[Urban] [Daily] [Light Power] [Multiple Heroines] [No System]
I let it go.
Saying goodbye to eight years of humility, I thought my life was finally at peace.
Until——
"Hey, whoever allows you to sleep on the sofa, come in!"
That arrogant blond school beauty, while despising me for being "clumsy," arrogantly thrust the keys to the villa and her entire world into my hand.
"I've been peeking for ten years. Now, can it be my turn?"
The always quiet girl with glasses in the drama club silently prepared a script for ten years and performed it just for me.
But why did I look at her wrong one time?
"What are you hiding? Why doesn't my ability work on you?"
"I want your past, present, and future."
"Kill me if you can."
"..."
The moment you let go of your obsession, the gates of the world suddenly opened.
What surges forward is their unabashed preference, almost paranoid dedication, and possessiveness that is so strong that there is nowhere to escape.
This time, the one being chased is me.
Reader comments
I just added it to the bookshelf today and finished it all in one night. I really listen to the author's stories more than most authors [like]. Although there are many shortcomings, I read it as a sweet article and it was a sweet treat for me. Since there are multiple female protagonists, do you still accept them? It looks like there is something hidden. I want to see Lao Ye regret chasing her husband and atone for her sins. I wonder how devastated Lao Ye will be if she knows that Lin has chased her for eight years. In fact, she recognized the wrong person [laughs] Looking forward to the Shura field between Golden Retriever and Lao Ye. Currently, Golden Retriever and Prison Leaf are one of the motivations for me to continue pursuing them. Of course, the author of Xiangxiang Ruanruan is also one of them [lick screen]
This is my first time posting a comment. To be honest, I think it's not bad, but it looks weird. The plot is a bit confusing. There are too many characters at the beginning. The introduction of the names feels like a blur and I can't remember it clearly. But overall it's very interesting. I watched it all night for two nights and saw the latest episode. I hope you can continue to work hard.
What is the new chapter talking about? It feels weird. The sudden introduction of superpowers feels a bit deliberate, a bit inconsistent, and very strange. Also, when is the previous heroine planning to appear again? Isn't she going to keep writing about this kind of superpower battle [what] Come on, author, I hope the writing will get better and better, and the book will be seen by more people [Chigua]
The problem is a bit smaller. One is that the scenes of your brothers in the early stage are already more than the scenes of the heroine. Very affecting the perception
The other one is really like AI polishing. Did you really write this paragraph yourself? Too many modifiers, messy metaphors, and incomprehensible analysis.
"He leaned down, almost putting his face in front of Lin Mu, and with his eyes comparable to those of a criminal investigation expert, he carefully examined the scratches that were extremely clear and even bloodshot.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk," Zhou Zhixin touched his chin and began his professional analysis, "Interesting, really interesting. "
He stretched out his index finger and touched the most obvious mark on Lin Mu's cheek: "Look at this fingerprint, the joints are clear, the force is even, and the end is slightly raised - indicating that the attacker struck from the front, with an angry blow, but the finger force was well controlled, not scratching randomly. The nails are rounded and of moderate length. She is a little beauty who pays attention to appearance and is even a little delicate. "
His finger moved to another shallower trace: "Looking at this one again, the trend is a little hasty and the strength is a little weaker, more like a follow-up pursuit. Taken together..."
Zhou Zhixin straightened up, with a knowing and enigmatic smile on his face, and concluded to the other two roommates who were holding their breath:
"Yesterday I also played cosplay, pretending to be Hello Kitty. I did touch up my makeup today - it's a fresh set of 'Wild Little Cat Limited Edition' with a health bar. ""
Actually I don't care much about ai. Just use it. But the story rhythm problem is more serious. The brothers' scenes collide with the heroine's scenes. It feels like the author wants to write about men more than women
The content is very good, and the daily writing is good. However, the dungeon plot comes too suddenly and is a bit abrupt. However, if it is separated separately, the dungeon plot is also eye-catching, but the impact is not particularly great. I still like it better. The author may consider writing a rules-based novel.
Yes, I originally thought it was a classic husband-chasing crematorium, but I didn't expect it to be a sweet love story. After seeing this, I gave the author some suggestions. In fact, the author can change the title to a very attractive title. The title and subject matter are definitely a killer for attracting readers on Tomato. The writing can be practiced slowly, but it is very painful for readers not to read it. The content of the article is actually quite good on Tomato, so I won't go into details. Many comments said that the author wrote a copy before, but I didn't see it (because (Changed for the author), which must be the main reason for the decline in traffic. After all, it is really awkward to intersperse inexplicable superpowers in sweet articles. Speaking of characters, generally speaking, they all have their own merits, but the author did not go too deep into the characters. Golden Retriever The character is still tsundere (not completely), there is no contrast. The male protagonist's character, well, how should I put it, has a very mixed feeling. You said it's a little tender, a little pure love, and a little astringent. Overall, the character of the male protagonist is not new. Obviously, he does not have a main character that is memorable. It is easy to forget and it is difficult for readers to get involved. Moreover, one point that the author cannot ignore is that although romance novels are easy to write, they cannot only be sweet and sweet. Reasonable incident conflicts will make the story development more vivid and make it easier to promote the development of events. Having said so much, it is actually because the author's writing is pretty good and has the desire to be read. There was such a novel before. When I read it, no one read it at all, but later I heard from readers The comments are slowly being written, and there are more readers and more rewards. In fact, as long as the author writes well, no matter how bleak the data of the book is, you will still have some book friends who like you. Writing a book is not only to serve the readers, but also to serve yourself and make yourself feel happy. People who read the book will also feel your emotions. Every failure lays the foundation for success. No matter good or bad, it is nourishment for your growth. As long as you keep writing, you will see the moonlight through the clouds. Come on, come on.
Give some encouragement
At least AI is not used, and the authors are very active in updating and interacting.
The plot is not very conventional, it just doesn't feel appropriate, or should I say decent? Some things seem to come up on the head without considering its reality.
The male protagonist is too impulsive, even reckless. On the positive side, it has a youthful vibe [face covering]
Looking at the current and new chapters, it feels like there are multiple female protagonists. Because Bai Guangyue's appearance frequency is no less than that of the heroine, or even more than that of the heroine. She appears in almost every chapter, but the heroine does not appear in every chapter. In addition to these two, there is also a third woman who seems to have emotional entanglements.
The male protagonist, his friends, and friends around Bai Guangyue have always emphasized that they have been chasing her for 8 years. But falling in love does not mean that you should be given an equal response if you chase someone for a long time. It can be said that the woman Bai Yueguang has been riding a donkey to find a horse, but it is understandable, which means that the male protagonist is not interested.
It's really good. I don't know why the rating is so low. What's written after chapter 143? What kind of copy? After the changes, the plot is completely incomprehensible, but the overall content is really good.
The writing is quite good and has a funny and light-hearted style. The male protagonist and the Golden Retriever are really happy friends. I think about 3 female protagonists are good. Based on the abstract character of the male protagonist, it can be a sweet love in the early stage, and occasionally torture the male protagonist in the Shura Field in the later stage.
I think it's okay, but do you still accept the school beauty? , The description is good, if you want to write fantasy now, change the name: Just after breaking up with the school beauty, the strange story of rules comes, and the transition of the first 100 chapters is indicated at the beginning of the book, I hope there will be more creativity in the future
If you want to accept it, raise the IQ of the school beauty, make the school beauty black, which is very powerful in the rules and ghost stories, let the male protagonist take the initiative to approach the school beauty, and explain why he disagrees with the male protagonist, and soften the relationship between the male protagonist and the school beauty
The content is quite substantial and the writing style is pretty good, at least better than most authors. However, the title is too confusing. I feel that a different name would be much better (personal opinion)
Well, not bad! The characters in it are well written, and the emotional lines are also rich. It would be nice to have a little career line.
It's not AI, nor is it a template. Lively and interesting
It looks good so far
[Shy] I want to collect them all. Good luck to the author.
In addition, other authors are writing about the era of the emperor's uncle. They advise the authors to join a group and enter the small dark room together to ensure traffic, and then strengthen Lian. There is also a long press on the book to generate character AI pictures to attract readers. I will leave everything to you. I hope to strengthen Lian and Golden Retriever [shy]
Still very good
Very good, I hope I can write it down
A very nice book
It's a little messy after the change, but it's not bad
I looked pretty happy from the beginning, but after the warehouse was closed for more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. At least I didn't do any particularly bad work. I'll give it four stars.
Not bad, sometimes the data depends on luck
Kick me when the book is sealed
I give this author five stars, good luck with the novel.
I haven't read the copy, but it's pretty good after the modifications.
If you like abstract and literary style, you can buy it
What does the plot mean?
Come on, it's very well written [Blow a kiss] It's so beautiful
How should I put it? It's a pity that it's not a single female protagonist. [Chigua] It's quite difficult to control the rhythm with multiple female protagonists.
It looks good. Do you still have the copy at the back? Although I would rather watch the daily routine, how can I fill in some of the pitfalls in the front [face covering]
After the copy was changed, it looked good as a sweet article.
It's quite good-looking, but since this is the first time for the author to write a book, he's a bit immature. It's good to be a science fiction writer for a while.
I just added it to the bookshelf today and finished it all in one night. I really listen to the author's stories more than most authors [like]. Although there are many shortcomings, I read it as a sweet article and it was a sweet treat for me. Since there are multiple female protagonists, do you still accept them? It looks like there is something hidden. I want to see Lao Ye regret chasing her husband and atone for her sins. I wonder how devastated Lao Ye will be if she knows that Lin has chased her for eight years. In fact, she recognized the wrong person [laughs] Looking forward to the Shura field between Golden Retriever and Lao Ye. Currently, Golden Retriever and Prison Leaf are one of the motivations for me to continue pursuing them. Of course, the author of Xiangxiang Ruanruan is also one of them [lick screen]
This is my first time posting a comment. To be honest, I think it's not bad, but it looks weird. The plot is a bit confusing. There are too many characters at the beginning. The introduction of the names feels like a blur and I can't remember it clearly. But overall it's very interesting. I watched it all night for two nights and saw the latest episode. I hope you can continue to work hard. What is the new chapter talking about? It feels weird. The sudden introduction of superpowers feels a bit deliberate, a bit inconsistent, and very strange. Also, when is the previous heroine planning to appear again? Isn't she going to keep writing about this kind of superpower battle [what] Come on, author, I hope the writing will get better and better, and the book will be seen by more people [Chigua]
The problem is a bit smaller. One is that the scenes of your brothers in the early stage are already more than the scenes of the heroine. Very affecting the perception The other one is really like AI polishing. Did you really write this paragraph yourself? Too many modifiers, messy metaphors, and incomprehensible analysis. "He leaned down, almost putting his face in front of Lin Mu, and with his eyes comparable to those of a criminal investigation expert, he carefully examined the scratches that were extremely clear and even bloodshot. "Tsk, tsk, tsk," Zhou Zhixin touched his chin and began his professional analysis, "Interesting, really interesting. " He stretched out his index finger and touched the most obvious mark on Lin Mu's cheek: "Look at this fingerprint, the joints are clear, the force is even, and the end is slightly raised - indicating that the attacker struck from the front, with an angry blow, but the finger force was well controlled, not scratching randomly. The nails are rounded and of moderate length. She is a little beauty who pays attention to appearance and is even a little delicate. " His finger moved to another shallower trace: "Looking at this one again, the trend is a little hasty and the strength is a little weaker, more like a follow-up pursuit. Taken together..." Zhou Zhixin straightened up, with a knowing and enigmatic smile on his face, and concluded to the other two roommates who were holding their breath: "Yesterday I also played cosplay, pretending to be Hello Kitty. I did touch up my makeup today - it's a fresh set of 'Wild Little Cat Limited Edition' with a health bar. "" Actually I don't care much about ai. Just use it. But the story rhythm problem is more serious. The brothers' scenes collide with the heroine's scenes. It feels like the author wants to write about men more than women
The content is very good, and the daily writing is good. However, the dungeon plot comes too suddenly and is a bit abrupt. However, if it is separated separately, the dungeon plot is also eye-catching, but the impact is not particularly great. I still like it better. The author may consider writing a rules-based novel.
Yes, I originally thought it was a classic husband-chasing crematorium, but I didn't expect it to be a sweet love story. After seeing this, I gave the author some suggestions. In fact, the author can change the title to a very attractive title. The title and subject matter are definitely a killer for attracting readers on Tomato. The writing can be practiced slowly, but it is very painful for readers not to read it. The content of the article is actually quite good on Tomato, so I won't go into details. Many comments said that the author wrote a copy before, but I didn't see it (because (Changed for the author), which must be the main reason for the decline in traffic. After all, it is really awkward to intersperse inexplicable superpowers in sweet articles. Speaking of characters, generally speaking, they all have their own merits, but the author did not go too deep into the characters. Golden Retriever The character is still tsundere (not completely), there is no contrast. The male protagonist's character, well, how should I put it, has a very mixed feeling. You said it's a little tender, a little pure love, and a little astringent. Overall, the character of the male protagonist is not new. Obviously, he does not have a main character that is memorable. It is easy to forget and it is difficult for readers to get involved. Moreover, one point that the author cannot ignore is that although romance novels are easy to write, they cannot only be sweet and sweet. Reasonable incident conflicts will make the story development more vivid and make it easier to promote the development of events. Having said so much, it is actually because the author's writing is pretty good and has the desire to be read. There was such a novel before. When I read it, no one read it at all, but later I heard from readers The comments are slowly being written, and there are more readers and more rewards. In fact, as long as the author writes well, no matter how bleak the data of the book is, you will still have some book friends who like you. Writing a book is not only to serve the readers, but also to serve yourself and make yourself feel happy. People who read the book will also feel your emotions. Every failure lays the foundation for success. No matter good or bad, it is nourishment for your growth. As long as you keep writing, you will see the moonlight through the clouds. Come on, come on.
Give some encouragement At least AI is not used, and the authors are very active in updating and interacting. The plot is not very conventional, it just doesn't feel appropriate, or should I say decent? Some things seem to come up on the head without considering its reality. The male protagonist is too impulsive, even reckless. On the positive side, it has a youthful vibe [face covering]
Looking at the current and new chapters, it feels like there are multiple female protagonists. Because Bai Guangyue's appearance frequency is no less than that of the heroine, or even more than that of the heroine. She appears in almost every chapter, but the heroine does not appear in every chapter. In addition to these two, there is also a third woman who seems to have emotional entanglements. The male protagonist, his friends, and friends around Bai Guangyue have always emphasized that they have been chasing her for 8 years. But falling in love does not mean that you should be given an equal response if you chase someone for a long time. It can be said that the woman Bai Yueguang has been riding a donkey to find a horse, but it is understandable, which means that the male protagonist is not interested.
It's really good. I don't know why the rating is so low. What's written after chapter 143? What kind of copy? After the changes, the plot is completely incomprehensible, but the overall content is really good.
The writing is quite good and has a funny and light-hearted style. The male protagonist and the Golden Retriever are really happy friends. I think about 3 female protagonists are good. Based on the abstract character of the male protagonist, it can be a sweet love in the early stage, and occasionally torture the male protagonist in the Shura Field in the later stage.
I think it's okay, but do you still accept the school beauty? , The description is good, if you want to write fantasy now, change the name: Just after breaking up with the school beauty, the strange story of rules comes, and the transition of the first 100 chapters is indicated at the beginning of the book, I hope there will be more creativity in the future If you want to accept it, raise the IQ of the school beauty, make the school beauty black, which is very powerful in the rules and ghost stories, let the male protagonist take the initiative to approach the school beauty, and explain why he disagrees with the male protagonist, and soften the relationship between the male protagonist and the school beauty
The content is quite substantial and the writing style is pretty good, at least better than most authors. However, the title is too confusing. I feel that a different name would be much better (personal opinion)
Well, not bad! The characters in it are well written, and the emotional lines are also rich. It would be nice to have a little career line.
It's not AI, nor is it a template. Lively and interesting
It looks good so far
[Shy] I want to collect them all. Good luck to the author. In addition, other authors are writing about the era of the emperor's uncle. They advise the authors to join a group and enter the small dark room together to ensure traffic, and then strengthen Lian. There is also a long press on the book to generate character AI pictures to attract readers. I will leave everything to you. I hope to strengthen Lian and Golden Retriever [shy]
Still very good
Very good, I hope I can write it down
A very nice book
It's a little messy after the change, but it's not bad
I looked pretty happy from the beginning, but after the warehouse was closed for more than 20 chapters, I really couldn't stand it anymore. At least I didn't do any particularly bad work. I'll give it four stars.
Not bad, sometimes the data depends on luck
Kick me when the book is sealed
I give this author five stars, good luck with the novel.
I haven't read the copy, but it's pretty good after the modifications.
If you like abstract and literary style, you can buy it What does the plot mean?
Come on, it's very well written [Blow a kiss] It's so beautiful
How should I put it? It's a pity that it's not a single female protagonist. [Chigua] It's quite difficult to control the rhythm with multiple female protagonists.
It looks good. Do you still have the copy at the back? Although I would rather watch the daily routine, how can I fill in some of the pitfalls in the front [face covering]
After the copy was changed, it looked good as a sweet article.
It's quite good-looking, but since this is the first time for the author to write a book, he's a bit immature. It's good to be a science fiction writer for a while.