Comprehensive Manga: Entering the Wife's Home Under Yukinoshita at the Beginning

It's very good. The language is as quiet and comfortable as the melting winter snow in early spring. There is no rhythm that comes and goes, and it is very comfortable to read. It's amazing that I can read it calmly without having to be impatient. The author is talented Author, although your writing style is very good, maybe as you borrowed the words of the protagonist of the text, you have no habit of making an outline. Because after reading it, I found that the plot developed too slowly, and there were too many side descriptions about the protagonist's works. Of course, this is not to say that this is bad, but the good premise is that you will keep writing. And most works related to comics will die prematurely, so readers like fast-paced plots, so your writing method is actually not good (as far as I am concerned). In terms of your simplicity, this book may be a harem, but so far there are too few plots about other female protagonists. If you want to have a single female protagonist, please don't sell it, unless you will keep writing until the harem is complete, (but from my experience, this is impossible). So now I can either hurry up and sketch the Super Shura Field and Super Crystal Palace, or write a book for the rest of my life (even covered) Also, your plot about emotions or ambiguity is too short and too short. It is best to expand it and write more. The whole story feels a bit rational and does not meet the demands of those of us who like to see characters struggling in emotions.

Reading the latest chapter in one breath is a rare detail in a variety show. If it were a single heroine of Yang Milk, it would be perfect. But since it is a variety comic and there are other female characters, I feel that Yang Milk's progress is a little faster. According to her character, I can't imagine how serious Yang Milk could lose or compromise when she has such a big lead. Or should I say that the two sides will have a relatively big conflict and break up. Let's see the author's follow-up arrangements.

It is necessary to do some popular science: there is no comparison between the Yukinoshita family and the Chitanda family. The Yukinoshita family is a modern version of an elite family, that is, a local financial family, while Chitanda Airi was born in a rich peasant family, one of the four major families in Kamiyama City, which belongs to the aristocratic and landlord families of the old era. For example, Shinomiya Kaguya's family, the Shinomiya Zaibatsu, Suzuki Sonoko's family, the Suzuki Foundation, and Koenji Rokusuke's Koenji Foundation are the real top families.

A very delicately written novel! I've read more than 50 chapters. There's nothing wrong with this novel, but I always felt something was wrong and couldn't get into it. To be honest, without the blessing of extraordinary power or feudal culture, unless there is a coincidence or the blessing of the plot, it is not easy to develop the plot towards the harem normally. I don't know if the author has ever been in love. Under normal circumstances, once a person gives true love, he can only focus on the next person, whether in his eyes or in his heart. Of course, except for the old fried dough sticks. . How to say it. . As a time-traveler, it's quite pretentious to engage in a battle of wits and courage with the air at the beginning, but to covet a warm embrace. And pay attention to the title. In the early stages of my career, I didn't have enough love, so I just jumped into two different things. I really thought that time-travelers would not be beheaded by three swords and six holes, so they should stay underwater in Tokyo Bay for a long time. At least, they should have enough business and economic foundation before doing it.

It's very good, both in terms of writing and the rhythm of plot advancement. It's hard to imagine that this is actually a work by Tomato. What is needed now is persistence + luck. The writing style is more suitable for Niang or Mao, remember to create a group If possible, it is best to revise the first few chapters. The text is too dense and I don't even want to read it. Divide it into multiple paragraphs. It is best to have no more than two sentences per paragraph. If Xuanjian X's family next door remembers correctly, it is almost one sentence per paragraph.

It's quite good. In fact, I hate reading variety comics because they are all a splicing of various world views and it's unnatural. However, this book is quite well written and gives a different feeling. I hope the author doesn't want to be a eunuch. It's really good to watch. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It would be a pity if the single heroine was invincible

This book is excellent. It is a rare masterpiece among fan fiction. The author writes very well about the relationship and life between the protagonist and Harno. The description of the relationship is far better than other fan fiction. Reading other fan fiction cannot feel the details and emotional exchanges between people. It feels like drinking industrial alcohol. However, this book can make people immersed in the protagonist's interactions with other people. I also hope that the author can continue his efforts, write good articles, and tell good stories. [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

I seem to have seen [laughing and crying] before, is it 🐱?

The writing in the early and middle stages is very good, but the ending in the later period is somewhat regretful. A good beginning, a short-lived middle period, a pretty good and warm daily life, and the most regrettable ending. I hope the author can think more carefully about the next book and put more effort into not letting the ending become a regret for the book.

The main and secondary storylines are well detailed, and the plot design is reasonable and not obtrusive. The emotional rendering perfectly fits the theme. The character description is even more impeccable, the direct and indirect depictions of the male and female protagonists complement each other, and the supporting characters are not stereotyped. It's rare to see a novel that's not a running account, so I'd like to give it five stars to support it. But for now, the three emotional lines don't matter to Shuangwen novels, but if you, the author, are not good at writing and forcefully recruit three women, the whole book will collapse. I knew it.

The writing is very detailed and really good. It gives me the feeling of just sitting in that environment, and then I can unknowingly figure out the protagonist's psychology and dialogue.

It looks good, I love reading it, the author will update it soon, it's a bit unreadable [laughing]

Advantages: The writing is good, and it is very comfortable to read. It is a different kind of spring monotony, especially the light novel of Bunchaogongbuchao. Disadvantages: There are few updates and development is a bit slow.

It didn't quite match the introduction, and Jing Keai didn't become the heroine. But it was changed to Kasumigaoka.

The writing style is the kind that you won't scan over at a glance and go straight to the next page, but you will read it slowly. The atmosphere feels quite comfortable.

Personally, I like it better, but it ends too quickly.

It looks good, cheers for the author [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very good, you can watch it for a long time

Come on, it looks pretty

Very nice. This work is great.

The writing is really good

It looks good and suits me better.

When will Yukino appear?

Very good looking very good looking

Another serious person~, hey!

It's pretty good and I can watch it [shy]

It's better to support Lao Zu and give him some positive feedback, but to be honest, Lao Zu has to continue to work hard.

Awesome, it's the first time I've seen Yang Yang🤣

It's very nice, and it's still being developed step by step.