Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, Two Dreams

Although there is a "group portrait" label, but because of the "multiple female protagonists" and "no system", I still want to give it a try. It turned out that after reading Chapter 10, I was wrong. In the past, those traditional fantasy people really liked to plug in the male protagonist when he first entered the sect, and they used unavailable drag brothers, but basically there was only one. In the end, you stuffed a lot of them, and the plot tied them very tightly to the male protagonist👍🏻 The "group portrait" label is still too cool

The protagonist who is calm + decisive in killing + attaches great importance to love and justice is indeed possible. There is nothing particularly new in the plot and setting of this book. It is just the same as the classic in traditional fantasy. However, the author's writing style is good and the look and feel of the writing is very good. It is worth reading. No 😂? This collection of girls is a bit too much. Although I also like multiple heroines, with so many girls, there is too little writing allocated to each female character.

Is it a group portrait? Apart from the protagonist, the roles of the other characters are quite good. I don't like this kind of plot very much, but the author writes well and has a good grasp of the rhythm. The parts that should be skipped are not delayed, so it is not difficult to read. The word count is not too many. I finished it in one go. I will give you 5 stars for encouragement.

It is truly a work of meticulous care and subtlety. Excellent writing style and ethereal artistic conception "Donghua Biography and Practice Records": Daozu was born in a humble background, and his spiritual roots were all broken. However, he rarely had the ambition to reach the sky, and his love was the most profound. He traveled thousands of miles for his promise. During the trip to Jiazhou, Daozu was guarding the merchants when he encountered a tiger on the road. Daozu fought hard and killed it with three punches. He smiled and told everyone, why should they be afraid? In fact, they are extraordinary people and extraordinary things. "Xuanli Qunxian Lu": Li Xiao was born as a beggar. He was punished by heaven and his spiritual roots were all destroyed. When he was young, he lived in a Taoist temple and kept company with the gangsters in the market. His nature was really bad. When Xiao meets a merchant for the first time, he wants to steal his goods, so he goes with him. When he encounters a tiger on the road, everyone rises up and fights. Xiao takes advantage of this opportunity to steal everyone's goods, and then he has the foundation to establish himself.

Please add some ratings. This novel is indeed good. It's 6:00. I'm so sorry for the content [face covering]. The exposure is too small. There are already more than two hundred chapters. The later writing feels a bit rushed. Maybe the author didn't plan well.

The plot and characters are okay, but the writing skills are a little off. I personally feel that the score of 6 points is a bit too low. There don't seem to be many people following the update, but the author updates it steadily. I am afraid that the update will stop one day, so I will comment to support it. There are basically no poisonous points in my impression. There are indeed a lot of harem female characters, but the character characteristics are still quite distinct, and there are no multi-female scene descriptions similar to Shura Field. Most of them are 1v1 with the male protagonist, so the emotional line is very clear. Maybe the pace is a little fast, or the writing feels a bit abrupt. Some critics complained that the supporting actor Chang Ming had too many roles. This was because there were not many people in the harem in the early stages. When Chang Ming was mentioned in the later stages, it took him a while to remember this person. It was far less exaggerated than those low-scoring reviews said.

It is a good traditional fantasy book with a fast pace. The main character is strong and normal, and it is very comfortable to read. The heroines have been together for many years and everyone has their appearance scenes. It is not difficult to remember. However, there is no very thin personal line and the characteristics of the characters are not very prominent. As long as the protagonist and his group meet with different people or forces and their own development are mainly described, the description is carried out.

My favorite genre, the traditional fantasy of cultivating immortals, I will watch it for the rest of my life! The author keeps writing, it is very good so far, the narrative is stable, and the story is told in a leisurely manner. I hope that the world of cultivating immortals will be more exciting in the following chapters.

Yes, I've read dozens of chapters and it's already a Tomato 99 novel. The low score may be due to having a harem, the eunuch's score

The author writes in a hurry, and there are many areas that could be expanded. The dialogue and emotions between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are all touched upon, and you can see the development process, but it is very fast. After reading Chapter 188, I feel like I have read a whole novel. The story is quite interesting, but the author is very anxious, very anxious! ! !

This novel is a novel that I have read for the second time recently. The overall plot and the character of the protagonist are very suitable for my taste. However, based on my experience of reading so many novels on Tomato, this novel is difficult to become popular. If it were ten years ago, even if it would not be popular, it would not be unknown.

The writing is okay, and the plot is okay, but the golden finger is too big, which affects my personal reading experience.

It's so affectionate and righteous, it's really a good product. I couldn't sleep all night after watching it. Keep it up, it will definitely become popular. Several heroines have been accepted, don't give away the heroine, and they all stay together if they have a crush on the protagonist.

It's a novel about an old friend. I've read a little bit of it and it's pretty good. But every time I read the plot of this novel, I always think of that book. [Cover face] After the scores were released, I discovered that it was 6:1 [face covering]. Is there anything wrong with this novel? I'll take a look at the other reviews first, it's really interesting.

Personally, I think it's pretty good-looking, and there's nothing wrong with it. I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's not in line with Tomato's current themes? This kind of traditional feeling is still not popular, and there are still too few people reading it. I feel like the author can't make much money [laughing and crying]. I hope the author can insist on finishing it. I have saved more than 20 chapters now. I want to finish it. I hope it won't be unfinished [I'm about to cry]

Since the book "The Lifeline of the Hehuan Sect" was sealed, I often think of the plot in it, and my heart is full of excitement, imagination, the intersection of time and space, the pleasure of reading, being immersed in it, and the urge to constantly explore the plot. Finally, now, when I read this masterpiece, that feeling, everything came back! Listen to the wind without worries, the falling snow makes you sleep, Tianyuan is in prison, you and I are in prison together. Pisces Zhenyuan, the gate of Tianyuan. Will the plot be set at the Gate of the Abyss forever? It's really beautiful. In special chapter 101, Mei Tianzuo's crazy performance is really vivid and lifelike, so beautiful. But I have to go to bed. I've been watching all night and it's already nine o'clock. It's considered the latest one, emmm The author's writing is really good, and I really like his writing style! There is nothing to say about the plot. Although I mispredicted the core of the book earlier, it was still perfectly developed. The pace was fast and enjoyable. I really admired many of the omissions. The lack of quality alone is worthy of 5 stars. The story is told quite wonderfully! Old routines are also new tricks. After all, I have read too many fantasy fairy tales. The elements, events, and development patterns are all the same. It just depends on how to tell the story well. The characters are also well described. The author is really great. It really shocked me. With only a few strokes, a character's image is vividly displayed on the page. Many characters are portrayed. This kind of writing power is really amazing. Of course, when it comes to the issue of female characters, this is a major regret of this book, and it is also a common problem. At the beginning, it took a lot of effort and effort to get to know the female characters. However, the female characters that I got to know later (it was obvious at about 70,000 to 800,000 words) were a bit sloppy, and the progress was a bit too fast. Then after I collected it, I put it in the vase. As I read it later, I forgot about the character of the female character in the front. There seemed to be almost no difference between the ten Taoist couples. The label was Taoist couple, and I couldn't refine it any more. It's a common problem and nothing to blame. But I am still very grateful for this book, it is very refreshing and powerful! The protagonist setting is my favorite, about the chaos of yin and yang and the five elements, as well as the full-time character, plus the sword. My favorite setting. My favorite protagonist paired with such a refreshing story is perfect. I really appreciate the author for writing this novel. I had a great time reading it! Finally, I wish the author a prosperous literary career and immediate success!

It looks comfortable and plain,

I watched it in one night, it wasn't enough [crying]

Excellent book, for me The score is really low. The other 8 and 9 books are not as good as this one. It's far behind.

To be honest, it's pretty good. Could the author consider interspersed with writing personal stories about each heroine to enrich the image of each heroine? Nowadays, so many heroines sometimes mention who is there and occasionally get stunned. This can also avoid the common shortcomings of the heroine becoming a vase in the later stage of harem novels. This book style makes me feel very comfortable when reading it.

Why did the rating drop after not watching it for a few months [face covering]

Although there is a lack of ups and downs in the early stage, it adds a sense of indifference. It is not very able to arouse people's emotions, but overall it is still good.

It's still very good, but too few people have read it. I hope the author can stick to it.

I stayed up late and read over a hundred chapters, it was so good that I couldn't stop.

I saw a comfortable, very traditional novel about cultivating immortals [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

The early stage is a bit slow, I feel like it takes about 30 pictures to start, and there are too many girls but not a bit white.

Ok ok Toko once said something that makes a lot of sense: be emotionally close to mediocre parents, but stay far away from them in life.

Fast paced, concise and clear, good.

Beautiful, well written

Not bad, good, good