Di Ren*************

I'm quite looking forward to this kind of subject matter. It's written a bit like a script 🤔. There's basically a summary at the end of each chapter. There's a lot of environmental rendering and description of psychological activities, but there's not much narrative, and the overall feeling is relatively empty. Iron Ring Lang's friendship is chapter after chapter. Let's see if we can add some other content, such as the description of the magical weapons, advanced martial arts, BMWs, mounts, and cavalry formations, etc., Combined with the expansion of Jianghu affairs, etc. If we simply follow the original plot, we won't be able to write much. If we read too much, we will be tired. Everyone is too familiar with the plot. Moreover, the protagonist's military killing skills are a bit low and he can't cope with this kind of case-solving. See if he can improve it, which is also an aspect of expanding the content. Generally speaking, it depends on the author's positioning for this work. If you simply follow the plot development, it will be meaningless. Please forgive me for any inappropriate personal opinions! 🙏

I don't like the character design, but overall it's okay.

Nice novel