A Guide to Disguising Nobles from Another World

It's a good time-travel novel that I've read so far. The angle is novel. It's just that there's a little too much description and the characters are a little thin. I hope it will continue to develop and the characters will become more fleshed out.

The subject matter is very good. At first, I thought it was like the book about farming in the magical world. After reading it, I realized that it was a fashion show. There was no character story, and it was all about clothes and accessories. I skipped through the book, but I still thought, well, it might not be suitable for me. It's hard to agree with everyone, maybe there are fashion designers or people who like to match clothes, they will like it. [Laugh]

Dada, you are really nb, my mother, you are beautiful, there are many words, and the description is also very beautiful. The language is paragraph by paragraph. It is so cultured, Dada, but I think it would be better to be more concise in some places.

Very well written It's just that your AI usage rate is too high [awkward laughter] To be honest, if you write like this, I can train my AI well and write ten articles like this in a day.

It's amazing, the author is so awesome, the writing style and the aristocratic feeling in the article are extremely pretentious. How can I describe the words that I don't know are powerful? They are amazing.

I'll give it five points first, the writing is similar to Shakespeare's style. The subsequent text descriptions made me feel like I was playing Miracle Nuannuan. In addition, the description of the environment and life was sufficient, and it also showed a lot of settings. It can be seen that it was carefully conceived, but the plot and characters were somewhat submerged under the gorgeous text. I hope the plot can be pushed out as soon as possible, otherwise it will be too tiring to just read the descriptions of clothing without substance.

All I can think about is clothes.

To put it bluntly, the description is very good, with a lot of overlapping words, very beautiful and detailed For comparison, when I read other novels, they usually play at 2x speed. For this one, I use 2.8 Or 3. It doesn't affect my reading [face covering]

It's beautiful and very special. It's true that such a writing style probably won't be popular, but just like in the Gala game, no matter how strange the character is, some people will like it. Anyway, it is very special. It would be better if the main storyline could be faster, the character creation could be richer, and the world view could be improved while the logic is reasonable.

Progress: 20 It's still a small seedling. How should I put it? It feels cool to be pretending. There are so many adjectives to describe it, after all, it's about showing off. The heroine is still in the magical world, and there has never been a golden finger system. She is still a little panicked, fearing that it will suddenly explode. At present, it has been recognized by the elves, and I look forward to the follow-up, so don't break your vest.

The author has grasped the core of the subject matter, and as long as it does not deviate from the core later, it will look good.

This is the first time I read this kind of article, it's strange

It's beautiful. I haven't updated it for a long time. Isn't this book about to be written?

It looks good (○｀ε´○) and feels like being in Miracle Continent

The writing is quite detailed, the descriptions are beautiful, and the world view is not bad, not bad.

The language is gorgeous, the concept is exquisite, and the writing is good [like][like]