After Long Aotian Turned Dark, My Faked Death Failed

Hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey look good look good look good look good ,,,,,,,,, (, I want to see the protagonist cheating on Bushi)

I lost my appetite halfway through watching it, and I was disgusted by one sentence. After Shou came back from death, he saw the original sallow face and skinny face and said, "You can eat this kind of stuff like xxx" 😅😅 It's a bit ex. You left and said that you have no feelings. In what capacity do you evaluate the current incumbent at that time? Ex-boyfriend? I'm really speechless. Yuan Shushou didn't offend him.

Doesn't the introduction say that you can recognize it at first sight? How long will it take?

This feeling is like being sick

From the beginning, it seemed okay. The plot was very smooth and fast-paced. But later, after Shou died and returned in a different body, I felt that the male protagonist's liking for Shou's changed body was not particularly obvious. I couldn't tell whether he liked the previous shell or his current soul. There was a blurred line. Personally, I felt that he liked the previous shell, because the author described many male protagonists in the back. He missed Shou in the past. , Maybe because he couldn't accept this male protagonist for a while, but later because of some of Shou's words and actions, the male protagonist fell in love with the current Shou again. Later, the emotional development and communication between the two of them, as well as the plot twist, didn't feel like before. When I saw the later part, I really didn't understand the plot point where the male protagonist took Shou to see his previous body. Maybe I couldn't accept it this time, and also when they got married. Because Zhengzheng summons the ancient God of War, and Shou is the God of War. There is no foreshadowing of Shou as the God of War, so I just finished reading it. The author has now completed the chapter. I hope there will be explanations later.

It's good-looking❗️❗️❗️It has a strong flavor of the plot of ancient Chinese novels, but it's very fragrant and the bloody smell is a bit positive. I hope it won't break down later and go on sweetly and don't abuse [blowing kisses]

In fact, it was quite interesting in the beginning, but after more than sixty chapters, it was suddenly written: Gong has become crazy, he cares more about the corpse of Shou than the living Shou now, and even goes crazy and has murderous intention when Shou is tempted to dispose of the previous corpse. I probably know why I wrote this. After all, Gong has gone crazy and was tortured by his inner demons, and he is unconscious. But not long ago, Gong just suffered from a living person, and now he cares more about corpses... This makes me feel very strange. Is it the body or the soul that I love...

Very good article (´∀`*)~The writing style is very good~ Well, both the action and the portrayal of the protagonist's heart are "beautifully written", and the paragraphs of the article are also very clear. There is no drag, each paragraph is very crisp, without too much embellishment, which would make people feel bored. The plot is compact and can be written around one key point, and the settings of the two protagonists are also great. I just didn't like the plot at the beginning, but the changes are also very obvious. You can feel the changes in their relationship from many small details, which is very good! And I found that the author likes to describe some of the little moves between the two of them, which are very cute. If you like fools and indifferent gongs, you can take a bite. It's very fragrant and fragrant 😘 😘 😘

It's a bit outrageous, my family. Why are you attacking others? You are jealous just because you are jealous. Why are you attacking people? You can't save your character. The person you attack behind is also a bit outrageous. You like to be skinned by the original one. It's really outrageous [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

The male recipient is extremely feminine. The author's wording is very inappropriate and needs some improvement.