Comprehensive Comics**********

It's a good variety comic. So far, the plot is quite gradual. The main reason is that there are more female protagonists in the variety comics. This is an extra point. Of course, you still have to grasp the emotions of each heroine. The daily life is okay. The writing is very good and the feeling is okay. Then there is the protagonist. This has many flaws. The protagonist is portrayed very well. The appearance has been described in the front, and the elf is shouting, okay. For example, the protagonist is the focus of the world, but there is no sense of involvement. There is no need to explain so much background in the front. It can be explained slowly later, which also makes people feel a bit mysterious. In the following words, the heroine will be described more and there will be more psychological activities. I look forward to the follow-up development. I don't know if the five sisters will all receive it, and there will be me Hui. She is really a passerby heroine, right? Give me a five to support it.

It's okay, but the description of appearance is as little as possible. And what other books has the author written? I only see this one of your homepage, there is another one but it is gone. If you have any, please recommend it to me. Let me see. I also really like the Succubus article. Others write about succubus and the protagonist is very handsome. Then being seen by the heroine and pursuing her was quite exaggerated. Let me see you digging your feet. You're okay, at least it's not as exaggerated as others.

It's ok, but there was a bit too much description of appearance in the early stage. The current plot is quite good. I hope the author can continue writing it.

The subject matter is good, and the appearance of the protagonist is also good. It's a pity that I haven't watched those anime. However, there are some disadvantages. The appearance and environment are described too much. It is easy to lose sight of Runaway in the early stage. The family background can be written not so well. It is written as a passerby in time travel. The article about a succubus being targeted by a sickly Shura field, if the writing style is a little better controlled and truly original, it will make people look much older. According to my observation, many people like to read this

The boy and girl are the protagonists. I don't know if it's good or not. I can only say that this novel is good at helping me sleep. It helped me fall asleep.

Hajiri gives himself a good review first, but it's not too much. (៸៸᳐⦁⩊⦁៸៸᳐ )੭

The male protagonist is the female protagonist in galagame [laughing evilly]

This is a rare and beautiful book. I hope the author will not stop writing and continue writing. Why is it not promoted on the homepage? It's really good.

There is too much description, but if there is no description, the actions of the protagonist will not be felt

There are too many adjectives to read. But it should be considered a good book, I'll give it four stars.

The scenes between Yukino and Dango are a bit small

Excellent product, excellent product, very good. All I ask is that the author never stops updating. Just update two chapters every day. This should be possible, right? Author

It can be a good start for a new book

From the current point of view, I can give it four stars. If it is good in the later stage, I will directly increase it to five stars.

Did the author write this after following me for so long? [Cool]

Not bad, under the same type of circumstances

How come my saint Hui is not in the profile?

[Hold face] There are so many descriptions like asking AI to polish them. Hajiri is not allowed to describe the word water anymore. If you have to polish it, it's not impossible. One chapter is 4,000 words [Punch]

When will I write Zhou Fang Youxi? The author is great

Not bad, worthy of praise

Author, this Pandora of yours is not the tomboy Pandora of Hurricane Soul, right?

Don't sleep during prime working hours, Hubei Nennen

It's so cool. A gutter rat like me should just put my mind aside and read this kind of pure and cool YY text.

Hhh I can't stand it anymore, the author's high-frequency description of the male protagonist's appearance makes me want to laugh a little [laughing]

Can we also collect the little bird Yu Shihua [laughs]

Do you have to eat it now? Please tell me which chapter the author is and I'll jump over and take a look. If you have to eat it, I will give it 5 stars.

Is there any education and training? Simply falling in love gives me the feeling of being a male protagonist in a drama, only knowing how to talk but not daring to get serious about it