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Meeting Bai Yueguang when he was down and out was the most tragic disaster in life.
Shen Jing was reborn in this kind of pain.
I just went back to the day when my good brother confessed his love to Bai Yueguang.
"You won't blame me, right?" The good brother said before confessing his love to Bai Yueguang.
Shen Jing said goodbye to the girl in his memory seriously, and then said 'I'm sorry' to herself.
In this life, he must study hard and treat himself well.
...
Many years later, Shen Jing said to the girl who confessed his love, "In that situation, no matter who pulls you, you will fall in love. Don't you think this kind of love is too cheap and pitiful? What you want is equal love, real love, not condescending charity. Go out of your own way, become a real person, and fall in love with me openly."
"Are you sure? Maybe I won't like you anymore after I become better."
"Even if you become the moon and are surrounded by stars, the moment the sun appears, all the stars will be dimmed."
Reader comments
Highlights: Really well written
I have read Chapter 26. For this work, I personally think the author's writing style and handling of all aspects are quite good🤤👍. Although the beginning is accompanied by a rebirth that is very popular😋, the good writing techniques😱, the plot and background that can arouse people's emotions and attention🤗 make it difficult for readers not to continue reading this book.
1. Character description☝🤓
From the perspective of the setting of the protagonist, he is a social beast🐂🐎 who has been beaten up by society. He has no ideals and no lofty ambitions. It is obvious that the author has set up this character very well. It is also understandable that the male protagonist will contact a girl who he has never gotten to know because of his lower body🦌 thinking🤤, but because of her figure, appearance🔥 and unknown😨. This is obviously very reasonable.
2. Writing techniques😋
I personally have been a writer of online articles for a period of time, and I feel really good about this kind of abstract writing method🤤👍. It also gave me the motivation to continue reading this book🦌. When making decisions about the events in the plot, the author😎's thoughts The road is simple but the anxious 🔥 situation is quickly and directly resolved in a way that readers can accept 😋. Although some of the slap-in-the-face 💀 environments in the plot are not too stunning 😱, they can also further embellish the well-written plot 🤗
With all this in mind, I will read this book further
Warning: (In reality, it is still rare to have contact with people with mental disorders, mania and depression. You are not the Virgin, you are not a psychiatrist. When they really put their body, mind and life on your shoulders, you will be overwhelmed. If you only interfere with the hearts of others for your own selfish desires and "sexual desire", but your escape after being backlashed by the responsibility will make these patients more desperate and even commit suicide)
It's good to read. First of all, I feel happy when I read a novel. But sometimes people don't want to be bored after reading too many novels. But in this novel, as far as I have seen, the protagonist written by the author has emotional intelligence, can talk, and has interesting points. The author's previous book can be written very well, so I feel that this book will not be bad. I want to ask the author if this one has a female protagonist. Of course, I personally hope to have a female protagonist. I don't know how the author considered it. How many words can be written in this book?
Strong authors and powerful words must be supported [Blow Kiss]
Brother Dayue likes to write about troubled families. He writes very well. It can't be caused by his personal experience, right [smiles]
The ratings are out, and it's said that it's even on the male channel recommendation list. Although the score is low, it's a good thing to be on the list.
I feel like the book suffers from a slow pace. Like the first book, Song Yan has already united to form a community of destiny by chapter 70, and Yan has already become yandere. However, this book has too many female characters to help, so the pace is much slower, and Brother Yue must have revised the outline midway. The introduction and the first chapter have been greatly changed. Maybe he really wanted to write more female protagonists at the beginning? But then it was changed to a single female protagonist?
And compared with Song Rui in the first book, Shen Jing's characteristics are indeed not distinctive enough. Maybe Shen Jing's more important shaping is yet to come? When I read the latest chapters, I started to write about Shen Jing's need to be saved. In fact, I think there is a bit of a disconnect, that is, I think based on Shen Jing's performance in this life, he shouldn't have been so miserable in his previous life. [Thinking] Maybe it's because of psychological problems?
And I feel that many people who give low scores don't like Shen Jing's soft character, and they are dissatisfied with Shen Jing's confession to Ye once in his life, knowing that he will be rejected. Let's say goodbye to the past. I'm okay with this. Ye is not the heroine anyway. Do you feel that Shen Jing's character and the sufferings in his previous life are all caused by his own family? It might have been better for Brother Yue to make the male protagonist's family problems more explicit in the early stage, but now it's a bit too subtle, so it feels like the male protagonist's portrayal is not enough? [Thinking] Tang and Ye's families have been written more clearly, so their images are more vivid than Shen Jing's?
And many people think that the male protagonist wants to help a woman when he meets a woman, which is not a good impression. What should I say? In fact, the male protagonist basically did not take the initiative to talk to Ye after his rebirth. It was Ye who took the initiative, because the reborn male protagonist has also changed a lot. If he helps Gu Yanyan, from a utilitarian perspective, the benefits are really quite big, right? The male protagonist's head teacher accepted his love, and Gu Yanyan's brother will also protect the male protagonist. As for helping Tang, Tang is obviously the real heroine. There is nothing to complain about, right? Maybe it's because Tang appeared last?
And looking at the latest chapter, Shen Jing is also the one who is not loved in his family, and combined with Shen Jing playing tricks with the class teacher, Shen Jing's parents should have simply abandoned him, so Shen is this kind of character.
In short, brother Yue, don't be discouraged. Although the score is very low, it is said that it is on the recommendation list, which is always a good thing. I will continue to support you. Everyone who has read your first book believes in your level [please update]
I have been following the author's first book for half a year, and then this book. Every book is very good to read, and this one is the same. It is still a discussion with delicate emotions and a focus on emotions. It is highly recommended.
This book is not a good book. It does not say about making money or a career. My personal feeling is that the need for money in the story is not very big. There is no need to make money and a career. It is just a story about two people redeeming each other. It is not as exciting as a rebirth book. It does not say that my Bai Yueguang didn't like me in the previous life. I want to change in this life and I must get her. , There is no such plot, but many people think that if you don't get Bai Yueguang, you will be a 🐢male. He has a feeling of looking away after living for so many years. The male protagonist will feel sorry for the bad ending, so he will start to have a good relationship with the female protagonist and want the female protagonist to live well. This book is very slow-burning and very demanding of the audience. This book has a single female protagonist.
The author's new book is really great. Author, please promise me not to stop reading. I really liked Zhou Ze and Ruan Shu in the last book. It's a pity that I hate the day when I have no money. Otherwise, I will support you to finish every book. It is really a redemption. Everyone is unfortunate, but they are all lucky, because they can have the opportunity to go back to the past, save others, heal themselves, and mend things.
"It's because I haven't been kind to myself," Shen Jing said sincerely, "I am a coward. Have you heard of the saying that the greatest sorrow of a weak person is not respecting themselves. When I was under great pressure, I would draw pictures on my thighs with a knife, because my body is the weakest thing in my hand and the only thing I can control. It's really sad."
I have read the story of Song Heyan a hundred and eighty times and never get tired of it. But I think this book may be more immersive and redemptive than the last one.
How to put it this way, this book does still have some poisonous points, but for me, it is something I can understand, such as why she still confessed to Ye after rebirth. I personally think that Shen and Ye have known each other for five years. It is difficult to easily say I don't like you anymore after liking someone for so long. People will always beautify the road they have never walked. So even if many years have passed, we will still remember the girl who made us fall in love. I personally think that Shen's confession is saying goodbye to his past self, and starting from here the real rebirth. Also, it's not enough to be quick, but the author's control over emotional writing is really good (I also grew up reading online articles, don't tell me what to say or read too little)
It's very interesting. The author's books are all very interesting. The only drawback is that they are not enough.
It's quite possible. Both the novelty of the material and the delicate descriptions are rare in Tomato. Compared with other books that either start a harem without thinking or describe the love between the male and female protagonists as if they were elementary school students, this book is really good.
Full marks, the best book I read this month, at least I like it very much. Writing or character?
Many boys and girls with dbuffs can be said to have grown up with each other. The protagonist is reborn and his emotional intelligence is reduced to a blow.
In the end, I like Tang or Lin. Anyway, these two are so close to each other. Take a look, author! ! !
The author's description of "every family has scriptures that are difficult to recite" is really good, and the same is true for Song Yan's book.
I looked at the ratings. Alas, no wonder the data is not good. Maybe because the heroine is not too obviously yandere, many people find it boring. But I really like this book. I screen readers like the previous one. Maybe it will get better in the future. Come on, author [blowing kiss]
It feels a bit like I Really Want to Be Reborn, Chen Hansheng Xiaoyuer Shen Youchu, but it is different. The author has written his own thoughts and the writing is very good. But how can I put it, I still hope to change the plot of Bai Yueguang, and not just let the protagonist let go of the past alone. After all, according to the beginning, Bai Yueguang must have some feelings for the protagonist. Although Bai Yueguang is a beauty that cannot be loved, I hope he will not be tainted.
I have been reading this book since the first one, and I can be considered an old reader. I still hope that the author will not have any pressure and just write normally. I hope to write more stories about Shen and Tang (Fafa) and Tang (Sugar). Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.
The emotional descriptions are really delicate, and the shaping of the characters and the foreshadowing of the plot can arouse my interest in reading. However, there are some parts of the plot that I personally dislike. Because of my own reasons, I did not use them as a basis for evaluating this book. But I want to accuse, accuse the author of ruthlessly causing pain. I am used to reading light-hearted and redemptive articles, and I have never used harm to promote salvation... I am short-sighted and my heart is weak, I really feel sorry for her... Maybe the reason is similar to me, I want her to be happy, is that okay?
It's very interesting. The descriptions of each character are very vivid and the descriptions of emotions are very delicate. The story description is not a mindless and cool article that follows the crowd. It is more mature. It may be a bit unsatisfactory for young young people, but it is just right for older veterans.
Why did he die [laughing awkwardly]
I actually have a similar classmate. She is good-looking and a good girl. I was chased by Huang Mao for a year in high school. Then I heard that she was always quarreling and fighting with him. The classic quote "He is also very good to me sometimes." Finally, I repeated the college entrance examination for a year. My circle of friends are all about smoking, drinking and hanging out in bars. It's amazing.
At first glance, I wanted to quit. But if you keep reading it patiently, it's really a good book! Two little bitter melons redeem each other [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's pretty good. The writing style is not weak no matter where you put it. It suits my taste. Watch the ads to support it.
Do you have any recommendations for similar novels, please?
A boy talks a lot of truth like a middle-aged uncle, always feels that he is standing on the moral high ground, never considers improving himself, and is always nosy.
I want to give it 4 and a half stars. This book is overall good, except that the male protagonist is a reborn person, but I didn't feel it at all. Also, isn't this a cool book? Why didn't I feel it at all, and it made me shed tears [awkward laughter] [angry] Although I didn't give a high rating, I am very optimistic about this book. Not dragging.
It's beautiful. It's rare to read a book in detail. What can I say? It feels like QD's weekly superpower book (the first story of redemption). It's quite interesting, but the writing is not as good as Snow Cake, and the plot is very good.
Now I went to QD again and took a look. The author should not do any extravagant work. Shushu took a look and the boy was frightened by the child. China Sayu. I can only say that luckily I only watched the early part of Super Powers, Xia Xinyu
I hope it's a single heroine
The latest masterpiece of Parking Lot God of War
Good book, come back author
If you have a heroine, just like her. Don't be like Chen Chusheng in the future.
It feels very sad to watch, quite depressing [crying][crying]
It's good to watch, I like it, I don't want Shura Field, just a good single heroine redeeming each other
It's so cool. Following the previous book Song Rui, every emotional ups and downs of redemption are really real and the characters are quite vivid. This love should be talked about by Shen Jing.
Can the author tell me whether it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists🥺
Ha Jiyue, there must be a single heroine😭
By the way, which chapter is the yandere in? I didn't even see the yandere
Highlights: Really well written I have read Chapter 26. For this work, I personally think the author's writing style and handling of all aspects are quite good🤤👍. Although the beginning is accompanied by a rebirth that is very popular😋, the good writing techniques😱, the plot and background that can arouse people's emotions and attention🤗 make it difficult for readers not to continue reading this book. 1. Character description☝🤓 From the perspective of the setting of the protagonist, he is a social beast🐂🐎 who has been beaten up by society. He has no ideals and no lofty ambitions. It is obvious that the author has set up this character very well. It is also understandable that the male protagonist will contact a girl who he has never gotten to know because of his lower body🦌 thinking🤤, but because of her figure, appearance🔥 and unknown😨. This is obviously very reasonable. 2. Writing techniques😋 I personally have been a writer of online articles for a period of time, and I feel really good about this kind of abstract writing method🤤👍. It also gave me the motivation to continue reading this book🦌. When making decisions about the events in the plot, the author😎's thoughts The road is simple but the anxious 🔥 situation is quickly and directly resolved in a way that readers can accept 😋. Although some of the slap-in-the-face 💀 environments in the plot are not too stunning 😱, they can also further embellish the well-written plot 🤗 With all this in mind, I will read this book further Warning: (In reality, it is still rare to have contact with people with mental disorders, mania and depression. You are not the Virgin, you are not a psychiatrist. When they really put their body, mind and life on your shoulders, you will be overwhelmed. If you only interfere with the hearts of others for your own selfish desires and "sexual desire", but your escape after being backlashed by the responsibility will make these patients more desperate and even commit suicide)
It's good to read. First of all, I feel happy when I read a novel. But sometimes people don't want to be bored after reading too many novels. But in this novel, as far as I have seen, the protagonist written by the author has emotional intelligence, can talk, and has interesting points. The author's previous book can be written very well, so I feel that this book will not be bad. I want to ask the author if this one has a female protagonist. Of course, I personally hope to have a female protagonist. I don't know how the author considered it. How many words can be written in this book?
Strong authors and powerful words must be supported [Blow Kiss] Brother Dayue likes to write about troubled families. He writes very well. It can't be caused by his personal experience, right [smiles] The ratings are out, and it's said that it's even on the male channel recommendation list. Although the score is low, it's a good thing to be on the list. I feel like the book suffers from a slow pace. Like the first book, Song Yan has already united to form a community of destiny by chapter 70, and Yan has already become yandere. However, this book has too many female characters to help, so the pace is much slower, and Brother Yue must have revised the outline midway. The introduction and the first chapter have been greatly changed. Maybe he really wanted to write more female protagonists at the beginning? But then it was changed to a single female protagonist? And compared with Song Rui in the first book, Shen Jing's characteristics are indeed not distinctive enough. Maybe Shen Jing's more important shaping is yet to come? When I read the latest chapters, I started to write about Shen Jing's need to be saved. In fact, I think there is a bit of a disconnect, that is, I think based on Shen Jing's performance in this life, he shouldn't have been so miserable in his previous life. [Thinking] Maybe it's because of psychological problems? And I feel that many people who give low scores don't like Shen Jing's soft character, and they are dissatisfied with Shen Jing's confession to Ye once in his life, knowing that he will be rejected. Let's say goodbye to the past. I'm okay with this. Ye is not the heroine anyway. Do you feel that Shen Jing's character and the sufferings in his previous life are all caused by his own family? It might have been better for Brother Yue to make the male protagonist's family problems more explicit in the early stage, but now it's a bit too subtle, so it feels like the male protagonist's portrayal is not enough? [Thinking] Tang and Ye's families have been written more clearly, so their images are more vivid than Shen Jing's? And many people think that the male protagonist wants to help a woman when he meets a woman, which is not a good impression. What should I say? In fact, the male protagonist basically did not take the initiative to talk to Ye after his rebirth. It was Ye who took the initiative, because the reborn male protagonist has also changed a lot. If he helps Gu Yanyan, from a utilitarian perspective, the benefits are really quite big, right? The male protagonist's head teacher accepted his love, and Gu Yanyan's brother will also protect the male protagonist. As for helping Tang, Tang is obviously the real heroine. There is nothing to complain about, right? Maybe it's because Tang appeared last? And looking at the latest chapter, Shen Jing is also the one who is not loved in his family, and combined with Shen Jing playing tricks with the class teacher, Shen Jing's parents should have simply abandoned him, so Shen is this kind of character. In short, brother Yue, don't be discouraged. Although the score is very low, it is said that it is on the recommendation list, which is always a good thing. I will continue to support you. Everyone who has read your first book believes in your level [please update]
I have been following the author's first book for half a year, and then this book. Every book is very good to read, and this one is the same. It is still a discussion with delicate emotions and a focus on emotions. It is highly recommended. This book is not a good book. It does not say about making money or a career. My personal feeling is that the need for money in the story is not very big. There is no need to make money and a career. It is just a story about two people redeeming each other. It is not as exciting as a rebirth book. It does not say that my Bai Yueguang didn't like me in the previous life. I want to change in this life and I must get her. , There is no such plot, but many people think that if you don't get Bai Yueguang, you will be a 🐢male. He has a feeling of looking away after living for so many years. The male protagonist will feel sorry for the bad ending, so he will start to have a good relationship with the female protagonist and want the female protagonist to live well. This book is very slow-burning and very demanding of the audience. This book has a single female protagonist.
The author's new book is really great. Author, please promise me not to stop reading. I really liked Zhou Ze and Ruan Shu in the last book. It's a pity that I hate the day when I have no money. Otherwise, I will support you to finish every book. It is really a redemption. Everyone is unfortunate, but they are all lucky, because they can have the opportunity to go back to the past, save others, heal themselves, and mend things.
"It's because I haven't been kind to myself," Shen Jing said sincerely, "I am a coward. Have you heard of the saying that the greatest sorrow of a weak person is not respecting themselves. When I was under great pressure, I would draw pictures on my thighs with a knife, because my body is the weakest thing in my hand and the only thing I can control. It's really sad." I have read the story of Song Heyan a hundred and eighty times and never get tired of it. But I think this book may be more immersive and redemptive than the last one.
How to put it this way, this book does still have some poisonous points, but for me, it is something I can understand, such as why she still confessed to Ye after rebirth. I personally think that Shen and Ye have known each other for five years. It is difficult to easily say I don't like you anymore after liking someone for so long. People will always beautify the road they have never walked. So even if many years have passed, we will still remember the girl who made us fall in love. I personally think that Shen's confession is saying goodbye to his past self, and starting from here the real rebirth. Also, it's not enough to be quick, but the author's control over emotional writing is really good (I also grew up reading online articles, don't tell me what to say or read too little)
It's very interesting. The author's books are all very interesting. The only drawback is that they are not enough.
It's quite possible. Both the novelty of the material and the delicate descriptions are rare in Tomato. Compared with other books that either start a harem without thinking or describe the love between the male and female protagonists as if they were elementary school students, this book is really good.
Full marks, the best book I read this month, at least I like it very much. Writing or character? Many boys and girls with dbuffs can be said to have grown up with each other. The protagonist is reborn and his emotional intelligence is reduced to a blow. In the end, I like Tang or Lin. Anyway, these two are so close to each other. Take a look, author! ! !
The author's description of "every family has scriptures that are difficult to recite" is really good, and the same is true for Song Yan's book. I looked at the ratings. Alas, no wonder the data is not good. Maybe because the heroine is not too obviously yandere, many people find it boring. But I really like this book. I screen readers like the previous one. Maybe it will get better in the future. Come on, author [blowing kiss]
It feels a bit like I Really Want to Be Reborn, Chen Hansheng Xiaoyuer Shen Youchu, but it is different. The author has written his own thoughts and the writing is very good. But how can I put it, I still hope to change the plot of Bai Yueguang, and not just let the protagonist let go of the past alone. After all, according to the beginning, Bai Yueguang must have some feelings for the protagonist. Although Bai Yueguang is a beauty that cannot be loved, I hope he will not be tainted.
I have been reading this book since the first one, and I can be considered an old reader. I still hope that the author will not have any pressure and just write normally. I hope to write more stories about Shen and Tang (Fafa) and Tang (Sugar). Finally, I hope the author will get better and better.
The emotional descriptions are really delicate, and the shaping of the characters and the foreshadowing of the plot can arouse my interest in reading. However, there are some parts of the plot that I personally dislike. Because of my own reasons, I did not use them as a basis for evaluating this book. But I want to accuse, accuse the author of ruthlessly causing pain. I am used to reading light-hearted and redemptive articles, and I have never used harm to promote salvation... I am short-sighted and my heart is weak, I really feel sorry for her... Maybe the reason is similar to me, I want her to be happy, is that okay?
It's very interesting. The descriptions of each character are very vivid and the descriptions of emotions are very delicate. The story description is not a mindless and cool article that follows the crowd. It is more mature. It may be a bit unsatisfactory for young young people, but it is just right for older veterans. Why did he die [laughing awkwardly]
I actually have a similar classmate. She is good-looking and a good girl. I was chased by Huang Mao for a year in high school. Then I heard that she was always quarreling and fighting with him. The classic quote "He is also very good to me sometimes." Finally, I repeated the college entrance examination for a year. My circle of friends are all about smoking, drinking and hanging out in bars. It's amazing.
At first glance, I wanted to quit. But if you keep reading it patiently, it's really a good book! Two little bitter melons redeem each other [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's pretty good. The writing style is not weak no matter where you put it. It suits my taste. Watch the ads to support it. Do you have any recommendations for similar novels, please?
A boy talks a lot of truth like a middle-aged uncle, always feels that he is standing on the moral high ground, never considers improving himself, and is always nosy.
I want to give it 4 and a half stars. This book is overall good, except that the male protagonist is a reborn person, but I didn't feel it at all. Also, isn't this a cool book? Why didn't I feel it at all, and it made me shed tears [awkward laughter] [angry] Although I didn't give a high rating, I am very optimistic about this book. Not dragging.
It's beautiful. It's rare to read a book in detail. What can I say? It feels like QD's weekly superpower book (the first story of redemption). It's quite interesting, but the writing is not as good as Snow Cake, and the plot is very good. Now I went to QD again and took a look. The author should not do any extravagant work. Shushu took a look and the boy was frightened by the child. China Sayu. I can only say that luckily I only watched the early part of Super Powers, Xia Xinyu
I hope it's a single heroine
The latest masterpiece of Parking Lot God of War
Good book, come back author
If you have a heroine, just like her. Don't be like Chen Chusheng in the future.
It feels very sad to watch, quite depressing [crying][crying]
It's good to watch, I like it, I don't want Shura Field, just a good single heroine redeeming each other
It's so cool. Following the previous book Song Rui, every emotional ups and downs of redemption are really real and the characters are quite vivid. This love should be talked about by Shen Jing.
Can the author tell me whether it is a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists🥺 Ha Jiyue, there must be a single heroine😭
By the way, which chapter is the yandere in? I didn't even see the yandere