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Reader comments
It's a pretty good novel about a female protagonist, and the plot doesn't drag on. But there are still some problems (the following is my personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize [hit hard]). First, let's talk about the plot issues (currently up to the latest chapter 71). In Chapter 69, how did the three people from the Zhongtian Yan League know that the protagonist had the Xuanyin Holy Body? This is very unexpected, because this is the world of female lords. This kind of physique is equivalent to a furnace. Logically speaking, it is impossible for them to know (the author did not explain it). The second is the character of the protagonist. I prefer the character of the protagonist to be less weak (because of the world of heroines, some people may write heroine-like protagonists that are a bit feminine). The protagonist Xuan Ying and her master bullied her too much, so she became M? Mainly reflected in the plot of Duan Suqin as the protagonist, which is actually not appropriate. I think that based on her talent, she should be offline soon (unless she comes back as a dark person, you know the subsequent plot [shy]). Finally, I want to talk about the issue of clothes. The main problem here is that the protagonist wears a skirt. Some people may say that this is a world of female heroes, but in fact it is a bit like a gender change. I think normal clothes will be fine. Wearing a skirt may be to emphasize that this is a female-dominated world [laughing]. In fact, in the world of immortality, strength is the most important thing. I feel there is no need to overemphasize this world of female power [blowing kiss]
I really like the setting. Ziqiang also has delicate emotions. When I put forward two points, the first part of the plot is very general and can be expanded and written appropriately. Especially such general chapters cannot be connected together. Also, Xuan Ying and the protagonist's combat power is suppressed. This kind of male channel is especially careful not to suppress the combat power.
Xilan reservation [Love] [Like]
It is recommended to have more Shura fields and delicate emotional lines
Very interesting novel
Come on it's getting better and better
There are some mistakes that the author won't correct, but overall it's still a good recommendation.
Guys, all I can say is that it's so cool.
It's well written, but it's a pity that it wasn't published.
Good-looking is a normal female deity novel, and the male status is not as low as other female deities cultivating immortals. It is similar to sexual transformation like normal immortal cultivating essays.
I really like the image of the male protagonist portrayed by the author. He is so adorable and a bit fond of teasing people. I really want to ravage him [crying]
It's a pretty good novel about a female protagonist, and the plot doesn't drag on. But there are still some problems (the following is my personal opinion, if you don't like it, don't criticize [hit hard]). First, let's talk about the plot issues (currently up to the latest chapter 71). In Chapter 69, how did the three people from the Zhongtian Yan League know that the protagonist had the Xuanyin Holy Body? This is very unexpected, because this is the world of female lords. This kind of physique is equivalent to a furnace. Logically speaking, it is impossible for them to know (the author did not explain it). The second is the character of the protagonist. I prefer the character of the protagonist to be less weak (because of the world of heroines, some people may write heroine-like protagonists that are a bit feminine). The protagonist Xuan Ying and her master bullied her too much, so she became M? Mainly reflected in the plot of Duan Suqin as the protagonist, which is actually not appropriate. I think that based on her talent, she should be offline soon (unless she comes back as a dark person, you know the subsequent plot [shy]). Finally, I want to talk about the issue of clothes. The main problem here is that the protagonist wears a skirt. Some people may say that this is a world of female heroes, but in fact it is a bit like a gender change. I think normal clothes will be fine. Wearing a skirt may be to emphasize that this is a female-dominated world [laughing]. In fact, in the world of immortality, strength is the most important thing. I feel there is no need to overemphasize this world of female power [blowing kiss]
I really like the setting. Ziqiang also has delicate emotions. When I put forward two points, the first part of the plot is very general and can be expanded and written appropriately. Especially such general chapters cannot be connected together. Also, Xuan Ying and the protagonist's combat power is suppressed. This kind of male channel is especially careful not to suppress the combat power.
Xilan reservation [Love] [Like] It is recommended to have more Shura fields and delicate emotional lines
Very interesting novel
Come on it's getting better and better
There are some mistakes that the author won't correct, but overall it's still a good recommendation.
Guys, all I can say is that it's so cool.
It's well written, but it's a pity that it wasn't published.
Good-looking is a normal female deity novel, and the male status is not as low as other female deities cultivating immortals. It is similar to sexual transformation like normal immortal cultivating essays.
I really like the image of the male protagonist portrayed by the author. He is so adorable and a bit fond of teasing people. I really want to ravage him [crying]