Abyss*********

So far, I can score 90 points. The plot is relatively smooth and the rhythm is well controlled. Except for some problems with the characters and some minor cognitive flaws in some plots, there are no big problems in logic, character IQ and plot, and there are no very obvious loopholes. It is still worth reading.

Love this book so much! The level awakening of Yu Yu is mythical level. The scenes of fighting monsters are well described and it gives an immersive feeling. Yu Yu is really strong and invincible. He can quickly complete the dungeon and set a record. It is really cool! As for team formation, Yu Ze mostly did it alone, and there were not many team members. Moreover, he teamed up with Xia Xiaoyu. At the beginning, he only formed a team because of Xiaoyu's props, which did not affect Yu Ze. Later, he only came out occasionally and did not form a team to enter the dungeon.

This book is really enjoyable to read. It has no word count and no pretentiousness. It really ranks among the top three online books. I am not qualified to comment, I can only give you five stars. I have followed you and hope that the author can write better and better😁. . Come on Ollie. . . The sense of immersion is so strong, I feel like I am the protagonist. . . Enjoyable. .

Please, write more! It's really, really, really, really, really, really cool and beautiful. I really, really, really love this book. The setting really, really, really impressed me. Can you please write ten chapters in one day? !

It's okay, the protagonist is a bit invincible, and I haven't seen any brainless villains so far, so I can pass the time when I'm bored.

Yes, at least going to school this time is really useful or quite helpful, unlike other books where the protagonist goes to college and is basically useless.

It's super beautiful, I really like it. The writing is exquisite, the pace is not sluggish, and the characters have distinct personalities!

[Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] It's beautiful, the writing is really good, the rhythm of writing is first-rate, and the plot is wonderful. It's a rare and good article

I haven't found any problems so far. I like the character design and the plot. I would like to support it with five stars!

The plot of the story is very good, the overall outline is good, and the writing is also very good. I like it very much!

It's good to watch, everyone should read it. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, the characters are vivid and tense, and the emotions are sincere and touching. It is a masterpiece worth reading in one sitting! Give it 7 stars!

Well, to be honest, I feel that this book has quite a lot of advantages, but the best thing I personally feel is that it is not polished. This is the best quality in the entire novel industry, which shows that I have a pursuit of quality!