Have You Ever Held It In? And You're Writing a Book!

I like it so far. The various characters in it are also quite intelligent, or they look like normal people. They don't provoke and enmity for no reason, and they don't deliberately suppress the protagonist's strength. I like this kind of treasure hunting plot the best. I hope the protagonist can fill up his collection room little by little. Besides, what I like most is his family. , Both parents are here, as well as a sister and a dog. Everyone has their own life, but the focus of writing has always been on the protagonist. The sister is not portrayed as annoying as in other books, and the protagonist and his father are both quite normal. They receive the benefits provided by the state and enjoy what they should enjoy without deliberately suffering.

Overall, it's good and worth reading. The writing is smooth, but this warrior is a bit exaggerated. He weighs several hundred kilograms and one ton. How many tons can he carry? Ten tons? How can your environment with such a thin aura support this? There are more treasures in the wild safe area, but the safe city can, after all, it is where good things are concentrated.

The plot feels very novel. A bit laid-back, but I feel that men who put too much emphasis on emotional narratives always hold back. It is somewhat similar to extraordinary travel, which is very good, and this kind of treasure-holding knowledge is generally similar to weird or fantasy, and there is rarely this kind of spiritual energy flow.

After reading too many abuse articles, it's hard to understand this kind of smooth article, especially if it's a normal feeling. There are relatively few fighting scenes in it and it can be considered a cave world adventure novel. It can be said that everything is smooth sailing for the protagonist, both parents have a younger sister. My father experienced a lot of setbacks in his early years, and he couldn't make a breakthrough for a long time. When his son grows up, he fulfills his wish. The protagonist gives him a spiritual fruit before he leaves so that he can achieve his wish. The protagonist is also very smooth. When he went to explore the wild for the first time, he broke through the same realm as his father.

I missed the book several times before because of the title. This time I clicked in and read the latest chapter in one go. Overall, it's very good. I don't give it five stars because you can find so many wonderful treasures, but the improvement of the protagonist is still limited. Either you write the treasure as a near miss, or don't secretly suppress your combat power.

Good

Yes, the protagonist is not the kind of person who thinks too highly of himself. At least he has a better setting than the protagonists I have seen before.

It looks good so far, but it's a bit lacking. It's time to start a breakthrough. It's only 3 chapters and there are not many words.

This is really a masterpiece in Tomato. I felt that the writing method was familiar before. When I saw the author, it turned out that I had also read the collector who wrote it before. I have to write it well this time and don't make it too short.

Current realm: Qi and Blood Realm, Innate Realm, Tribulation God Realm. The three stages of qi and blood: exercise - nourishing the body - metamorphosis. The three stages of innateness: Qi refining-Zhoutian-transcendence. The third stage of the Tribulation God is unknown. Current treasures: ordinary treasures, earth treasures, and heavenly treasures. Ordinary treasures are also called treasures, and they are divided into: rare, rare, and priceless. Earth treasure: rare in the world, unparalleled in ancient times and hard to find in the world. Tianbao: a fairy treasure from another world, boundless in heaven and earth, in the vast world.