A Day in Azure

It is a rare fanfic that goes deep into the student community through the Azure Archives, and the subject matter is relatively new. The protagonist's character is upright, childish and responsible, and the other characters are not particularly OOC. It is very warm every day and can be used as a snack. The disadvantage is that the language needs to be polished. It is enough to repeat some details a few times to highlight the character's personality. There is no need to emphasize the character every time it appears, such as: Kayoko's rabbit doll, habitual frown; Shengya's mysterious smile at the corner of her mouth, etc. Overall, this is a masterpiece worth watching, and you can watch it more comfortably if you ignore some small details.

No matter how you say it, I'm still a bookworm in the fifth grade, having read so many ba fanfics. This is one of the few books that really makes me feel comfortable, not because he writes the best, nor because of how awesome he is. But one of the few that really made me see (Everyday life with you is a miracle) book Come on, the quality of this book will definitely make it popular on Tomato

The writing is vivid and natural, the plot is reasonable, and the content is warm and moving. There is a sense of daily warmth, and the emotional exchanges and reactions between the characters are very much in line with expectations. Unlike most other BA works, the plot does not completely revolve around the plot. The story as a whole is biased towards daily life but not dull. Personally I like this book better

Although I haven't read it for a long time, I feel that this kind of book is particularly suitable for writing about knives. I had already thought of the reasons, so I wrote about Color Coming. The friend was wounded and died in battle. Then the hidden aura reverses and appears, and then completely blackens, with a splash of color behind it. Later, it can be said that this is the first program, and then he will pass it to the second program. Ah, if the author would capture all the details of the protagonist's darkening, especially the emotion of anger. Rather than the lagging feeling that Sakura Manji in Guilty Crown is not a good person but not a bad person either. So this book feels like it might become popular... Here I provide a piece of material. I don't want to type too many words, so let's write in the first person. Everyone... Dead... Dead...?! The words in the black suit kept ringing in Xingran's ears, like a repeater How is this possible?! Xingran, who still had a hint of luck in his heart, was ready to confirm the accuracy of the matter in person. … This..., I...! Everyone!!! How... How could this happen!?! The following can be written about him being decadent for a period of time and then feeling ashamed of himself. It's all because I'm not strong enough. Nothing helped. Then ask some students to encourage him. Then for a while I saw him being killed by someone. Then the accumulated emotions exploded completely. The longer the chapter of encouragement and the longer the foreshadowing, the warmer it will be. The more it can enhance the power of the knife.

I don't understand why such a beautiful book (๑•.•๑) Is not available? 8 Points, not even a rating? Tomato Novels' shit-like promotion is getting stronger again, but I still wish the author good luck! (ง•̀_•́)ง, After all, the public's eyes are sharp. To me, this is a good fanfic.

Give me five stars to comfort you. This book is very interesting, but the protagonist is a bit frustrated in the first five chapters. The following chapters are very interesting and sweet. It is a sweet book. No Knife. When I read the first part, I thought there was a knife, but in the second chapter, the protagonist does not need to come back. No Knife is super sweet.

The author is quite repetitive in some expressions. If the writing style is poor, he may need to consider it accordingly, but the content is first-rate. I can guarantee this. Especially in the future, the plot will become more delicate and the writing style will be improved visibly. The investment in the emotions of different students is also well written. However, the author may not be able to take into account all students, and will miss some students' emotional plots, resulting in some emotions in the later chapters being more abrupt. However, the plot direction and emotional expression alone are enough to surpass many BA fanfics.

The writing is good, it is a direction that I have not thought of, and the characters are restored very well, but some areas still need a little polishing. Overall, this book is a high-quality book. In the subject matter of Blue Files, it is more daily.

I just found it, watched it all night, and finished it It's quite good-looking, and I like it. I hope the author can keep updating it. 😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

A BA classic daily work, the reincarnation of Gardenia Dream, a warm-hearted, kind and silly person, you can watch it