A Blind Man at the Beginning, Playing the Role of Qiu Yuan and Then Killing Crazy in Gaowu

Overall good, with some minor flaws. For example, in terms of the narrative method, the development in some places is a bit off. For example, the S, molesting the protagonist's sister (SS level), I don't know if I missed it or something, but I didn't see the foreshadowing in the previous part. Secondly, the martial arts test in the current progress is still the same old routine of cults, although it is very useful. At present, I personally think that the direction of optimization is to slow down the pace, pave the way for the plot, and properly explain the various connections between the characters. Overall, it's a good book, 🉑Eat it

Delicious, delicious, delicious, it's this kind of character that is not OOC and I will follow it forever. This really attracts me. For a role like this with a name at the beginning, I came here just because of the name on the cover of your book. I've really seen enough of those casual roles that are full of power. Even just wearing a piece of clothing, knowing his skills will unlock 80% of the next role slot, and then start OOC to play the next one. When I read that kind of article, I will block the author and get out of my sight.

Well written, my worldly dream depends on you

It tied the knot and fulfilled my dream of being in the world of martial arts [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

It's good to watch, Ming Chao is one of the best in the arts and sciences. The protagonist is not overpowered in combat, has brains, and plays handsome and fluently. After seeing the latest chapter, there is no ambiguity or cp. If you like no heroine and no cp, you can buy it. In the second role, Qiu Yuan still has the majority, and can be chased. If there is a thunder, you can just retreat. It is a bit of a scumbag, but not much. I look forward to the next chapter.

It's good-looking. Although it's not a mythical novel, it doesn't have any interesting points. I haven't seen a female protagonist so far. It's just that the role has risen a bit too quickly. I feel like it won't be long. Is it going to rely on the original system of this world to increase its strength?

Jianghu people realized it

I agree with your martial arts dream

For me, no matter what the plot is, as long as the character can be kept from collapsing, it's already pretty good.

Don't mix personal emotions (I'm going to say it anyway, I still want to watch it) 1. Not too ooc 2. It's not all mindless ridicule, but there are some 3. There are some minor flaws. Those who are used to seeing decisive killings may not be used to it. 4. I have the strength, but I don't have too much fighting power. They say don't procrastinate, but now the book has been out for several months before I read it, and I'm 6 years old [laughs]

I agree with your dream of being a gangster

Oops... I accidentally clicked on the wrong cover/vulgar title of the book when I long-pressed it, so I can only give it five stars. Sorry, sorry... [Face covering] (well written. Jpg

Yes, the content is fascinating and you won't get tired of watching it. The characters have roughly the same personality and their emotional lines are not rough.

The story is good, but I'm a bit confused about the time it takes to reach each level. If you reach the first level at the age of 17, it is assumed that it will take an ordinary person 25 years to reach the second level. Reaching level 4 is already 100 years old. So how to reach the 7th level of the protagonist's father? This does not include the fact that the difficulty of each level increases and the time required increases. But overall, the author still wrote very well. The characters and the world view that I was most satisfied with were well grasped.

It's best for the author to update four chapters a day [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [admiration] [admiration] [admiration] [smile]

Well written and beautiful

Author, please keep working hard [OK] [Grieved] [OK]

The second template is Cheng Xiaoyu. No matter what you write later, I will give you five stars [Adoration][Admiration]

There are very few people who play Qiu Yuan, and their level is not bad. There is currently no Lei.

It's beautiful, I highly recommend it, and the writing is also good [blowing kiss] [sending heartfelt wishes] I hope the author will follow suit more

Average

Very good, and unique

Still very good [eating melon]

The swordsman's sword frosty fourteen states

It looks good, but I won't be able to play it tomorrow. I don't know much about Qiu Yuan

Overall, it's good. It just needs to be updated three or four times a day [laughs awkwardly] I have read a lot of fanfictions, this one is very attractive, you can check it out [Love]

It's beautiful, I love looking at it, and it's edible. The writing is quite good, but there are some things that are a bit embarrassing, but that's the case with most novels, and it's good to compare with others.

It's okay, but can you change the name the protagonist's cousin calls him? The title "brother" makes me feel that the two of them are a bit like strangers.

It's very beautiful, good luck to the author!

When will it be updated (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ)