The Great Wizard of Hogwarts

Chapters 224 and 225 were so enjoyable to read [Admiration] This article is excellent, and there are currently no disturbing descriptions (no elements of yy, the whole world loves to eat Chinese food, and molesting 11-year-old girls). It feels very comfortable to read.

Come on, I have read a lot of hp novels. I have seen masters and apprentices who have transformed under the guidance of Professor Si. I have also seen me cheating on my own and shocking Teacher Si. This is the first time I have seen an author write like this. It does not give Teacher Si any face at all (that's it! This is what I want to read!). The protagonist is also very good. He doesn't go with a trio, and there is no traditional entertainment night tour. Only Ron, a big mouth, will reveal key information to the protagonist, and the complaints about teaching at Hogwarts are also very cool [laughter]

Very well written. I have long been tired of seeing criminal protagonists who are just like throwing away the humanity brought by nine years of compulsory education [grievance]. It seems that modern society has been holding back for too long and time travel has liberated its nature and made Kuku anti-social, losing morality and losing its outlook on life. People just need to see more positive people in order to live their lives [send heart]. The protagonist has a good outlook on life, but he is not a holy father. Snape handled everything well. Although the protagonist didn't insist on doing anything to Sirius because he had been in prison for more than ten years, he didn't unilaterally forgive him for Snape. The protagonist is also very strong, but he doesn't pretend. The stronger one is more reasonable. He is a very charming and mature male protagonist who is not naive in his thinking. I hope to deal with the Saints as soon as possible. To be honest, those Saints feel a bit like undercover agents sent by Voldemort. Grindelwald's reign was not as hateful as they are now. The author speeds up the update! Quick, quick, quick! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

Generally speaking, don't always think about going back to China. If you travel through time, there will be a protagonist on this earth who has not traveled through time. The parents of the protagonist will not have any pain of losing a child. Just write normally.

After reading it for a while, I am quite satisfied with this HP fanfic; first of all, what I like the most is the arrangement of the protagonist's academy. He is arranged to go to the academy that suits him upright, instead of thinking about the "Snake Academy Lion Heart" setting that is both necessary and necessary; secondly, the setting of some of the protagonist's abilities is endorsed by "Huo Yi", so it doesn't seem too weird. It is abrupt and incomprehensible, and there will be no collapse of the setting; then, there is the arrangement of the protagonist's combat power. Finally, it is not a matter of seconds. I don't know what to say about the kind of character that can beat Voldemort and Dumbledore at once. Why write a growth plot when the combat power is so high? Due to the author's intention, many new HP settings have been added to the magical world, and the cultural integration of other countries has also been done very well. Finally, it is not a mindless tout of "Taoism" and "immortal cultivation", but a hard integration and cultural dissatisfaction. Here is a thumbs up for the author. Next, there is the protagonist's character. The older soul will not be arrogant, but still has a sense of arrogance. Young and energetic, full of courage, seeing rough roads, and integrating knowledge and action, it is very "protagonist" character, but not cliche; finally, it is the plot, the summary is: let the beauty last longer, let the regrets be filled, let the happiness be gentle, and occasionally a little funny, come and read it, come and read it, a very high-quality fanfic [laugh][laugh][laugh]

The writing is good, mainly due to the strong sense of immersion. Other HP fans are either a bit arrogant because of their status as time travellers, or they have a low sense of presence. The protagonist is like a camera and they only copy the original plot. It's still difficult to figure out the middle level. Orphanage birth + admission process settings are already commonplace, so a somewhat novel setting will stand out. The protagonist sometimes comes up with a little different and novel ideas. Moreover, it does not describe how painful it was before the time travel, nor how difficult it was after the time travel, which leaves readers with a bad feeling. This is a very relaxed tone. The protagonist does not have any PTSD or unspeakable mental illness. He is a happy-go-lucky type.

It's relatively bland, and then with the group, it feels like the plot doesn't seem to change much regardless of whether there is a protagonist or not. The protagonist is like a camera that has traveled through time in Harry Potter. Because the original plot has basically not changed, except that a protagonist has been added.

Tied, not happy. Finally, there is a Harry Potter fan who doesn't lick Snakeyard and Snape, and is honest and kind at heart.

It captures the excitement of the magical world of Hogwarts, and it doesn't feel like being a nanny the whole time. It has its own rhythm. The only problem is that the times are still few.

I really like the rants in it. And the most important thing is that he is not Harry's nanny (just like a friend who needs a helping hand). Secondly, the protagonist has his own plans and thinking, and does not develop completely according to the original work. Of course, there are some shortcomings. The plot of the mystery of the past life is not very well written (it feels like the protagonist can find out that his original home is lived by another family. The number of people can match, but the people are not the same people. The protagonist can find that this is a parallel world without family members in the past life, and completely let go) Finally, why is the author so slow in updating? There are only more than 200,000 words so far! ! ! ! Hurry up and write [angry][angry][angry]

I have read more than 300 chapters seriously overnight. It is very exciting. I feel that every chapter will not make me bored. I look forward to the day when I can see the end (children, why have all the wonderful novels I read been stopped)? I like the character of the protagonist very much. Even if he travels through time, he can maintain his true heart. He obviously has a clear bottom line for good and evil (is this an adult who has been settled for 30 years?) And it should be fun. If Allen doesn't retaliate immediately, it means that he is going to make a big move (we still don't know how Allen will punish the little reporter during the holiday). He was scared to cry. Mr. Allen [cryed] did not dare to cry for fear of triggering water magic (although water magic is not triggered by tears) It's great not to have a female protagonist. They're all about friendship at the moment. It's really fun to watch them get along. If it's finished, will there be a sequel to the movie? I really want to see it. If there is a movie-watching extra, everyone in the comment area will do anything [cry][cry] According to authentic and reliable unofficial records, Ellen is actually a princess. First of all, he has magic long hair (black hair before time travel and blond hair after time travel). Secondly, magic hands (do you still need to explain this? They are both magical and ancient magic) and can talk to small animals (after turning into a robin, you can understand the words of the little fat bird). Finally, people around you think that Allen's difficulties are solved by men (Alan himself is a man, and this is how he solves his own difficulties)

It's a good-looking, enjoyable story. The protagonist has a firm sense of belief and takes action when it's time to take action. There is no inexplicable forgiveness and tolerance. For example, Draco gets away every time he commits a crime, and when it comes to the bottom line, he directly deals with the bear parents behind him. The career line is very exciting, but there seems to be no emotional drama

Snape and Harry's father are rivals. It is impossible for him to bully Snape for a long time as the protagonist said. First, Snape invented the Golden Bell. If Snape had never used it on anyone, how did Harry's father learn it? It could only be that Snape used it on other people and Harry's father saw it, or that Snape used it on Harry's father at least once before Harry's father learned it. Second, in the original text, Sirius mentioned that Snape was a member of a small group of Slytherins. After graduation, almost all of these people became Death Eaters. Snape was not alone. He most likely fought back and forth with his associates and Sirius's group. Third, Snape's memory has a sequel. Combining the context, we can know that the reason why this memory caused Snape pain is that the mudblood he said made him completely lose Harry.

As a normal Gryffindor student, I was really shocked when I saw the protagonist fucking Snape. It turns out that I can beat the professor after traveling through time! Of course, there must be some people who don't like this kind of beating Snape, but from the perspective of a student, Snape is indeed very bad, and he really hates teachers who have no teacher ethics.

Although I am a fan of the Sri Lankan religion, the Sri Lankan religion described in this book is not too bad, and it is in line with the image of the original work! As for the protagonist's dissatisfaction with Sri Lanka's teaching, it's normal. Unless he knows his tear-making operations later, it's hard to have a good impression of him.

I finally found a novel on Tomato with a normal person as the main character, who has IQ, emotional intelligence, morals, and doesn't fall in love. The writing has a rhythm, and every paragraph I write is in my comfort zone, as if there is a normal person who talks to me normally and doesn't blame me. This protagonist is not cute at all, but he pokes fun at my cuteness for no reason. Can you imagine what kind of immortality this is?

The author can change his name. This name doesn't make people want to click on it at all [crying] I can say that this is one of the best Harry Potter books I have read on Tomato. However, some settings may have problems. I finished it in about a day. I personally think it is extremely beautiful. It is the top Harry Potter book in Tomato juice.

It's super interesting to write! ! ! Super invincible and beautiful! ! ! I even think this will be a great help for me to travel to HP hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha, in short, it's really good-looking! ! ! The male protagonist also has a great personality! ! !

Liang Cao is mediocre, the protagonist is not like a homebody in the popular sense, and treats things like an older person.

It's okay, but there are too many psychological activities and there are no explosive points so far, but the writing is good.

The story flow is very smooth and the description is also very detailed. The author has his own unique and logically consistent understanding of the magical world. There are no flaws in the overall reading [I understand]

When you go to the basement of the forbidden book area, there are portraits of the four ancient magic guardians, and when you go to the principal's office, you should also be able to see the guardian principal. This book combines the original novel with the game very well, but there are too few updates every day [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The premise of a great wizard is insane, and the protagonist certainly delivers. The textual research, detail processing and some emotional scenes are all very well written. Overall very nice looking. P. S. Jinx itself means curse, so the snowball jinx written by the author is actually the name of the spell rather than the spell itself. It would be better if it could be changed.

It's a good novel, based on the original work and the game. The plot is very interesting and more everyday, and there are no poisonous points or heroine at the moment [laughing]

Returning to his hometown, he discovered that the world was a poisonous spot, which created a paradox. The existence of the Law of Secrecy made the wizard hide. How did he know about Harry Potter? What I'm talking about is how do you know that Harry Potter is a book?

It's quite interesting. I haven't read the original work anyway, so I don't care about the setting. After traveling through the mind, I became like a real child, making reckless mistakes regardless of the severity.

It feels good so far. It is described from the perspective of the protagonist instead of blindly following the Harry Potter story line. It is not too cookie-cutter. It feels like only some main events will be involved, and it has the protagonist's unique perspective and thinking (for example, from the perspective of the protagonist, Dumbledore is Slip's protective umbrella). So far, it seems okay.

Nice! Beautiful without any tricks! There are no badly used routines or overly exaggerated descriptions, it is just pure narrative and purely fascinating!

It can be said to be one of the best HP fanfics I have ever seen. The protagonist is very sober. He has not read the original work, so there is no filter, and he has the self-awareness and discrimination of an adult. It's really great to fight back against school bullying without hesitation, and to be responsible and action-oriented when assessing the situation.

Overall, it's great, but it may be a little annoying at first because a large part of it is devoted to the plot of the game.