One Piece: The Whole Crew Trains Their Bodies to the Extreme, and the Straw Hat Pirates Go Wild

What is good-looking is not someone who will do whatever it takes to achieve his goals, and will not change the original character settings beyond recognition. Fan fiction is created on the basis of respecting the original settings, with justice and one's own persistence. It would be perfect if there were some humorous and funny elements in the original work, but it is not bad now. Changed [face covering]

It's good-looking, the protagonist is clearly positioned, and he doesn't inexplicably think of himself as the captain.

Among the pirates I have watched, there are only a few who follow the ship. The author's writing style and descriptions have something of his own. It is very interesting and I am looking forward to the next development of the plot. Cheers, author [Love]

It looks good for now, but I hope the protagonist can find some good materials to rebuild the weapon. After all, the blacksmith in a village has limited skills and the materials used are average.

It's very interesting. This is probably the most interesting One Piece spin-off I've ever read. There's nothing bad about the scenes where I like the male protagonist, and it's reasonable for everyone to become powerful [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's a great fanfic about Funagaku. The author has his own innovations and changes to the original plot. However, there is a slight disadvantage that the protagonist always likes spoilers. Just like when Ace was introduced in the latest plot, Luffy didn't even introduce the protagonist and directly told Zoro and others that he was Luffy's sworn brother. You can say that you know Ace as the captain of the second division of the Whitebeard Pirates. After all, you can say that he has relatively broad knowledge, but how does the protagonist know about the friendship between Ace and Luffy?

This is a book that makes me want to keep chasing it. It is so rare for me. It is invincible without a cheating at the beginning. It grows together. The writing is smooth and delicate. It is not much different from the original characters. There is no OOC. It is a good book for me. I hope the author can stick to it and don't become a eunuch that day. That is really uncomfortable. Later, the original work was changed beyond recognition.

Good-looking, good-looking, very good-looking, super good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss] It's very enjoyable to write. It's the first time I've read Kotake's "One Piece". It gives his companions a layer of copper skin and iron bones. The use of devil fruits is also very wonderful. Nami got the Thunder Fruit, and Meili got the Tunton Fruit. These developments are very nice. It feels like a hot-blooded comic has a brain. The protagonist is this brain. I like this idea so much.

Different from the usual One Piece, the male protagonist's unique training method has been added, which greatly increases the strength of the protagonist group, and the combat power is written very rigorously, so that readers will not feel that the combat power is unparalleled or overwhelming. Furthermore, the plot will not be too similar to the original work. Even with the author's own changes, it is still very special. Yes, the increase in combat power mainly revolves around the unique training method of the protagonist. Unlike other novels, where the domineering power increases at every turn, such as a great swordsman, and then boasts so high, but still cannot defeat the general. This is the so-called suppression of combat power, which gives readers a very bad impression. This novel does not have this problem. However, according to the original story, the progress of the plot is not great, but the combat power is already that of all VS generals. It is quite enjoyable in terms of viewing. Is there any bad point? I just don't know how to write it in the future. I don't know what will happen to him after his combat power increases. I always feel that the author has passed the plot very quickly. The current plot has reached the point of bravely entering the impel city.

Less plot (still the main thing) 1. Where are the Creek Pirates after Hawkeye fights? I remember that the original Hawkeye didn't care, right? 2. I don't know if I didn't write it or something. Why didn't you write it, Dasqi? (Also (self-feeling) don't change the plot of Luffy's Guillotine) It's already passionate. If the character needs to use other things later, why change this? (Do not raise personal issues) The other writings are pretty good and you can read them. Good luck to the author [like][like][like]