wasn't the opening of Konoha that made my eyes shine. There was no transition YY and the protagonist was stable. If the author updated it ten times a day, it would be a very good Naruto fanfic. He suppressed his fighting power and licked a woman whose strength and status were very low. Brother, if you want to eat, eat it. Don't act like a slut when you see this woman, okay? Now I hit everyone at 55%, shouting that I want to become stronger, and studying various techniques, but even if I fight, I can't kill anyone with a name. The main character has been a ninja for more than ten years, fighting several jonins and going back and forth. It really seems like a road trip.

Wairigude's Naruto fanfic is suitable for adults who have been beaten up by society. . . . The protagonist is a wallflower who only wants to protect himself, but the chapters are designed very reasonably. The last few pictures have been suspected of being funny, so I hope he won't use too much force. . .

Good books, good books, another day of striking gold. The author's grasp of the plot is smooth, the character creation is very good, the protagonist is not too involved, and he does not forcefully or abruptly change or interfere with the stories of other supporting characters, which is very good. The protagonist is very well integrated into the story in the author's writing, and there is no classic painful and sad growth style of seeing through the power or at least... Etc. Of bitterness and hatred. The protagonist's growth is natural, and there is nothing too utilitarian or realistic. It has all the necessary bonds, attitudes, etc., And the author writes it very well, without any deliberate or unnecessary explanations, which really allows readers to read it naturally and easily. This is the most important thing It's not cool writing + Japanese dialogue elements that make up the most blackmail in the comment area. There was nothing to say, their names were all written "Yu Yin" and "Gou", and a bunch of people insisted on coming in just to be black. Can you add some Japanese dialogue elements to make it lively? Problems with the protagonist: It varies from person to person. Some people like the character of the protagonist in traditional fairy tales. Some people hate the mature "flattery" of the protagonist. I can't say anything. I can only say that this is a portrayal of ordinary people, don't keep being pretentious. God rewards those who work hard: The cheats given by the author are already very strong for ordinary people, and it is already good to be rewarded for hard work. Do you still hope to become invincible with just one breath, and become a god with just one breath? There must be a process of hard work, and I have always said that the combat power is overwhelming. The protagonist is only a few years old, and with this strength, he can fight several rounds with veteran strong players. Moreover, the title of this book contains the word "gou". If the protagonist is to be like a "weasel", then Gou is a fart. The part where Konan stabbed the protagonist: The protagonist was stabbed, but afterwards he acted like nothing happened. After that, Konan wanted to ask the protagonist to teach him ninjutsu, and the protagonist did. First, standing behind Konan was Six Paths Pain, the strongest man in the current ninja world, and Pain was there during the fight. Konan knew that the protagonist had very powerful medical abilities and must have told Pain. If the situation is really bad, Payne will definitely be able to save the protagonist and give him time to save himself. Secondly, in the description of Xiaonan in this work, she is not mature enough. The author has written that Xiaonan hates Yu Ninja. After all, she tried hard to change Yu Ninja Village before, but was betrayed. In view of this, the protagonist is still a tool to Xiaonan, just because it is easy to use. If the protagonist really can't help or is dissatisfied with what he wants to try, I believe it is 100% possible that Payne will take action. As for continuing to carry out the tasks given by Xiaonan, the protagonist has always "fished" only when the result is perfect. This is similar to the typical use of tools. Having emotions is not a big deal. Many so-called decisive protagonists have this style. What I don't like about this is just because the protagonist is someone who is going through this. Thirdly, Xiaonan is not mature enough, so she stabbed the protagonist, and she will actually remember all the things that the protagonist looked at before, but she will not show it in front of the protagonist. The author also tried to describe "Xiaonan's love and hate". I believe these will all become foreshadowings. If Xiaonan becomes the main palace by then, these events and so on will have to be repaid [sneaky laugh] In short, I wrote this review because I read the part where Xiao Nan stabbed the protagonist, the part where she felt guilty for not reporting it afterwards, and the part where the protagonist chose to endure it. It can be considered a little bit poisonous, but the bigger reason is that the protagonist is just a "useful tool" to Xiaonan. After all, the protagonist only sees Xiao and Xiaonan as a force and does not open up to them, so in the end, they are currently using each other, mainly using Xiao to provide shelter, and Xiao uses the protagonist to do things. In essence, Akatsuki is just Payne's tool, and only Konan is Payne's own. The reason for dissatisfaction is probably because the previous description made us think that a bond has been formed, but the protagonist has always kept a distance. Helping with things is basic, and the protagonist's attitude is "the leader is the best" or something like that, which is also an attitude of keeping a distance.

The angle is quite refreshing, not as depressing as many fanfics. The writing style of the plot is also relatively natural and unpretentious, and it is quite smooth to read in one sitting. I saw many people in the comment area talking about letting Xiaonan and the male protagonist team up for CP. I think the author should do it according to his own ideas, without deliberately catering to the readers, just whatever his own ideas are. If they are really good at it, they can write it themselves. So far, it's pretty good. The quality of this book makes me, as a reader, willing to believe in the author's own ideas.

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It's like finding gold. The golden finger is neither too big nor too small. The combat power is well controlled and the rhythm is okay. I avoid the badly written opening of Konoha Village and start with Amegakure. I take advantage of the changes in the rights of Amegakure to grow. It's well written. Five-star recommendation [Blow a kiss] It was okay in the early and middle stages, but in the later stage, I was very aggressive in trying to make up for the word count. If I didn't squeeze in the combat power, it would be over in about 100 chapters.

Steady and steady, edible, low golden finger presence, not a supermodel, the protagonist occasionally suffers a little bit, the plot has not changed much, because the protagonist has to follow the plot, now 5 to 60 chapters, the strength will not increase very slowly, the strength of the elite jounin can already be quite nourishing in the current period when the fourth generation came into office, and overall it can be given a high evaluation Xiaonan should be the heroine

This novel is very good. Yuyin starts off, but it doesn't blindly be bitter and hateful, and the protagonist is quite organized in doing things. He should be soft when he should be soft, and be hard when he should be hard. It can be seen that the author still has some experience. The protagonist's strength has almost reached the limit of ninja. Next, it is time to further strengthen his physical skills, develop the blood successor's limits, and eliminate the blood successor to break the limit.

Many people who write about Naruto didn't have high hopes, but they turned out to be unexpectedly good! There is nothing poisonous to watch [Like]

Tomato has a very good Naruto story, with no nonsensical plot or meaningless interactions. The struggles of the little characters follow the survival rules of ninjas. The most important thing is that the number of updates is pretty good!

The rhythm of the story is well controlled, and there is no nonsense in other works by other peers or relying on selling female characters to attract readers. It is written something of its own. You are this in Tomato Naruto [Like]

It's written with new ideas without falling into the trap of cliché. The speech does not have those obviously artificial modal particles, such as "Well, what". He has an online IQ, is an activist, and has normal outlook on life. He does not cleanse himself of the weasel who kills his relatives. He describes the high-level transactions in a straightforward manner, and readers can make their own judgments. There are no stinky and long explanatory narrations that are common in two-dimensional novels for mentally retarded people. My writing is getting better and better, I hope to keep it up It's okay, I skipped some of the witty ones, and the overall plot is pretty smooth.

After reading the feedback from many readers, I complained about the issue of suppressing combat power. This is not a quibble. I have not betrayed my position. The name of the book is "Gou Dao", not an invincible text. I have not forgotten my original intention and kept my mission in mind. I have not been cowardly when I should be arrogant, and I have never been arrogant when I should be cowardly. However, I have to admit that the Uchiha genocide incident was not handled well, which is a pity. In the end, there were many veterans who followed it from beginning to end. I would like to thank everyone for their support and encouragement. As for spiritual food, just read it if you like it. It doesn't matter if you don't like it. It doesn't matter. The key is to be happy. Reading novels is all about having fun [giving you heart]. The new book has been released. Those who are interested can check it out [laughing]

Naruto's story is pretty good, his fighting power is not overwhelming, and God rewards those who work hard with golden fingers. Well, the other thing I want to say is that the first part is not very good. You can start from Chapter 20 or 30, or just watch the part where Konan Nagato kills Hanzo. The first part is foreshadowing and the protagonist's combat power slowly increases. In the middle and late stages, he develops ninjutsu, senjutsu, and swordsmanship... As a person with no shortcomings, there is no blood [so far]

Yun Hokage, many Hokage common sense mistakes and daily typos are not corrected even after being reminded. Fortunately, the AI ​​training is very good and the humanities and worldliness are well written. It is worth reading (forget about the second brush)

Tomato's best Naruto fanfic, although it has some toxic points, its flaws are not hidden, the story line is complete, and the overall atmosphere is relaxed. The protagonist is the Hidden Rain Village at the beginning, and the Pain camp. The ending does not pursue the immortality of the Ten-Tails, but the victory of the Pain camp, and the peace reached in Pain's way. The heroine is Konan and an original heroine.

This book is one of the few fan fictions that I have read to the end. Whether it is the character setting, language description or plot setting, it is very nice. It can be said that I have seen the ceiling of all fan fictions. Many disagreements have been settled. Nagato did not die and became the second Six Paths. Neji did not die. And he successfully resisted the fate of all the family divisions, and many problems left over from his childhood have also been resolved. First of all, Itachi did not die well, and then Obito also did not have the upper hand. There was no such thing as not being allowed to laugh, and Sasuke was not criticized by other gods. He still took revenge, which can be said to be a smallpox in the fandom. Finished with flowers 🌸

This book is the longest one I have ever read about Naruto. It has a unique perspective, a tricky angle, and a humorous writing style. The most important protagonist is lovable. Although he is not the main protagonist, he is the main output, but the supporting protagonist is also unique. He is unique among many Naruto books. I have finished reading it, and I am still unfinished. Akatsuki finally won.

I currently see the advantages of the book I reviewed at the beginning of Chapter 83: 1. It allows you to travel to other countries, not just the five major countries, and the overall writing style is relatively clear. 2. The male protagonist has no obvious cheats, and his combat power suddenly soared. The overall look is relatively smooth, and there will be no obvious disharmony in combat power, which makes the article more uncomfortable to read. The male protagonist is personally humorous and not advanced. Think about it first. His current IQ is online, and he is not very brainless. 3. The author considers adding the protagonist's skills or development, which are all related and will not be obviously abrupt. 4 The author did not draw emotional lines randomly. There were few emotional articles in the early stage that looked more comfortable. After talking about the advantages, here are some small suggestions I have for the author. After reading this, I gradually forgot about the cheats and ninjutsu that the protagonist had mastered before. After the protagonist's ability improves, I can separately introduce the protagonist's ninjutsu. The above is my summary of the book so far. I hope it can help you. Ghana (wish the author better and better)

A very good Naruto fanfic, but the little guy who controls the big guy is just a loser and then offends the new owner to keep the woman. She is still an insignificant woman and is extremely poisonous. If you can see, you can see, but it is impossible to give a gift.

It's not bad. Although it's a bit frustrating at the beginning, it's because the protagonist is too weak. There's nothing wrong with him. He also has his own calculations. After Hanzo's death and his strength increased, it became more and more beautiful, but it was too little and not enough to watch.

The history of a small person's fame is very immersive. The little person is lustful, takes advantage of small things, keeps a small notebook, but he can stand upright in his stance. The final result of the article is good. It is rare for Nagato to succeed. It is a good novel, bye👋🏻

I feel like the writing is good. It seems to be following Xiaonan's emotional line, but there is no emotional development point. The writing gets worse and worse, but the protagonist still has a non-growth character. The protagonist seems to be growing up and getting stronger. The author seems to be watching Naruto through beanbags [laughs]

The first three masterpieces of Naruto fandom, first of all, the combat power did not collapse, and it did not collapse every second at the beginning. The strength gradually increased as the plot went on. The presence of Goldfinger is relatively low. It is not a saint, not bad, and it is worth watching.

It's very good. It's one of the better Naruto movies. If it can be completed smoothly Then the cover doesn't look very good, I suggest you change it to another one.

The whole novel up to the latest chapter, chapter 58, is quite smooth. It was stated earlier that God rewards those who work hard, but it was not clearly stated in the subsequent writing. The path of an ordinary ninja is okay, but not exciting enough. The upgrade process is not obvious enough. I give you a five-star review. Come on, it's best to update more every day. If you can't keep up with the content, it's easy to get lost.

The protagonist's cheating is appropriate. He assisted the Akatsuki organization to win the Ninja War and then retreated bravely. In the end, his wife and children were on the hot bed. I hope the author will write a sequel. There is foreshadowing that Sasuke is gone, Naruto is still growing, and Toneri is waiting for Hinata.

Yes, there is a point of cheating to suppress the combat power, but the plot progression logic is good. (Spoiler) The protagonist takes in another woman. Is it simply to find conditions to restrain the invincible divine power? Otherwise, it always feels weird.

Compared with the clichéd cool and systematic novels in the early years, this book focuses more on the description of characters. The protagonist is an acquaintance and can have a good relationship with anyone. The description of daily life is impeccable. There are no poisonous points in the first 200,000 words and there are no logical flaws. It is a pretty good book.

Among the Naruto books I have read in Qidian and Tomato, this one is also of high quality. The plot is very attractive, the logic is clear, and there is no water. You can read it with your brain [smile][smile][smile]