In this world, every student has the opportunity to summon a piece of space debris and become a lord.
The spaces that others summoned were nothing more than mountains, forests, wilderness, deserts and snowfields, while the space fragments that Wang Jue summoned were Tushita Palace. The other lords' trump cards were eight hundred dragon knights and three thousand golems, while Wang Jue's trump card was - Teacher, save me!
Reader comments
The writing is actually pretty good. Maybe it's because Xianyu's first book was so amazing, but this one is a bit mediocre in comparison. The genre of this book is quite different from the first one, so the gap in the minds of old readers will be relatively large. The author's strength is still there, but I don't know why the books he wrote later are not popular. I suspect it was caused by capital (but to be honest, I still prefer Wang Yu's book. I was really guarding the update at that time. The sudden death is really uncomfortable. Can it be resurrected, or another book of the same type will be published.
Brother, why don't you try to make some changes and repost it? ? ? ? This is really a one-in-a-ten thousand masterpiece that I found out from a mountain of shit! ! ! It may be a bit discouraging to choose such a small territory when awakening, but you can completely change it and lay some foreshadowing to attract people! For example, I asked for the picture of Laojun and hid it between the small picture and the Tushita Palace, implying that that one will be used as the real kingdom of God later!
Basically, I don't want to read most of Tomato's books after just one glance at the introduction, but your subject matter is really good! And the writing style is also good. After modification, the introduction can be slightly enriched and the following content can be introduced more. Many people will definitely read it! ! ! !
The writing is actually pretty good. Maybe it's because Xianyu's first book was so amazing, but this one is a bit mediocre in comparison. The genre of this book is quite different from the first one, so the gap in the minds of old readers will be relatively large. The author's strength is still there, but I don't know why the books he wrote later are not popular. I suspect it was caused by capital (but to be honest, I still prefer Wang Yu's book. I was really guarding the update at that time. The sudden death is really uncomfortable. Can it be resurrected, or another book of the same type will be published.
Brother, why don't you try to make some changes and repost it? ? ? ? This is really a one-in-a-ten thousand masterpiece that I found out from a mountain of shit! ! ! It may be a bit discouraging to choose such a small territory when awakening, but you can completely change it and lay some foreshadowing to attract people! For example, I asked for the picture of Laojun and hid it between the small picture and the Tushita Palace, implying that that one will be used as the real kingdom of God later! Basically, I don't want to read most of Tomato's books after just one glance at the introduction, but your subject matter is really good! And the writing style is also good. After modification, the introduction can be slightly enriched and the following content can be introduced more. Many people will definitely read it! ! ! !
It's high-end but has a low sense of presence