
Taking Stock of the Collapsed IF Line, All Trains Were Breached
盘点崩铁IF线,列车组全破防
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 149k Words
- Genre
- Martial Arts
- Subgenre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
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In booklists 8
The Cos War-Damaged Version of the Character Traveled into This Character's World and Was Crazy and Distressed
I want to read a book like "Star Vault: After being kidnapped by the system and becoming the favorite of the Star Gods". It would be even better if there are all-oriented ones.
The Cos Battle-Damaged Version Dances in Front of the Real Owner
Beautiful, powerful, miserable, battle-damaged, brainwashed, fake sick and weak, I love you! ! ! !
Please Get Some Copies of the Bengtie If Series~ Please!
Want to watch something like "Surprise!" The game started as a big black tomb and was defeated on the spot." If not, can you just leave it alone? It's the kind of normal Bengtie novel. I've read a lot of posts like this before, and they all turned out to be irrelevant. As long as if, only if, only if.
Genshin Impact San Honkai Iron Movie Viewing Body
Void Manzo, Otto Apocalypse, Rakshasa, and Walter Young
Squat One and Collapse the Iron If Line and Create Two
You are right, but... Ms. Black Swan is unparalleled in beauty and wisdom. I hereby declare that I have never ridiculed, satirized, attacked or slandered Ms. Black Swan in any form on any occasion. Ms. Black Swan's kindness is not over yet✋
The Novel "Beng Tie" Cosplays into a Battle-Damaged Version😏
Want to watch something like "I'm really not Mo Yin Yanqing!" Content.
Genshin Impact Fanfiction
I want to see content similar to "Beng Tie: Yanqing was injured in the battle and was picked up by the space station at the beginning". Relying on a battle-damaged character, time travel to Tiwak or Bengtie
Find a Book! Find a Book! Find a Book!
Find books about the world of horror! ! I don't remember the name at all! I just remember that the protagonist cleared 999 in the first dungeon, and got a little red riding hood NPC, and the nickname Three Hammers






































The entry point of the story is very good, and the narration is also very attractive, but some small problems affect the perception. For example, the same dialogue is often repeated many times and is verbose. It is said once in the sky screen barrage, again in the chat outside the sky screen, and again at the beginning of the next chapter. Another example is that there are many ellipses. The author may want to express issues such as pauses in tone, but having ellipses on every page or even more than a dozen per page is still too much. I hope the writing will be better and better, waiting for your update!
There are no major shortcomings except the small number of words.