Book 8 of Jealous Ann

I read it in one sitting, and the later parts are very well written. I have some personal suggestions. If you write on the Tomato platform, you can split long paragraphs appropriately, which is more in line with the reading habits of platform users. When writing about policies, you can break them into pieces appropriately. Don't make one paragraph too long. Occasionally, it's OK, but if you write the entire article like this, it's not very in line with the reading habits of platform users. There is a lot of description about demeanor and expression in the first half, which doesn't look very comfortable, but it gets much better in the later part, and there is much less such description. Don't always end the article with one or two paragraphs describing facial expressions and actions. Reading too many of them will make you feel bored. Instead, leave a hook and grabber for the rest. You can read the book "I'm in the Heavenly Lao, Immortal". I've been following it. Even if this dog author only reads two books a day, I'm still following it, but the reading experience is not bad. Regarding officialdom articles, my personal reading understanding is that people always like to read some communication and interactions with female friends. The author can think about this aspect of his next book. The tone of this book has been set and there is no way to change it. There is also the fact that the protagonist is too impersonal and feels perfect. There is no way for a perfect reader to get involved, or enm..., There is nothing interesting other than the officialdom. It seemed like it was just going up and up, and I jumped a lot in front of me. I hope the author can finish it. I rarely comment on writing, so keep it up.

A very nice novel, very well written, and the specific words are very appropriate.