Blue Day

It is a rare fanfic that goes deep into the student community through the Azure Archives, and the subject matter is relatively new. The protagonist's character is upright, childish and responsible, and the other characters are not particularly OOC. It is very warm every day and can be used as a snack. The disadvantage is that the language needs to be polished. It is enough to repeat some details a few times to highlight the character's personality. There is no need to emphasize the character every time it appears, such as: Kayoko's rabbit doll, habitual frown; Shengya's mysterious smile at the corner of her mouth, etc. Overall, this is a masterpiece worth watching, and you can watch it more comfortably if you ignore some small details.

No matter how you say it, I'm still a bookworm in the fifth grade, having read so many ba fanfics. This is one of the few books that really makes me feel comfortable, not because he writes the best, nor because of how awesome he is. But one of the few that really made me see (Everyday life with you is a miracle) book Come on, the quality of this book will definitely make it popular on Tomato

The writing is vivid and natural, the plot is reasonable, and the content is warm and moving. There is a sense of daily warmth, and the emotional exchanges and reactions between the characters are very much in line with expectations. Unlike most other BA works, the plot does not completely revolve around the plot. The story as a whole is biased towards daily life but not dull. Personally I like this book better

I just found it, watched it all night, and finished it It's quite good-looking, and I like it. I hope the author can keep updating it. [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

I don't understand why such a beautiful book (๑•.•๑) Is not available? 8 Points, not even a rating? Tomato Novels' shit-like promotion is getting stronger again, but I still wish the author good luck! (ง•̀_•́)ง, After all, the public's eyes are sharp. To me, this is a good fanfic.

The writing is good, it is a direction that I have not thought of, and the characters are restored very well, but some areas still need a little polishing. Overall, this book is a high-quality book. In the subject matter of Blue Files, it is more daily.

A BA classic daily work, the reincarnation of Gardenia Dream, a warm-hearted, kind and silly person, you can watch it

The early stage was not very good, but I am looking forward to what will happen later [Like][Like]

It corresponds to my fantasies, and there are some illogical fantasies, but it also corresponds to us. The author is very good. I will continue to work hard and say that it is not very popular, but it is the best and most realistic novel I have ever read.

So I always felt a little weird when I read it at first, but after savoring the daily life in it, the book is very dull, but very warm, ordinary daily life, I like it very much. Other fanfics are either invincible or weird, and there are very few such ordinary daily stories. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The content is very attractive. Although the content looks similar, after careful reading, I found that it has a different flavor. The author is also very active in updating.

As small as my life is...

Still very good.

How shameless! Fine grain

Very good! Keep writing!

Awesome, the back is particularly beautiful Such a wonderful book finally has a rating [crying][crying][crying]

Does anyone want to become a magical girl?

Overall it's pretty good, there are some minor issues like copying text

So far, there aren't many shortcomings, and personally it's still pretty good.

Very nice, very nice. How should I put it? The protagonist of this novel is a student and gets along with him from the perspective of a student.

I personally think this is the best BA article

It's so delicious. I wonder if the author can give it more [smiles]

I watched helplessly as the protagonist tried to drag all the characters' favorability to 100, and I felt so uncomfortable [crying][crying][crying]

If it's not because my brother writes so beautifully, why is there no one here? Although it may be worse than that Ganqi, it can still be ranked in the top five.

There are only a few good BA books that I can really bear to read. Come on.

I am very much looking forward to the plot of Shura Field later on.

The only novel that made me insist on finishing it [laughs]

Not bad, try to have some conflict points

The person who opened the book said yes and said nothing more. I will give you five points for writing well.

Really well written