I Submitted the Myriad Worlds Gate, Though I've Already Become One with the Dao

The aspect of Shen and Tian Dao is quite good, but the protagonist you described is not strong at all and is too weak. I have already written about Shen and Tian Dao as omnipotent and omniscient, but in the end, there is no feeling of being strong at all.

Writing this kind of article has to come into contact with that bullshit Liu Qianqian. I really can't say it. It's really poisonous. Many books are like this. Others are nothing. I'm really speechless. How do those two people have the qualifications to come in?

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It's pretty good, I like it a lot. It's just that there's too much written about the first world. Can you open the second one faster? Overall it's pretty good. There's also a little less written about foreigners in the main world. They're written too friendly and I kind of look down on them.

I remembered. I have read this. I checked and it was updated in November. It seems that this author posted it repeatedly, or he copied it directly. Absolutely, what he wrote later is very low-IQ, and he looks like an idiot.

Generally speaking, it is not recommended for those who like to watch harems and so on! The protagonist has no system, and the author thinks that the protagonist's ability on the Blue Star is very awesome, but he behaves like a loser. This ability is the same as nothing else. So far, there is nothing particularly attractive about it! 🙂🙂🙂

Let me talk about it here. His name is a bit of a scam. The river we think of is the river in the realm of cultivation. But in fact, it is the harmony of spirit and soul. From the perspective of the world of the protagonist, the harmony of spirit and soul is not much better. I don't know if the way of heaven is small world consciousness.

Nima, a mixed martial arts world says that guns and artillery shells cannot be used. Doesn't it mean that gunpowder cannot be ignited? Gunpowder is made of cotton, and the cannonball can be fired but not exploded. Why, the primer can ignite, but the gunpowder in the projectile cannot ignite? Isn't that a joke? If the gunpowder made of cotton cannot be ignited, doesn't it mean that the fire cannot be ignited? That person doesn't need to eat anymore.

It felt pretty good. The mixed martial arts part was pretty good to watch. Overall, it looked very smooth. The main character was too quick to have no desires. I saw too few expressions of the seven emotions and six desires. It seemed that all of a sudden he had no worldly desires and only wanted to expand the world 🤦

It's to my liking, especially the section about the committee. What I'm looking forward to is that after the protagonist joins the alliance, I hope he won't take too much care of the Dragon Kingdom. Just keep one super and multiple powers, and don't overdo it so that other powerful countries can catch up when they encounter big opportunities. This way the book will be much more durable. This book will probably invade the world and become powerful enough to develop itself. If the Dragon Kingdom crushes other countries, it will feel boring after reading it for a long time. The life of this book will be much shorter. The Dragon Kingdom is basically too smooth, and it doesn't mean it's too difficult. We can make some that are weaker than the Dragon Kingdom, but not much weaker, so we can fight with each other. This way, it's mainly too smooth and has no memory points (no memory points will make readers feel as if they haven't watched it). For example, in the mixed martial arts, there can be more descriptions of strong men and more games. Don't let the world go by too fast. As for the protagonist, I think it will be fine to grasp the general direction after joining the road. As long as it does not infringe the interests or cause a big crisis, there will be no consequences. Let the country do it on its own. After all, it has never experienced any hardships and is just a flower in a greenhouse. The protagonist can also be moved to the semi-background (to be honest, when I saw the latest chapter, I didn't even know if the first world was a world of resistance). How should I put it? I feel a little awkward now. The perspective of this book, which is about the protagonist's state of being inhuman and unnatural, guided me to read this book from the perspective of heaven. Since it is from the perspective of heaven, the protagonist has too much humanity, so it makes the reading very uncomfortable and even a bit awkward. It's not that there is anything wrong with the author's view of the world from the perspective of heaven, but that it is stuck in a middle position without a complete transformation. The author's writing style is a bit lame. It feels like the author wants to write but knows how to write but can't. This makes the later updates so awkward. My suggestion is that since you want to change the reader's perspective towards the way of heaven, you have to change the character of the protagonist. In subsequent chapters, slowly weaken the proportion of human nature. This is also reasonable. After all, how can the river not affect the proportion of human nature by about 20%? You can also increase the human nature in a short period of time by chance. The Dragon Kingdom can develop into a helper for the development of the world, while other countries are helpers for the Dragon Kingdom. Of course, how to write it depends on what the author thinks. I am just providing suggestions.