Broken Iron*****

Ouch, not enough, not enough. The character should continue to be simple. After unexpectedly waking up, the idiot sister only wanted to find her sister. When passing by Ompharos, she accidentally got involved in the conspiracy between her son and his father. After resisting to no avail and falling into a deep sleep, the reincarnation ended and she became the head of the Iron Curtain, because The obsession to find his sister affected the Iron Curtain. During the final battle, the Iron Curtain was affected. He came to the space station under gunfire and drew a dying stroke. Under the slightly confused expression of Heita, he was given the final blow by the space station. Before his body collapsed, he called out "Little Tower". But it was always the Iron Curtain, it was just the obsession and memories of some idiot sisters. But Heita lost her sister once again. This is the real knife, it looks like it has been molded by roast chicken [laughing evilly] [full] [cool]

It's really beautiful. Men are menstruating, and women are going insane. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so good that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so good that tears flow out of the corners of their mouths and flood into the Qiantang River. It was so beautiful. It was God who was my rose. It illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, and I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor. It made me realize that God does exist. I was so good that I couldn't stop crying from then on [smile]

Baida's character design is very interesting. I think the combination of power and stupidity is rare. Because you want to protect, you have to be powerful, and you are stupid so you don't abuse your power (destroying evaporated water is considered a reasonable use of life) Please be sure to keep writing. It would be better if you could write more every day. It's so beautiful and I love reading it [Thinking]

Marvelous! The Dark Tower chapter made me cry, and the Silver Wolf chapter made me full of blood.

It's good to watch. It would be great if there could be more scenes with the Black Tower. I want to watch it. Could you please stop wearing wigs all the time, otherwise stop describing them all the time. What the author depicts is no longer a stupid beauty, but a naughty child. If she were a different person, she would be accepted. If you are either causing trouble or on the way to it, you will be punished and then continue next time. If it weren't for the author's big hand to force the Black Tower OOC, the True Black Tower would not tolerate such a naughty child.

When you update, the subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be magnified. Astringency will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the plot progresses Exhibition is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the slightest praise starts to sound, and the dead numbers are collected. Volume begins to decline. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voice of praise will The sound became louder and louder. When you were at the tenth watch, the scholar's debate was deafening, and his tolerant attitude was deafening. The degree is implemented internally and externally. When you are twenty, the bookworm's memories have a place for you, that is Even in a long life, your name will leave a dazzling mark traces. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of them The problem all comes from insufficient updates. Quick! Point! Even! New!

Hahahaha, the knife is so delicious, so sweet [crying] [crying] [crying] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Hahahaha, don't pull me, I'm not crazy hahahahahaha

No matter what, the fox barked and kept the promise. Then there are serious book reviews. Ahem, because they are daily scenes, Black Tower and Silver Wolf are more lively and life-like compared to the original. This makes me feel a little OOC, but not annoying. After all, such a black tower makes me feel more like a human being. Especially the life part at the beginning. Then, oh Nei Gai, let Miss Baida lead Silver Wolf to win once and for all. Baida and Silver Wolf can win for once while watching Heita's angry but helpless expression.

My personal opinion is very good, it is a very touching plot to sacrifice everything for your sister. The only drawback is that the update is very slow, please learn from the donkeys of the production team. The two parts of the plot related to the sister may have ended relatively quickly, but the knife was not harsh enough.

The Dark Tower chapter is very well written, but after all, a fan story needs to be protected by the protagonist. If the Dark Tower is weak or not very smart, it should be treated as a private design. But the Silver Wolf chapter is a bit deliberate about sacrificing for the sake of sacrifice, stepping on the traps even though they know it, and being eager to make money. The reason for stepping on the traps is not very clear to em. According to the strength of Silver Wolf and the protagonist, it can easily earn a lot of credits in a little time. Unless the author clearly understands that Silver Wolf's mother is seriously ill, critical, needs to be treated immediately, and is in urgent need of money, otherwise the logic does not make sense that she would step on the traps even though she knows there are traps. But it will still be sweet to meet you later

If the author looks more at the equations of differential universe and human comedy, and deepens the connections and tendencies between multiple fates, he may be able to get some inspiration that can later allow Baida to perfectly integrate multiple fates. Time travel can draw on dimensionality reduction, which can explain that the protagonist knows some plots (high-dimensional observers glimpse a corner of the future), and the system is the embodiment of the essence of high-dimensional life personalities. It will feel smoother. I have some understanding that I hope can help the author: Star God no longer has the characteristics of life, but is a collection of concepts. The destiny is an abstraction of actions and motivations. Therefore, "humans" cannot become star gods. Gods are fixed by concepts, but humans exist for purposes (and therefore can embark on different paths of destiny). Based on Ompharos, I predict a wave: mortals in the world will set off a huge wave of awakening, and the Star God is dead or can only become a spiritual symbol and cannot interfere. Has the product come out yet? God is dead, Nietzsche, the active nihilist True self, id, superego. What's interesting is that the true self seeks strength from nothingness to complete salvation. Haki Fox🦊, what do you think? I feel like it's best to explain time travel earlier, as the system is the best.

Although I am relieved that Baida has changed from a naughty child back to a gentle sister. When Baida was a naughty child, she was too unrestrained and willful compared with her before. The overall style of the work has changed too much, and negative reviews are expected. But personally, I would feel it would be a pity if this kind of Baida would no longer appear. In addition to the gentle Baida who loves his sister in front of the Black Tower, the new Baida who enjoys happiness when playing outside... And the purely rational Baida who replaced the Black Tower and became the Iron Curtain (?)

It's very generous. From the first chapter to the latest chapter, I just don't know why the rating is so low. It's so good-looking. I thought it was because the author didn't write well, but the author's writing is very attractive [Sending Hearts]

Wow, it's really beautiful, another excellent book by Beng Tie~

So far, it's very, very good-looking and to my liking, but maybe because I watched it consistently, I didn't cry in Wolf, but I cried twice in Tower [laughs]

The Black Tower chapter is so well written and so sharp! [Crying] What a great knife!

It's good-looking, and the Black Tower chapter is very touching. But I remember that the protagonist is not a Bengtie player. By Chapter 27, it seems that he no longer recognizes Xing. Maybe I read it wrong before, and the protagonist's memory will be deleted or something?

So cool! Nowadays, when many novels use AI, authors are still using their hands! At least I can't tell the AI flavor All I can say is that the author is N*! ! ! It's fun to show it to my buddies [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Very nice, very nice [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss] The characters are lively, cute and funny (=^▽^=)

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Turn on the automatic "praise" mode of the remote puppet: Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world! (Great!) Ms. Heita is extremely smart! (So awesome!) Ms. Black Tower is in trouble! (She is so beautiful~) Ah~ the black tower makes me so beautiful~ (woohoo)

That's fine, just pure sweetness. Very suitable for enjoying the beauty [admiration] Is the author almost finished?

It looks good, it's my favorite style, I'll give it a thumbs up [Adore][Adore]

A very good book recommendation

It's pretty, don't lie, how could a kitten lie to you [Sending Hearts]

The quality is not low (for readers who like this kind of subject matter) the update speed is guaranteed, and the most important thing is that the author is very cute [blowing kiss] Fox, come on o( ❛ᴗ❛ )o

The content inside is very good and sweet. No knife.

Needless to say, it looks great and I love watching it [Like]

Damn, it's so pretty

Thank you very much, it's really beautiful (♡⌂♡)