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It's a nine-chapter baby. It can be seen that Liexi's imagination and plot are very good. However, I think Liexi's writing skills can be better. The current problem is that the writing is more colloquial and there is no descriptive technique. On the contrary, there is too much psychology, which makes the plot less and more streamlined (｡•ˇ‸ˇ•｡) There is almost no description of passers-by. Some action language can be added ( •̥́ ˍ •̀ू ) But Mi thinks that Liexi wants to write an egoist protagonist who loves small money. The protagonists of this type are basically bad but also have a sense of fun. Through these two vests, it can be seen that I want to write the protagonist's bad and cool master level, but because of the lack of writing power, I can only write the protagonist's villain feeling and the vest's sense of frustration (´ε｀ )♡However, Liexi is a new author and can write like this, which is great♡I hope Liexi writes better and better, and I also wish Liexi a happy birthday (❁´◡`❁)*✲ﾟ*[][][]

It's not bad but it still doesn't feel very attractive. Come on, teacher! I believe the teacher will get better and better [top post]