Pirates: All Members Are Training Hard, the Straw Hats Are Going Crazy

What is good-looking is not someone who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, and will not change the original character settings beyond recognition. Fan fiction is created on the basis of respecting the original settings, with justice and one's own persistence. It would be perfect if there were some humorous and funny elements in the original work, but it is not bad now. Changed [face covering]

Among the pirates I have watched, there are only a few who follow the ship. The author's writing style and descriptions have something of his own. It is very interesting and I am looking forward to the next development of the plot. Cheers, author [Love]

It's good-looking, the protagonist is clearly positioned, and he doesn't inexplicably think of himself as the captain.

It looks good for now, but I hope the protagonist can find some good materials to rebuild the weapon. After all, the blacksmith in a village has limited skills and the materials used are average.

It's a great fanfic about Funagaku. The author has his own innovations and changes to the original plot. However, there is a slight disadvantage that the protagonist always likes spoilers. Just like when Ace was introduced in the latest plot, Luffy didn't even introduce the protagonist and directly told Zoro and others that he was Luffy's sworn brother. You can say that you know Ace as the captain of the second division of the Whitebeard Pirates. After all, you can say that he has relatively broad knowledge, but how does the protagonist know about the friendship between Ace and Luffy?

It's very interesting. This is probably the most interesting One Piece spin-off I've ever read. There's nothing bad about the scenes where I like the male protagonist, and it's reasonable for everyone to become powerful [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It's very enjoyable to write. It's the first time I've read Kotake's "One Piece". It gives his companions a layer of copper skin and iron bones. The use of devil fruits is also very wonderful. Nami got the Thunder Fruit, and Meili got the Tunton Fruit. These developments are very nice. It feels like a hot-blooded comic has a brain. The protagonist is this brain. I like this idea so much.

This is a book that makes me want to keep chasing it. It is so rare for me. It is invincible without a cheating at the beginning. It grows together. The writing is smooth and delicate. It is not much different from the original characters. There is no OOC. It is a good book for me. I hope the author can stick to it and don't become a eunuch that day. That is really uncomfortable. Later, the original work was changed beyond recognition.

Different from the usual One Piece, the male protagonist's unique training method has been added, which greatly increases the strength of the protagonist group, and the combat power is written very rigorously, so that readers will not feel that the combat power is unparalleled or overwhelming. Furthermore, the plot will not be too similar to the original work. Even with the author's own changes, it is still very special. Yes, the increase in combat power mainly revolves around the unique training method of the protagonist. Unlike other novels, where the domineering power increases at every turn, such as a great swordsman, and then boasts so high, but still cannot defeat the general. This is the so-called suppression of combat power, which gives readers a very bad impression. This novel does not have this problem. However, according to the original story, the progress of the plot is not great, but the combat power is already that of all VS generals. It is quite enjoyable in terms of viewing. Is there any bad point? I just don't know how to write it in the future. I don't know what will happen to him after his combat power increases. I always feel that the author has passed the plot very quickly. The current plot has reached the point of bravely entering the impel city.

Less plot (still the main thing) 1. Where are the Creek Pirates after Hawkeye fights? I remember that the original Hawkeye didn't care, right? 2. I don't know if I didn't write it or something. Why didn't you write it, Dasqi? (Also (self-feeling) don't change the plot of Luffy's Guillotine) It's already passionate. If the character needs to use other things later, why change this? (Do not raise personal issues) The other writings are pretty good and you can read them. Good luck to the author [like][like][like]

Okay, there is no too advanced strength growth but there is progress. Good grasp

Author, author, is there a female protagonist? I hope there is a female protagonist.

My personal suggestion is to take the protagonist to the flower country when encountering a bear in the early stage and then strengthen the protagonist's martial arts skills. After all, the protagonist only knows how to use a big gun. You can go to Huaguo to learn marksmanship and boxing techniques from other martial arts.

Very good. The protagonist has his own training system and growth. It's very interesting.

The best among One Piece fans, with a unique style in the ship, unlike some protagonists who either drift with the crowd like a gangster or dominate the limelight and overshadow everyone, like the Straw Hats turning into NPCs. This book has a good grasp of the scale, and truly describes partners, bonds, and growth. This is what we like about One Piece. The combat system is well created, and the combat scenes are super exciting. The shortcoming is that the author did not polish some plots carefully enough. For example, in the adventure of Alabasta, Weiwei's mount Karu Duck disappeared, mr4 and ms did not appear on Christmas Day, and the sand crocodile did not appear in the battle in Impel Down City after being captured. Absalom was killed by Ronan. With Moria's character of attaching great importance to his partners, he would still fight the Straw Hats even if he knew he was defeated. As for Perona and Hawkbag being defeated by the big bear later and being ejected, Moria's appearance in the battle on the top was simply inexplicable. During the battle in Impel Down, the whereabouts of Bucky, Ivan and others were not revealed.

It's a pretty good book about boat flow. The main character is practicing Chinese martial arts + Xingyi Qiangshu. Fighting with a gun reminds me of Qin Ming with his mysterious eyes from Legend of Star Sea.

This is the most beautiful boat ride I have ever seen. The author must keep writing!

To be honest, the first part is actually quite average, but the part about the war at the top is really okay (I watched it while I was bored and skipping, but I didn't expect it to be okay later on. The author's level has improved very quickly). The protagonist does not shine alone like the other ships and boats. The Straw Hats also have a lot of scenes. Although the characters are more or less broken, it is a fan novel after all, not a comic. Overall, it is not bad. I feel that the score is on the low side.

If it's not enough, keep up the good work and keep an eye on you!

Good

Although it is said that I stole other people's work, my heart was ignited after watching One Piece in junior high school. It took me two months to pass to high school and college. After I started working, my heart was wiped out by society. I can still relive it now.

It's good, but the so-called never-ending growth will definitely lead to the system at the end of practice. What kind of adventure will it take to break through the world limit? This kind of situation will be encountered in the later stage of writing this type of book. I hope the author can write it well in the later stage.

Not bad, very good-looking, very real feelings, little nonsense, enjoyable to watch

Personally, I feel that the writing is quite good. Passers-by can be written to death. I hope that the NPCs who have lived a new life in the back of the title page will not be written to death, such as Mr9 who married a muscular girl and had children, the Dance King brothers who praised high-tech iron fist, and the former baroque studio who opened a cafe.

The plot and story are quite realistic, but the Heng Lian Kung Fu was announced too early. The war between the world government of the Celestial Dragons and the people who yearn for freedom can only end with the death of one side. In the case where our numbers are not dominant at all, if we announce this horizontal training method that everyone can practice, the world government of the Dragon People will definitely have a greater advantage.

Sometimes when you read fanfiction, you read something to make up for your regrets. It would be better for you to write a tragedy.

Fortunately, Moria is a bit of a character. If they kill Absalom, they will definitely fight according to Moria's character. They can't be so cowardly.

It looks good, it looks good, but there are too few updates, only two updates a day [smiles]

The combination of martial arts and pirate power system, the entire pirate group has reached the general level in the top war, which is probably inconsistent with the original plot, but as a fan, changes are normal

Nice! Nice! Super pretty! This is the most beautiful boat ride I have ever seen! ! ! ! I can't sleep at night, please update soon! ! ! ! !