Slay the Gods: The Life-and-Death Progress Bar

The world has not been kind to me, why should I sing in return? The heroine Xu Mu admires those who firmly protect in the darkness, but does not want to be them. This is the norm in the world, and such a heroine is real [Like] It's great to read. I'm looking forward to your next book [Blow Kiss]

Let's talk about the advantages first. The first is the heroine's character. I haven't seen much of it, but I can still feel that the author has worked hard to create this heroine. She is good at using her weakness as a mask to protect herself, but she is strong and tenacious enough, and has her own experience and story line. This is very well done! Secondly, Xu Mu is positioned as a character in the original work, with her own world view, rather than looking at the original world as a reader of the original work "Zhan Shen". This makes me feel very comfortable, because her contact with the protagonist group is not abrupt, and she does not know who Lin Qiye is. The "male protagonist" doesn't know what will happen to Cangnan in the future. She just does a lot of "changing the original work" based on her own feelings, which makes me very eager to watch it. I want to know what kind of colors her life and the derivative of the original story can create. I hope that I can continue to shape the heroine's character and never collapse her character! After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the disadvantages. In fact, it is very obvious that the author's writing style is relatively simple. I can feel that the author actually wants to skip some of the original plots quickly. After all, the story is indeed very long. If it develops according to the storyline one by one, it will appear to be procrastinating and suspicious of hydrology. However, some omitted parts are indeed written a bit sloppily and cannot be studied deeply. The "appropriate detail" is not very good. Like the first chapter, it is very attractive to me! But later on, I felt that it was tasteless and it was a pity to abandon it. It was still a matter of writing power. I still hope that it can be relaxed and relaxed. The changes in the major events in the original work here can be transitioned more smoothly. Otherwise, it always feels a bit abrupt. For example, the part about changing Zhao Kongcheng's fate can be rethought, more detailed, and the heroine's abilities can be portrayed more... Well, it's a bit like teaching others to do things... (Dun comes to shield to rebound everything) In short, there is some novelty, but if you want to attract more readers, you still need to work more on the connection of the plot. The above are just some suggestions from me as a reader, nothing more! There is no point-pointing or other meaning! I had already moved the bookshelf, but after reading a section later, I found that there are still merits! Add it back and see again

Very well written! The heroine is very good! Hanging is also very good! [Like] Tell the truth! I was interested in Zhan Shen because I watched the anime... But the novel was too long and I couldn't bear to read it [laughing and crying] But I really like reading fanfics~ But after reading so many books [laughing and crying] it was the first time I finally saw the story of Lin Qiye and the others after they became instructors [laughing and crying]

It's a very good short article. I've written everything that needs to be written. It may be a little bit shabby, but it's not a big problem. It's a very delicious article. There were no big problems with personal equipment, and it was great that everything survived. There is not much description of the sub-CP, only the heroine X Zhou Ping. There is not much information, so hurry up [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]

It's super beautiful. The heroine's highlight moments made me cry so much. It's so touching [crying]

It's really super super super super super super beautiful! The author must work hard and update.

It's very beautiful (>▽<). It's not like other fanfics that made me very embarrassed when I read them...

The novel is okay, it mainly tells the story of the heroine and Zhou Ping. I only gave a rough description of the original plot, which cleared up a lot of regrets, so it was okay.

It's very beautiful, very real, the characters are very good, it has a sense of life, and the setting is also very good

Xu Mu was very easy to cry before she died, but the disadvantage is that the plot went by too fast after Xu Mu was resurrected. But I liked this kind of thing so much that I stayed up two days in a row to finish it.