When everyone's memory can be tampered with, who will speak for the deceased? In a desperate situation where the truth is reversed and trust collapses, the only thing Chen Xu can rely on is the last broken memory left in the ashes of his late wife Lin Wan...
Reader comments
The story has developed to the present, and the structure is relatively complete. It alternates between the present main line and the past timeline. The past timeline is responsible for adding some secrets about the eternal memory project. The current timeline uses multiple perspectives, the protagonist's perspective and the villain's perspective, etc., To make the story development more complete and clear. Because it is my first time to write a long novel, I am not very skilled in character creation, so I will give a 4-star self-evaluation. Finally, readers are welcome to comment and correct my shortcomings!!!
The plot is compact, full of ups and downs, and has a strong sense of immersion. The viewers will also become nervous. The author does not delay the manuscript and updates the next one just after reading the previous one, so the plot is very coherent when reading.
The plot development is compact, the rhythm is controlled appropriately, and there are exciting points in the exciting places. Be optimistic about the author and keep up the good work!
The story has developed to the present, and the structure is relatively complete. It alternates between the present main line and the past timeline. The past timeline is responsible for adding some secrets about the eternal memory project. The current timeline uses multiple perspectives, the protagonist's perspective and the villain's perspective, etc., To make the story development more complete and clear. Because it is my first time to write a long novel, I am not very skilled in character creation, so I will give a 4-star self-evaluation. Finally, readers are welcome to comment and correct my shortcomings!!!
The plot is compact, full of ups and downs, and has a strong sense of immersion. The viewers will also become nervous. The author does not delay the manuscript and updates the next one just after reading the previous one, so the plot is very coherent when reading.
The plot development is compact, the rhythm is controlled appropriately, and there are exciting points in the exciting places. Be optimistic about the author and keep up the good work!