
Ranking Honkai: Star Rail's IF Routes: The Astral Express Crew Are All Shattered
盘点崩铁IF线,列车组全破防
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 149k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 10mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Cosplaying a Battle-Worn Version and Showing Up in Front of the Real Character
Beautiful, strong, and tragic; injured in battle; everyone imagining things; pretending to be frail. I love you!!!!
Genshin Impact and Honkai: Star Rail Fanfiction
Looking for stories similar to Honkai: Star Rail: War-Damaged Yanqing Gets Picked Up at the Space Station from the Start. Damn, I want a war-damaged character to transmigrate into Teyvat or Honkai: Star Rail.
Any Honkai: Star Rail Alternate-Timeline Fics? Please!
I'm looking for stories similar to Shock! I Became the Great Black Tomb from the Start and Got Killed on the Spot. Please don't recommend anything else. I mean normal Honkai: Star Rail novels. I've seen so many posts like this, but they were all unrelated. I only want if stories, only if stories, only if stories.
Cosplaying a Battle-Damaged Character, Transmigrated into That Character’s World and Fantasized Over with Endless Sympathy
Looking for books like The Star Dome: Kidnapped by a System and Becoming the Star Gods' Favorite. Even better if it's an all-characters ship.
Honkai: Star Rail Cosplay as a Battle-Worn Character
Looking for stories similar to *I'm Really Not Demon-Shadow Yanqing!*
Looking for a Honkai: Star Rail Alternate-universe Fanfic
You're right, but... Lady Black Swan is peerlessly beautiful and unmatched in wisdom. I hereby declare that I have never mocked, ridiculed, attacked, or slandered Lady Black Swan in any way or in any setting. I can never repay Lady Black Swan's kindness ✋
Genshin Impact, Honkai Impact 3Rd, and Honkai: Star Rail Watch-Along Fic
Void Archives, Otto Apocalypse, Luocha, and one more: Welt Yang
Looking for a Book! Looking for a Book! Looking for a Book!
Looking for books set in a horror game world!! I can't remember the title at all! I only remember the protagonist cleared level 999 in the first instance, got a Little Red Riding Hood NPC, and had the nickname Three Hammers.
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The entry point of the story is very good, and the narration is also very attractive, but some small problems affect the perception. For example, the same dialogue is often repeated many times and is verbose. It is said once in the sky screen barrage, again in the chat outside the sky screen, and again at the beginning of the next chapter. Another example is that there are many ellipses. The author may want to express issues such as pauses in tone, but having ellipses on every page or even more than a dozen per page is still too much. I hope the writing will be better and better, waiting for your update!
There are no major shortcomings except the small number of words.