Cultivating Immortality Among the Stars of the Future

Sorry, I haven't been able to make up for your comment before, so I will make up my comment for you now. First of all, I have read the entire work carefully, and I have a clearer understanding of the entire cultivation system. Although it is relatively ordinary, it is very creative. I still need to praise it. Another point that I must mention is that your paragraphs are not clear enough in some paragraphs. They often consist of one paragraph and one whole page. This makes people a little tired when looking at it. If possible, it is recommended to break it into paragraphs by sentences. This may make it easier to read and improve the reading rate. Well, that's all I have to say. I hope that this little suggestion of mine can be helpful to you. I also wish you and I will make progress together, soar into the sky, and have a rainbow all the way. Thank you. (Don't forget mine)

The author's writing is very good, the plot is also very rich, and the characters are very vivid. The only shortcoming is that it is too short. Please update more ♡(*´∀`*)(*´∀`*)♡