Mortals Cultivate Demons: the Legend of Xuanyin

The writing is very careful, but the protagonist is too murderous and does not conform to public values ​​(killing innocent people indiscriminately to a large extent), which may not be comfortable. This is cautious, and there is no heroine element, but it is indeed a good work with good intentions, and it is still worth recommending The protagonist's performance is still a bit buggy as he has not yet come into contact with the Dan-forming monks. Not to mention that there are no Golden Core monks to recruit disciples, the protagonist has not come into contact with a Core Formation monk until now. Even if it is the Wu family who has been wooing the protagonist, even if there is no contact, he must still see someone from his own camp. It feels like the progress is too slow.

It's a very interesting book about a demon cultivator. The protagonist is cautious and knows how to deal with the world, and his combat power is not broken. I feel that as long as the author writes well, it will be no problem to get 9 points in the future. However, the proportion of the protagonist's blood channel is too small at present. Cultivating demons without cultivating blood, what is the difference between using the ghost brain to take off? [Laughing] From the current point of view, I feel that we can combine the image of blood and blood with the protagonist's Wind Step. The whole conventional blood escape can not burn the essence blood in normal times, but only burn ordinary energy and blood. Then the protagonist's skills can also be integrated with a little blood. At that time, in addition to corrosion and freezing, there will be another feature that absorbs energy and blood and continuously transforms it into the protagonist's mana to hinder injury recovery.

"Personal statement: personal senses, personal psychological true evaluation" The protagonist, a genius demon cultivator, uses science (cultivation) to reshape the world, and uses himself to innovate the chaotic and barbaric world of cultivation. When you first look at it, you feel like "our banner covers the sky and the sun, and our iron hoofs flatten all directions." It's not too late to invest in the stock market. Speculating on the principles of cultivation and tracing its origins to the rules of heaven, this is Xiao Qing's path to becoming a powerful person in cultivation. "It's up to oneself to tell one's heart, to judge what one hears and sees, to be stuck in the air and to have wishful thinking." From the perspective of the reader's heart, watching and contemplating, I have already gained a lot. Those in authority are confused, while others are clear. Those who don't want to follow the crowd are obsessed with sharpness. I also hope that after reading this book, I will become better than my master! To put it bluntly, the author of this book generally stands at a level that should not belong to him. The holes in the book are like ants covering a dike, which are all covered up by numerous reasons such as book shortage, wind direction, and creativity. The technique is ordinary, depicting the cracks in the upper story of the high-rise building, while the base shows a rough and solid sand. The excellence lies in the slowness of simple mortals, coupled with the trend of the times, and the readers' wishes. There is an old saying that goes, "If you chase two rabbits, you will lose one rabbit." The full text is frivolous and a dream. Some concepts that are not part of this book have been added. The essentially stereotyped fireflies emit light locally, no matter how big or small. Compared with the tail flames of meteors, they burn out instantly. There is almost no philosophy or philosophy in this work. Compared with component generators, the power consumption of electricity is comparable to that of photolithography machines, but it has different features. The beauty of the past has turned into embers and disappeared in the desert of time. Everything is just looking for the road. Without the road, the body cannot be understood, and without the body being understood, the mind cannot be understood. Let yourself return to your heart.

This is a magic novel that I like very much. It does not pursue vulgar routines and clichéd plots. Cautious, cold-blooded and rational, it is the thinking and creation of a genius cultivator, and the self-created parts can also be justified. The immortal cultivator has a reasonable number of years of practice. It does not have the common problem of most novels that are full of killings all the way. It is relaxed and can give people time to breathe.

It is a very good-looking novel about a mortal demon cultivator. There is not much grievance in the plot, and the protagonist who is aggrieved will come back. The protagonist is very vindictive and is very suitable for being a demon cultivator😏. It is quite refreshing, but it is not brainless, nor is it a purely refreshing novel. The plot narration is also very good and very clear. It ranks among the top novels about immortality that I have read in recent years. Recommended by old bookworms.

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes Lu Bu's battle with Sun Wukong for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot

The routine is still classic, but there is nothing poisonous about it. I hope there will be new ideas later. The writing is also good, but there is room for improvement. I also like the character of the protagonist, just like in the introduction. I hope there won't be a female protagonist in this book, just a female supporting role as a tool, and don't write about emotions! Come on, five-star praise is sent!

It feels good, it doesn't look boring, it has a good rhythm, and the plot is not bad. The author also reads comments, responds to readers, and absorbs readers' suggestions. I haven't seen this kind of author for a long time. Come on, author, I will always support you [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts] Alas, I have just read the latest chapter. Overall, it is a very good book about demon cultivating. The protagonist is a real first saint of the demon sect. He will do whatever it takes to achieve his goal. He must avenge his enemies. He is cunning and cunning. He is dedicated to the Tao. The first saint among the first saints has a very charming personality. I have read it a lot. I have written about Shao Mo Cultivation, but none of them is as good as this book. Those who are either demons are not thorough, or they still have the love of children. In short, I think this book is a masterpiece among demons and even immortals. I hope the author can stick to it. I will also promote this book. Come on✊

It's a good book. I thought it was a mortal fanfic at first and I didn't read it for a few times. Then I read a few pages and found out that the author is writing his own stuff. I've been reading novels for 15 years and I highly recommend this book. The author updates more than 6,000 words every day. I might consider splitting it into two chapters. I always feel that the progress is not enough. If this book continues to develop like this, it will become popular sooner or later.

1) How should I put it? I have never understood the protagonist's behavior and motivations. He has to hide his strength for a while, and show it for a while. The key is that he has spent nearly ten chapters against the enemy and has not yet taken a kill. It is very different from the various skills and secrets described above... 2) The means of dealing with the enemy are too simple. They are always evil snakes. The key is that they have no results. Needles and fire are not used flexibly in battle. Physical training is useless. It is just pressure of momentum... And some of them become watery when it comes to fighting and practicing secret techniques. I have exhausted the descriptions over and over again and read so many words without substantive advancement of the plot... 3) The protagonist has long been famous because of the talisman. Why didn't the master and apprentice faction come to win him over earlier and let him be won over by the family faction? The protagonist's origin is naturally neutral, right? And the protagonist is really frustrated... He is being plotted all the time, and there is no efficient counterattack. I really can't get any pleasure out of it [face covering] 4) However, the overall writing style and plot design are still very attractive, and it fits the name of the book very well. At least it can keep people reading. The author has also been improving and thinking about logical issues, far surpassing 99% of similar authors. The follow-up should be better.

This book is quite good. The plot progress is not too slow and smooth. The protagonist is also more careful and careful, not mindless. There will also be some new exercises and supplements such as training. The content is not monotonous or boring. One million words [shocked] It would be great if the author could update hundreds of times a day [face covering]

This book is good. The protagonist kills decisively and will retaliate. The protagonist's motto is, I don't have to retaliate for kindness, but I will retaliate for hatred [face covering] Too wordy. . . . Writing a few chapters about practicing a magical weapon is too watery. Why do you write so many details? Teach us how to practice. . . . The writing style is too ordinary, and the description of the fight is not exciting or exciting. Watching the fights makes people's blood boil and it's fun, but your fights don't feel fun at all when you write about them. The combat power feels like it's going up and down. In the early stage of foundation building, you can hit the ground in the five mid-term stages. Later, when you advance to the mid-stage stage, it actually takes more than half a day to fight the early stage and the mid-stage stage. Even if it takes more than half of the day, half of the mana is consumed. . This makes people unpredictable. It is not as strong as the early stage when it is promoted to the middle stage. . . . This book is very good. The main character is strong. However, the battle process is very tiring. It doesn't feel exciting but feels a little frustrating. I don't know if you feel this way. The advantage is that each chapter of more than 4,000 words or 6,000 words is worth two or three chapters, while others only have 2,000 words for one chapter. . . . . No matter whether they are on the righteous path or the devilish path, they are always cheating and selfish. You, on the righteous path, are all good people. Your demonic way is to slaughter some mortals, which is the magic way [like][like][like][like]. . . . Also, are you kidding me about the Wu family's Jindan family's experience in building the protagonist's foundation? ? And why should the Wu family of Xuanyin Jue follow you as a foundation-builder? You can directly kill people and seize treasures. I feel like what you wrote is like a child playing house. The four major families can have so much energy in the Nascent Soul Sect. Each family must have an ancestor in the late stage or even the peak of the Golden Core. If the four families in the early and middle stages of the Golden Core do not have such great energy, how can such a family talk to you in the face of a foundation builder? ? ? Do you have a background? Or is the second-level Talisman Master Yuanying Sect too important? Your angle is too low. . What you think does not take profit into consideration. . . . .

How can I put it this way? The content and style are my favorite type, but there are obvious small mistakes, which greatly affect the sense of immersion. Secondly, the writing style needs to be strengthened. Many places make people feel verbose, and some places feel that they can be written in detail but skipped quickly. In short, I hope the author will work hard.

It looks good, kills decisively, and doesn't drag on. IQ online. The fights are exciting. (If you want to read cool articles about flash sales, please leave now.) For Tomato, that is a rare masterpiece. Also, he has a lot of numbers in one chapter. He updates a chapter while others update it. Chapters 6, 7, and 8. You can drink a bottle of beer after reading one chapter (drinking without reading novels means not drinking at all.)

It's quite good-looking. The author's arrangements are reasonable and the combat power is also reasonable. It seems to have an outline and realm of combat power distribution. There are basically no poisonous points. The golden finger can't be said to be outrageous. It is gentle and reasonable. Maybe the golden finger has a little too much effect, but it is very good-looking. It is not strict but not stupid. It is brave and resourceful.

I still have endless aftertaste after reading this book for a long time. The characters created by the author are vivid and three-dimensional, not just a binary opposition between good and bad, but have a complete growth trajectory. The rhythm of the story is tight and appropriate, the foreshadowing is cleverly arranged, and the plot that advances layer by layer is immersive. Although a few branch plots are handled a little hastily, the flaws are not concealed. The thinking behind the story is interesting and worth reading calmly.

It's very beautiful. I saw it from yesterday to today, and it fascinated me. But it may be due to different tastes. I prefer to watch development plots and management plots. The protagonist's creation of magic is the most interesting part, so for me, the battle plot is more than one chapter, even if it is watered down or even released into the sea. However, the author may particularly like to write combat plots. Usually, he can write more than three chapters for a battle, and there are even more than ten chapters devoted to the battle. It can be seen that the author is good at writing about combat and likes to write about combat. I have nothing to say. After all, there is no way to accommodate me for my own taste. I am just a reader. All in all, I admire the character of the protagonist of this book very much, and the genius villain is very charming. I suggest that the author can make the protagonist more open-minded. For the protagonist, everyone in the world is just a talking monkey, and he is not a native here. The pressure in his heart can actually be completely non-existent.

Come on, what you wrote earlier is good, I hope it will become a masterpiece, and please update it soon! Come on, the writing is very good. Increase the update speed [blowing kiss]

A breath of fresh air in fairy tales. The writing is of high quality and the world construction is delicate; the plot is well laid out and forms an exquisite logical closed loop. This is by no means a mindless read, suitable for readers who pay attention to setting and intelligence.

5 Stars directly. The author is very rigorous in his writing. The techniques he creates are well-founded and his combat power is not broken. He will also leave his own understanding in the comment area, and his chapter IQ is online. There are basically no poisonous points, and if you point it out, the author will basically reply to you, either making corrections and thanking you, or discussing with you, and the interaction is full. This is also my favorite point, so I am also willing to spend some money to support it.

It's good-looking, and its advantage is that it's a genius. There is no other protagonist who doesn't know how to ask for help everywhere. The protagonist is ruthless, but the author has shown it in one stroke. He is not so uncomfortable, but clean and tidy. He is a dark-style mortal with his own innovation. The realm and strength are clearly explained and divided. The numbers are very reasonable. It can be seen that he has been specially thought about it. The disadvantage is that no protagonist can kill enemies across realms, even if he only relies on himself. The improvement of technology leads to an increase in overall strength, but this will reduce the sense of satisfaction brought by the improvement of realm, which can still be viewed rationally.

It's quite satisfactory. I've read more than 100 chapters so far, and I feel it's very bland, with no ups and downs. The protagonist has a smooth sailing and the God of Wealth. He hasn't gone through many hardships. If you want to improve your realm, you can improve it for a long time. If you have any skills, you can do it.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very thoughtful and ruthless. It's just that the wording is a bit exaggerated in some places. There are no other big problems. The author should work hard. I rarely give good reviews!

I have basically finished reading the fantasy fairy novels in a certain point and I came to Tomato to read it. I didn't expect that Tomato also has novels of this quality. There are no major bad points. I feel that in a certain point it is a high-quality novel and is better than most of the novels in a certain point.

The protagonist has talent and brains and is worth watching.

It's really, really good, not a new type of mindless cool novel. Maybe it's because most of the protagonist's actions are more in line with my thoughts. I give it 8.5 Points. It's worth reading. It's really a good novel in terms of Tomato.

Not bad, I listened to chapters 143-145 of the book to evaluate it. The combat descriptions are very visual, and the various moves and skills are described in detail, just like watching an anime. Although it doesn't have the excitement of big-scene battles like The Witcher, the description of this kind of one-on-one battle is still very good. It's rare to see it now, and even if it does, the author doesn't write it so smoothly.

It must be perfect. It's beautiful.

This one is much better than the other 9 o'clock ones [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

It is written with great care and I personally think it is very beautiful.