[Comic / No CP / Lighthearted comedy / Slight character distortion]
Luo Ming lives in a contamination zone, one of the most terrifying monsters there.
But he pretends to be an ordinary person, runs a shop, and assassinates aberrant creatures. He may be cold, but with a gentle, adorable little sister by his side, life is still pretty happy.
Then one day, something called Comic Consciousness came online, shattering Luo Ming’s beautiful illusions and peaceful life.
His sister had died long ago. He was a villain, and everything he did was just there to make the protagonist look awesome.
Comic Consciousness wanted Luo Ming to serve the protagonist, but Luo Ming refused. He didn’t want his sister to die! He wouldn’t become a stumbling block!
Luo Ming chose the method he thought would be most useful: opposing the protagonist.
But readers always sided with the protagonist. With no other choice, Luo Ming created secret identities and befriended the protagonist, while his real self stayed behind and plotted when to strike.
Once he realized the protagonist wasn’t all-powerful, he started figuring out ways to drag him down with him.
Remembering his sister’s face, he created secret identities that were uniquely his own.
Luo Ming used secret identities to give his friends’ faces a place in the world, only to discover they couldn’t act like real people the way he’d imagined.
Luo Ming went mad, pouring all his heart and effort into creating truly living... people.
The protagonist wanted to assassinate him, rid the world of evil, and rally the residents of Anle Town to kill Luo Ming.
But nobody was willing. Why? The upper-class nobles had been ruthlessly exploiting them. The protagonist belonged to the upper class and had never felt it. Luo Ming was the one who had pulled each of them toward hope!
Luo Ming smiled. “Look at me. I won.”
It's a nine-chapter baby. It can be seen that Liexi's imagination and plot are very good. However, I think Liexi's writing skills can be better. The current problem is that the writing is more colloquial and there is no descriptive technique. On the contrary, there is too much psychology, which makes the plot less and more streamlined (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) There is almost no description of passers-by. Some action language can be added ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) But Mi thinks that Liexi wants to write an egoist protagonist who loves small money. The protagonists of this type are basically bad but also have a sense of fun. Through these two vests, it can be seen that I want to write the protagonist's bad and cool master level, but because of the lack of writing power, I can only write the protagonist's villain feeling and the vest's sense of frustration (´ε` )♡However, Liexi is a new author and can write like this, which is great♡I hope Liexi writes better and better, and I also wish Liexi a happy birthday (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*[][][]
It's not bad but it still doesn't feel very attractive. Come on, teacher! I believe the teacher will get better and better [top post]