Dungeon Adventure Log

Although it is a novel, it has a sense of déjà vu like the full-length adventure anime of the 1980s and 1990s. Only a real teammate will join every dozens of chapters. Compared to the current situation, the team is fully formed in ten chapters, and the team is invincible in fifty chapters. After that, the teammates fall asleep while adding more. This slow pace can better shape the characters of the teammates, and will not become a cookie-cutter background. Everyone has their own personality, the lively and cheerful dwarf girl who snores loudly, the tall mixed-race lady with amazing cooking skills, the dignified and beautiful elf princess with charming behavior, the human princess who is a magic genius but practices swordsmanship hard. Everyone's image becomes fuller little by little during this journey. It is an adventure story that is very comfortable to read.

Online game novels. The writing is good. There are just no pictures, it would be nice if the characters and equipment had pictures. Chapter 170 has no emotional line, just a few female teammates. What do you call a story with multiple female protagonists? Isn't this the eunuch article?

Good. But there is no need to rush solo, you will only see that the protagonist is stupid, but it is not that he is invincible and goes through it recklessly. Every time I get hurt I just think about playing solo. So ambitious. You can definitely delay for a few days to gain experience. For example, a week has passed and I have entered dungeons 4 times. There are no surprises or surprises in crushing them. It can be explained in one sentence. Don't challenge the black dungeon in less than a month, and then rush to advance the Apostle Invasion two years earlier. It takes time for the protagonist to upgrade, let alone his teammates.

Relatively speaking, it is a perfect novel similar to Japanese comics and dungeon adventures. The only drawback is that the number of words is too small now, but everyone should follow it more and don't let it die. The logic of the details is basically fine. However, there is a general logical problem that the Adventure Guild will ask adventurers about their experiences every time. But what the author currently writes looks like it has no official guide. Although it is a random dungeon every time, the types of monsters are only those. Maybe the author wanted too much to write about the plot where the female hunter finally wrote the Monster Manual with the help of the protagonist and became famous throughout the country. So it looks like the trade union is doing useless work. From this point of view, it is not logical for the protagonist to guess that 20 attribute points will give him a new passive, so he will continue to add points evenly. The author wanted so much to write about water buckets adding points, so he ignored that if a normal person thought this way, he would definitely give priority to adding a single attribute to 20 and see what happens. In short, I hope the author will not be affected. If the data is not good, just keep writing and it will be fine.

Very, very good. The connection between daily life and battle is very good. There is not too much boring battle and too much daily plot without progress. The multi-female protagonists are handled very well. Each female character has a character of her own. The whole plot is definitely at the forefront on the Tomato platform. It is not a troll. It is really good.

Beautiful, relaxing adventure with cute Maggie (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～ Are there any similar novels? I particularly value the emotional line of this novel... It's bad, I seem to be charmed by King Maggie's 8-point charm. In the later stage, I felt weak and became bored.

It's pretty good to watch, but in order to put pressure on the protagonist and make the battle look thrilling, the author forced the protagonist not to develop properly. Obviously, by clearing the dungeons twice, you can replenish equipment and materials, skills, and experience to upgrade your level, and then you can pass the next level portal. However, after clearing the portal at the current level, which is life-threatening, you have to rush to the next portal. The simplest professional energy soul is not full at all, not even more than half. This thing is obviously very important. It is required for every skill. It is obviously a matter of spending another day to clear the portal. Other than that, the writing is great.

I see now that this book is really good among Western fantasy dungeon novels. The fighting description is good, but the most outstanding thing is the description of the heroine. Each heroine has a distinct personality and the rhythm is very good. In Tomato's opinion, it may be slow, but in my opinion It is indeed a very suitable rhythm (more detailed evaluation is below, if you still have patience, please read my evaluation below) (Here is a suggestion for new readers. When the author writes about those races, it is best to draw a line in the third chapter, otherwise it will not be easy to distinguish later) It is suggested that the author can write the Golden Finger in Chapter 12 during the first chapter, which should be able to retain some people. After all, Tomato is still too fast-paced and pays attention to a golden three chapters. Oh, by the way, one last complaint. The only thing that is likely to be unreadable in this book is the monster. The author reads something curious every day, Cthulhu @

Finally, someone has written a normal Western fantasy. Too many people write books in their dreams like they did after drinking for three days and three nights and playing with their parents for three days and three nights. The current demand for authors is to maintain quality and update quickly.

This novel is really a masterpiece. Although the writing method and the story are very old-fashioned, it is very comfortable to read. There is no inexplicable darkness, and there are not many inexplicable conflicts with the sadistic master. , Although there are few emotional descriptions in it, it is also very dull. , But it is simply the finishing touch, like garlic when eating meat and noodles, it makes people very comfortable, and the character design of the protagonist is also good. It has the feeling of ordinary people transforming into brave men. Overall, it makes people feel full and hearty and can't stop. I haven't seen this kind of book in many years. , There are all kinds of novels about martial arts and fairy tales that I followed when I was a child, such as Douluo Dalu, Martial Arts, and Fighting to Break the Sky. In these novels, the protagonist starts from a humble beginning but becomes stronger with little training, exploration, and challenges. On the way, he will meet good people and bad people, but the beauty is still the same. As bright as fluorescent light, sometimes you get opportunities, build bonds with others, and eventually become an immortal sect. The purest feeling of reading a novel, I hope it will continue to be like this and develop well. However, the fly in the ointment is that I still hope that the author can write less dead people. The barbarian berserkers on the first expedition, the berserkers on the second expedition, and those who were attacked and died by thieves during the carriage trip. Things like this can be avoided by the protagonist. It is best to directly prevent an innocent person from dying.

An adventure story similar to that of a meat pigeon. Each adventure is short but novel and interesting, without the procrastination and watery feeling of telling a long story. In non-repeating locations, meet different people with distinctive personalities, come into contact with new teammates and partners, experience unknown adventure stories, and obtain unknown rewards and skills. The protagonist's IQ and logic are all online. It's a good book worth reading carefully.

A relaxing and orthodox Western fantasy adventure + team development + harem. The dungeon grind has a sense of fun, vivid characters, a steady rhythm, and is not stressful to decompress. The later stage is more routine and has a heavy game feel. It is suitable for readers who like Western fantasy adventures, team interaction, and relaxed harems. It is not suitable for readers who pursue hard-core Western fantasy, profound plots, and slow growth. The western fantasy atmosphere is orthodox, and the dungeon adventure is solid: the soul travels through the game world, and the doomsday monsters invade two years later; the main line is to clear dungeons, enter dungeons, and fight bosses. The five-level dungeons of white/yellow/red/purple/black have clear settings and a full sense of adventure. The fun of Goldfinger is not exaggerated: you get a game controller at the beginning, lose cheats to activate the player system, and the demon-like swordsman grows up. You can upgrade, learn skills, and explode equipment. It is enough without being crushed, and it balances the excitement and challenge. The characters of the team are vivid, and the female protagonists are likeable: a 1.4-Meter dwarf lolita MT, a 1.9-Meter ranger sister scholar, a princess mage, etc., With different personalities and natural interactions. Travel through the game world, team up to attack dungeons, and go from novice adventurer to savior!

It's really good. There are no big logical loopholes. The plot design and writing are both good. If you stick to it, you will definitely get results later. The protagonist's dungeon adventure always feels wrong, with all kinds of disgusting monsters [face covering] Now that the protagonist can level up and add points to become stronger, I don't know how his teammates can become stronger, otherwise they won't be able to keep up with the protagonist's growth. I hope the author writes better and better

Five stars, must be five stars ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ The work is full of visuals, the overall plot is fascinating, and the protagonist does not feel too cheating. The description of the female character, the small action part is my favorite. The arrangement of each copy is also very good, there is no feeling of dragging all the time. The author's outline is really well-organized. I only look forward to the advancement of the emotional line in the future, but maybe not too much will be promoted before the team is full. Off topic This should be a certain author's trumpet account. The writing is great. I wonder if there is a chance to know the author's other accounts. The more I read, the more I feel that the rhythm of this book is very well controlled. The main plot and interludes are arranged just right. Please give me more chapters~ Ounei should

This western fantasy novel is quite interesting. It doesn't have the expected flavor of Rikari, but has a strong flavor of Gesha (actually more like Ash and Fantasy Grimgar, but I guess many people don't know this). Those who like to read Gesha and Ash and Fantasy Grimgar can try reading this novel. The difference with Gesha is that the skills are very strict, but unexpectedly it is very similar to Gray.

It fits my idea of ​​a dungeon adventure in a different world. Are there any novels of a similar type? This one is not small enough to read. Of course, I will keep up with the updates every day. Don't let the author stop! Oh no! !

Although the emotional line is hazy, the protagonist is still Chu Nan, and the team is all female, I still like to read adventures written by this author. I think this kind of adventure is what I pursue. There are reliable compatriots, various skills, different equipment, as well as a glorious return and a surge in reputation. Who doesn't like this kind of pretense? The protagonist's combat power is also very high, and his teammates are not too much behind. They all have their own strengths. Overall, it's pretty good.

The current plot is very good, and the whole world view is also very good, but the content is too little. This book is much better than many novels that are invincible because of the existence of the system. The system is not so helpful to the male protagonist, and it develops slowly. The female character's favor and relationship also develop naturally and slowly. I hope the author can update it stably and not unfinished.

The overall story and rhythm feel good, and it has the flavor of a dungeon guide from another world. Most of the dungeons in the guide are also foreshadowing related to the main world, and I am looking forward to the subsequent plot. There were many bad reviews in the comment area saying that the title had multiple female protagonists but the male protagonist was a pseudo-harem who had never touched any of them. I can only say that people have different opinions. The main chapter of this book is the dungeon guide, and the rhythm of the love line is normal. Although hundreds of chapters have passed, the plot involves female team members who have only known each other for a few months, and the piling also requires emotional foreshadowing. Although the elf is very proactive, the protagonist always wants to solve the problem of her faith. This is the normal process of galgame. Only after completing the pre-plot can the special cg be unlocked. The only flaw is the difficulty of the dungeon. I feel that every dungeon that the protagonist walks through is quite difficult. Although the difficulty of dungeons of the same level will be different, even if someone from another team accidentally dies, at least the protagonist's team is not reduced. But it's a bit unreasonable to win every time with difficulty, and then rush to go solo. Later, I feel like the author also realized a slight improvement after reading the comment area. All in all, the shortcomings do not hide the good points. Currently, it is considered a relatively normal masterpiece among a bunch of mindless cool works [Like]

A very good Western fantasy novel. The classic adventure story and team all have female protagonists except for the protagonist, but it makes me relax and read slowly. Whether it is the plot, the characterization, or even the characters outside the plot, I can remember that the protagonist's cheats are not the kind of cheats that make the protagonist awesome all of a sudden. The growth of the protagonist makes me want to It reminds me that when I was playing Genshin Impact, I was spun around by a frozen tree and slapped to death by Wuxiang Lei. The protagonist's growth did not rely solely on Goldfinger. He also relied on his own efforts to grow up to this day. A few months ago, I read this book back and forth two or three times without reading it. Just because the introduction said there were many female protagonists and slow popularity. Why? Because many authors have written multiple female protagonists and slow heat into fast heat and Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. After the male protagonist and the female protagonist met a few times, the female protagonist fell completely in love with the male protagonist. She washed herself cleanly and put it on the bed, waiting for the male protagonist to come over. As a result, in the last step, either the male protagonist was not clear-headed, or there were various accidents and settings that went back and forth several times. I was speechless and wanted to curse. It seems that as long as you don't go in, it's slow, and you, my friend, you are an outlier among them. This is the best Western fantasy novel I have read this year.

4🌟 Saw the second town. An okay adventure story. Advantages: Orthodox adventure, nothing weird so far. Disadvantages: Some settings cannot withstand scrutiny, sometimes there are too many transitions and it seems dragging, some lines and events are a bit out of character, and the protagonist does not look like someone who traveled through time [face covering]

It's very good, the writing is smooth and the writing style is excellent. The advantage is that the supporting characters are all vivid and flesh-and-blood. Adding more interactions between supporting characters can make the characters more three-dimensional. The arrangement of each dungeon is also very good. The main plot and daily rhythm are relaxed and relaxed. It feels good to follow it in one go (following the serial later may be a bit torture). You can think about the plot direction later and lay out more foreshadowing. The current concern is that the time span is a bit short, the protagonist grows too fast, catching up with the current top combat power too quickly may be a bit abrupt, and the plot is not easy to write. If I want to write a post-apocalyptic plot later, it may be very different from the current plot rhythm (at least I like the current slightly comfortable daily interactions), and the two-year time schedule is really too short. It would be nice to think more about the worldview and write some subtle and large branch lines.

My feeling so far is that although it is a bit like an RPG game, the design is a bit strong, and the results of some plots can be directly guessed, but the look and feel is not bad. It is a classic light novel style, not overly arousing emotions, no bitterness or hatred, the protagonist's character is neither weak nor flamboyant, has a good heart and is not violent, and is young but also stable.

It's a very good book. You can get equipment by clearing the portal. The portal has five levels (white, yellow, red, purple and black), and the corresponding equipment is also the same. The world will be invaded in two years, so there is a sense of crisis and the main line (breaking through the black portal) The dungeons entered are different each time. The fighting scenes are also very good and exciting. The increase in combat power is also very reasonable. It should not stress the combat power. There are currently five teammates. The protagonist is a warrior, Maggie is a human shield, Renata is a shooter, Toph is an assistant, and there should be a mage who is a little princess. Everyone's joining the team, micro daily life and emotional lines are well written. The lively and cheerful Maggie, the quiet Renata, and the teasing and sinister Toph, they are perfect! The trick to having multiple heroines is to portray each character well and handle the emotional lines well so that readers can't let go of each heroine. It should be said that this book handles it very well. The time for each copy is also well-timed, basically about 10 to 15 chapters, not particularly bloated. All in all, it can definitely be given five stars.

It is said that there will be multiple female protagonists, but in fact it is just a straight man taking a few girls on adventures. The girls all like the male protagonist, but our male protagonist only wants to take risks. As an adventure story, it's pretty good.

It's a slow burner, the plot is well written, the pig's trotters have a soft character, and the other characters have distinct personalities. It's a pretty good book, but the score is low. Although it's a pseudo-harem, it doesn't affect the senses. There aren't many boring and ambiguous plots. The author has really good control over this aspect. I like Miss Bobby's character, haha

I have read almost 2,000 hours in 🍅, and this is the first time I have read a book with 800,000 words in one breath and even read the latest chapter. I have played many games and have had the experience of forgetting to sleep and eat, but when it comes to novels, I always give up because I always read something I don't like and get bored. Therefore, this novel feels more like I am actually playing an RPG adventure game, which is very immersive. The overall feeling is novel and relaxed. There are no routines or deliberately created settings. From the perspective of the protagonist group, there are warm daily life, novel adventures, and interesting interactions between the male and female protagonists. It is like a biography of an adventure in another world. Very good, I found a treasure this time.

It's quite good to read, the plot is not too bad, and the characters have normal personalities, which is pretty good. You see, there are five female protagonists in the team now. The characters of each female protagonist are well written and very lovable. The content of the book is suitable for skipping. To be specific, some plots are boring, and some plots are interesting. Skip to read the boring parts. For example, some copies will not affect the plot. Another big problem is that the characters in the book sometimes speak very strangely, which does not seem to be spoken by humans. It is especially like an AI machine reading some Korean and Japanese light novels. There are also names for the characters. In short, I suspect that there is AI.

The plot advances reasonably and well-proportioned, and the pacing is quite good. A very good description of the social and humanistic background. In terms of characters, the supporting roles are generally pretty good. The protagonist is also flesh and blood, but the heroine... On the one hand, she has a strong presence, but she only acts as a teammate. On the other hand, there is no interaction between men and women. The last 10+ chapters have been a bit too invincible.

I have just read 300 chapters so far. Let me talk about the advantages first. So far, there are no big surprises. The author has a good sense of the combat power of the protagonist group. The battle plot is also very good. At least I can imagine it in my mind. There is also the setting of the dungeon. The level behind the door is different every time you enter, with different backgrounds, different enemies, and occasionally different doors. There are some connections in the subsequent stories. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own personality and is easy to remember. I have read some Western fantasy novels before, and most of them couldn't last more than three or four hundred chapters before the society collapsed. (Maybe I didn't find it or Tomato didn't have it? Lol) I quite like the adventure experience and character interaction. I tend to prefer a daily style, which is really comfortable to read. Then there's what I don't like. The plot after entering the red portal for the second time is really awkward. I didn't expect that Toph could flirt with the protagonist when there was a wolf in front of her and a tiger in the back. It can be seen that the author really doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, at least what I saw Nowadays, it's mostly embarrassing. Whenever I see an emotional story, I always jump to it without any desire to continue reading. Also, when I first started taking the adventure, there were obviously not as many emotional scenes as now. The more you go on, the more emotional scenes there are. Is it because there are more people in the protagonist group? I can't tell whether this is an adventure story or a different world harem story (maybe it's not accurate? But I can't think of how to describe this awkward feeling). I hope there will be less emotional drama and more adventure plots. In fact, before I rated it, I had been debating whether it should be four stars or three stars, but I saw the daily plot of the protagonist group coming out from behind the red door, which convinced me that this book still deserves four stars. Check again and report again.