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The first small world is like a cup of coffee without sugar - the plot is strong enough, but the two male protagonists have zero interaction throughout the whole process, and the scenes are like a background board. I shook my head while watching it! Looking forward to the milk tea with sugar later.

After watching Two Worlds, I couldn't stop commenting! ! ! This is the article that Controlled should read. This book should be at least 9:05 and up! ! ! I don't know 🍅when some authors will understand that true control means wanting to be both accepting and accepting, having high quotient, being charming, and having the ability to solve problems by oneself! ! Instead of just relying on the left position to show off your charm as a group favorite! ! A true heartthrob exudes charm from the inside out! ! It's not just the charming personality and the face that can make you cry that make you attractive! ! ! The emotional line in the first world of this book is actually not that obvious, but I really enjoyed reading it. . . . The second world is even more exciting. . . . Author, I hope you can maintain this momentum, come on! ! ! It exploded! !

Very nice! It is better than many novice novels with a score of 9 or above. The plot is not procrastinating, Shou is very clever, and it feels good when the time comes to slap him in the face. There is no suffocation in many slap-in-the-face novels where the protagonist has various grievances and ends with a quick slap in the face in the last few chapters. This is an article suitable for both offense and control. Gong's setting is love at first sight. It's normal for feelings to come quickly, but Shou is a fishing type and is originally the one being chased. The love for Gong is cultivated bit by bit from scratch. It's normal for the two sides to have a unequal relationship in the early stage. Shou doesn't just use Gong just to do tasks. On the contrary, Shou responds to everything when the heart rate is not high, and doesn't let Gong pay unilaterally. It can also be seen later that Shou is just not as outgoing as Gong. It's not that he doesn't like it. , His preference for attack is something others don't have. The only thing is that the descriptions of Zha Gong and San Zhen are too hateful and disgusting. I feel that their fate is not miserable enough, especially San. He seems to have been let off lightly after only receiving a little punishment, which is not enough to relieve his anger.

It's really beautiful! ! ! I really like Nannan! ! ! I can feel that the author writes with great care. One thing that especially struck me is that the author writes a paragraph at the end of each story. The number of words is short but very deep. I really love this point. It feels like the whole story has been sublimated. I personally feel that the author is good. It's like I'm trying to teach you how to identify and avoid scumbags and some healthy views on love. I will always follow you [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Blowing Kisses] [Flowing Kisses] [Flowing Kisses] (The above words are all personal opinions and do not involve moral kidnapping and love for you)

There are still four worlds left to almost equal this book. I dare say this is one of my top 3 favorite quick travel books. The writing is online from beginning to end, the characters are completely stand-up, there is no OOC, and the logic is clear. From the very beginning, the author's concept of "quick time travel" has jumped out of the template of most fast time travel articles on the market. The protagonist will think about "Why fast time travel?" "What is the principle of operation?" "What is the cost and what is needed?" It is quite novel to be able to think independently. Generally speaking, many fast-travel writers will not delve into such details. And from the current point of view, Nannan and Li are not the usual ones who have a bond in the past life or have known each other for a long time, or someone who has unrequited love and goes to the small world to pursue love. (I can't tell you the ending later hhh) After experiencing each small world, the feelings become stronger and stronger, and the trust becomes stronger and stronger. It is really good. Every small world author gives it a purpose, and the summary at the end is really good. What I like most is the youthful courage and perseverance in the second world, which are irreplaceable. Whether it is the characters in the book or us in reality, it is difficult to have the courage we had when we were 18 or 19 years old when we grow up. I believe that if the 19-year-old me looked like the 25-year-old me, I would probably hate iron. All in all, I really like this world. After reading more than 500 chapters of fast travel, I don't feel tired at all. Generally speaking, reading so many chapters in one go will be tiring and boring. But I read this book for two or three days in a row and it was not boring at all. Every world is interesting. The balance between the love line and the revenge line is appropriate. It will not be all about love and concisely write revenge, nor will it be all about revenge and concise candy. Speaking of the character of the protagonist, I really like this kind of gentle beauty who knows she is a smart and beautiful person. Put yourself in the shoes of the sufferer, treat every good person gently, and don't condemn those who have done evil before they have time to do it. Nannan gave them a chance. But human nature is inherently evil, and if you do something wrong, don't expect retribution to come. Nan Nan will not be dazzled by love when facing Li. She really likes the details that Li was not friendly towards Nan Nan at the beginning in some small worlds, and Nan Nan would immediately become cold-faced. Lovers should love themselves first. If you are unhappy, you have the right to be cold-faced. Don't look for reasons for your partner. Of course, when our Li puppy saw his wife's cold face, he immediately gave in. Nannan also gave the puppy enough preference. Love is not an equal division, but a real and sufficient preference. In order not to let the puppy think too much, Nannan will take the initiative to communicate. This is a healthy love. If you have a long mouth, you can speak. The writing style has never failed me from the beginning to now. It is really great and does not become watery as the chapters become more and more. Authors who write so many words with the same quality from beginning to end are really worthy of admiration. After all, not everyone can do it. Moreover, there are more than a dozen worlds with different concepts and novel ideas. Looking forward to the following chapters and more works in the future [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

I felt that it was quite enjoyable to watch. I really like the character of the protagonist, but in fact I like to watch sadistic and romantic stories together. However, the emotional lines in the first small world are a bit lacking, and there are also relatively few attacking scenes. I wonder if there will be more emotional scenes in the subsequent worlds [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] I'm here to add a follow-up review. I just finished reading the second world. It's so satisfying to my taste. There are many more emotional lines than the first world. It's really good to watch. I can't do it anymore. I've been short of books for a month and suddenly found a masterpiece. I read it all night long. It's so delicious [Adoration] [Adoration]

It's really super pretty! ! Nan Nan and Li are really good at talking to each other [shy]! There is a very meaningful conclusion at the end of every small world [Sending my heart] I sincerely hope this book becomes popular! ! [Eat melon]

I really don't understand why such a good article has such a low score. The pace of the article is really good, it doesn't go into too much detail, and the storyline of each world is also very well written. In particular, a change in the system in the main plot is also very interesting. If it is under control, this book is even more beneficial. The main reason is that the author's writing style is very mature and in line with the market, and the plot content is also very qualified. There is no reason why it doesn't even have an 8.5. . . Qwq It's just that it's unfinished and it really hurts. . . Before reading this, I searched for quick travel articles for a week, and I felt like I was making gold out of shit. You really can't be fooled by the scores. . . .

It's a good read. This book deserves a higher score [Adoration]. The two male protagonists are very strong, and Yu's charm is not overshadowed because Li is too strong. Not only is he powerful, but he also takes good care of the original owner. His personality charm is full~ In terms of plot, it is still very rich, and the emotional line is very fast. Yes, but it doesn't feel abrupt. It's just that the emotional line in the first small world is a bit sparse. Although I know that the second small world is not the same person before and after the age of 23, I still feel a little uncomfortable [punch out]. I still like the author's summary message after each small world~~~ Sublimation theme Flaws do not hide the merits, I sincerely recommend [Like]

This book is great and highly recommended. Whenever the protagonist encounters a scumbag, he goes straight to it. Revenge when there is a grudge, and revenge when there is a grudge. Very enjoyable to watch. There is just a small problem. When I saw the next few worlds, I found that they were a bit homogeneous. The protagonist basically has several forms of revenge. For example, let the scumbag fall in love with him, and then PUA him in the same way as the original scumbag PUA owner. This is basically the case. The author can innovate appropriately. There are no problems in other aspects, just look at it carefully.

Nice. . Really nice to look at. . I can't say it looks good. . Except that the love line in the first world is a bit light, but it gets sweeter and sweeter later on, and I really, really like the setting of the big beauty and the puppy, Nan Nan is really gentle... Li is completely Nan Nan's puppy, the dog is like a cow! ! The plot is simply amazing. Unlike other fast-traveling games, each world teacher has different thoughts and settings. You won't get bored at all and you won't guess the plot. It's really interesting... The world owes the teacher a 10.0

I go, this is a fairy product, Nan Nan is a heartthrob, it's so charming, I'm going to die, it's so sweet [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [licking the screen] I want to become 116, 116 is from Nan Nan's only fan who turned into a CP fan, and he also wrote Nan Nan's observation diary, so cute [shy] [Shy] [Shy] Li is Nan Nan's fan-girlfriend and Nan Nan's little dog. They both love each other very much and their sweetness is beyond the limit [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen] [licking screen] Come on, Dada, I wish you a lot of writing inspiration [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

This book is really super good-looking, and there is no OOC in the character design at the end. Nan Nan is a very gentle and strong person from beginning to end. There is no misunderstanding about the emotional line between Li and Li. There is no such misunderstanding without opening your mouth. It is very comfortable to read. Our little yellow chicken is also super cute. You are so good at writing! It's really, really good-looking. Nanyu is a person as gentle as the wind. When there was no OOC in the later period, Li was the same. He was upright and selfless but always put Nanyu first. It's really rare to see young couples with normal views like this!

Wowonb666 This book is really awesome. It's the best book I've ever read. Quick Travel, Never Clear Memories, Shuangjie, Pure Love, there's nothing wrong with it. I didn't read the fairy tale world in Kuaishuan in the past because I don't like fairy tales very much, but this one is pretty good. Every world is beautiful. This is also the first time I have seen a host steal system power. This is truly ambitious. Yuli 99[please update]

[Full] [Full] It's almost time to eat, let me share it with you ᗜⰙᗜ ① Personality background—gentleness While many characters were given crazy and paranoid personalities in order to attract attention, the teacher gently gave Nan Nan a normal personality. Nanyu is powerful, smart, and strong. He is a locust tree. He has the gentleness of plants and trees. He treats every living being with care and has the unique agility of every life. His personality background is gentle. There is also Li, although he is a slice of the world, he is responsible and passionate in love in every world. This is not a kind of tenderness. Many characters in the text can embody the word gentleness. ②Plot setting—wonderful My favorite plot in the second volume: The Destiny Fan only exists in his love. He only loves Nanyu. If the pheromones in his body betray him, he will get rid of such "betrayers" (obedient and loyal dogs are the most fragrant [lick the screen]) There are all kinds of settings in the article to satisfy all kinds of preferences. The teacher will write an epilogue at the end of Small World.

Highly recommended! There are very few fast-travel stories that suit my taste. It's an enjoyable story throughout. Don't be put off by the first world. When I read it, I thought it would be difficult to have feelings, but I didn't expect that I just don't like bad ones [shy]. How can I put it, after reading it, I feel that it can be regarded as an "ah 0 ah 1" attribute. If you like this, don't miss it! As a reminder, if you don't like plots about disabilities such as missing arms and legs, I don't recommend watching The World of Immortality (I personally have a bit of a holy mother's heart towards this kind of disability, whether it's bad or good... I feel a little psychologically uncomfortable and can't help but feel pity [crying]). Then, the author must not leave it unfinished, update the world more, and come up with more innovative world settings!

Haha, it's super good. I found another precious book. Don't look at the ratings, but look at the number of readers. It's really super good. The male protagonist is also super strong and beautiful. He has his own ideas and can try his best to get rid of control. The love line in it is also very interesting. The little 6 is also very cute. The plot is smooth and super attractive, but it's not enough. Please give me more [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

So pretty! ! ! Come and see them all! Come and see them all! A rare good article in Tomato! ! ! The author's writing style is very good! ! ! It's refreshing and sweet, I really like the puppy wholeheartedly! ! ! Nannan is also a very, very good baby! ! ! Perfect match! ! ! I was a little hesitant when I read the review saying that the first two worlds were about be, but they looked good. In fact, the first world is a chapter of transitional feelings, and the second world, be, is the best love for a puppy! Make me cry! And the plot is always online! ! ! The world behind is even more beautiful! ! ! The rating of this book should be above 9.5! ! ! The author must write more books and read them quickly! ! ! So well written! ! ! The novel world cannot lose you! ! ! !

I've only watched the first world so far, but I can't help but comment. Our Nanyu baby is really great. So cool! I just like watching this kind of torture of scumbag men. This kind of scumbag deserves what he deserves! Nan Nan and Huo Li are also very touching about mobile phones in this one, especially the kiss when they were about to leave at the end! ! ! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I actually think this quick wear is quite novel. He is different from what I usually see. The main character is very charming. It's not simply a matter of directly introducing the plot and completing tasks, but letting the protagonist explore on his own. I feel like the author has buried a lot of holes, and I'm looking forward to it very much. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates] I really felt good about this book after reading the first aspect. I feel that the score of 7.7 Is not his normal level. I hope the score can be improved quickly, because it is really good to read. Dear author, come on, keep updating! [Send heart][Send heart] Finished watching The Second World. I go, this is really sour. Xiaoli really loves our Nannan. Even if there is only a 0.0001 Chance of hurting Nannan, he is not willing to touch it. He didn't dare to gamble. So he left when he was 23. I'll go, it's so beautiful. My wife summed it up very well. Really, this book should not only have a score of 7.7, It is really good. I think it should be a score of more than 9 points. It's really beautiful. ! ! ! ! ! [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

So beautiful😍Men are menstruating when they see it😇Women are crazy when they see it😋This is the nemesis of depression🥺It is the alarm clock for vegetative people👿It is so cute that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River😝So handsome, he is a god, he is my rose It illuminated my dark life 🥴 and gave my world meaning 🤯 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 🥳 It made me realize that God does exist 🤩 I was so cute that I couldn't shed tears From now on, the world will no longer be short of water🤪How can it be so beautiful🤗Every time I look at it, it's like a buffalo entering the water😯A rat entering a rice vat👻Fish entering the ocean🤫Paramecium in the pond🤪It's so delicious🤯Eating it is beautiful and refreshing

It's very, very, very beautiful. Whether it's the characters or the plot, the writing style is good, and the concept is good. I read it on my watch at school, and it's inconvenient to type. I will promote it everywhere when I have time. Thank you to the author. I wish you a happy life and smooth writing! (ᴗˬᴗ*)

Invincible Universe is beautiful, Nan Nan is gentle and strong, super super super super super good, and the relationship with Li is also very good. Both of them have their mouths, and there is no bloody misunderstanding at all. Li and Nan Nan also trust each other, and their relationship is enviable. 116 Is also super cute. He is kind and cute. He also likes Nan Nan very much. He obeys Nan Nan unconditionally. This is the kind of article that should be read when controlled. It's delicious.

It's so good that I don't watch comics or binge-watch anymore every day. I just watch Nanyu and Chongli sweetly interact in every little world. The plot is great and it's so refreshing [Bird Food Masterpiece]! I said that I fell asleep after reading this chapter, and fell asleep after listening to this chapter for a while. I was completely fascinated by it. It is very beautiful. I especially like Fishing System Nanyu [Love] Dog Chongli, hahaha. I immediately locked it. I really like it, I really like it, I really like this novel [Love] [Love] [Love]

After reading so many quick travel books, I can say that this one ranks among the top. Every time I watch a world, I actually feel very emotional in my heart. Nan Nan and Li have always made firm choices in both directions. The relationship is very sweet, the plot line is really attractive, and the logic is very strong! After each world ends, the author mostly points out the theme, which is really touching and gives readers a lot of suggestions and reminders about relationships! Shuangjie, it looks good and I will always support this article! [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Flowing kiss][Flying kiss][Flying kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

Nannan and Li are super sweet. Every "protagonist" in the fast-traveling world is basically a scumbag in his or her own way. I've seen the diversity of people. Li is totally Nannan's puppy. It can be considered that I have seen how thick-skinned can evolve, and the summary behind each small world is very meaningful. The author's writing style is also very good. I can feel the love and warmth flowing in the author's words, and I can also feel the bad nature of people flowing in them. And Li's critical comments, I also want a mouth with such a poisonous mouth [laughing][laughing]

This quick travel book is completely my ideal type of quick travel. It explains the whereabouts and follow-up of the original owner, rather than a simple sentence. After reading it, I feel that my outlook on love and life has become firmer again! (Every time I read a quick travel article, I think about the original owner?). This book gave me a feeling of harmony and beauty in the world, happy ending... (It's the end... Although the author has written it for a long time, I still want the story to go on and never be "finished" [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying])

It's very interesting, the pace is very good, the plot is online, and I like the characters very much. I feel it should be a book with a score of 9 or higher. Maybe it's low because there are so few ratings now. Good luck to the author! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Nice! It is my ideal quick travel, and at the end of each small world, you will be summed up with a sentence similar to the reason why this world came into being. People who read this are so excited. The current rating is really low, and a 10-point rating is not an exaggeration!

Very nice, highly recommended! ! ! Nannan and Chongli are both very good. Nannan will warm the souls of the original owners so that they can appear again and witness with their own eyes the fate of the evildoers. As an ancient god, Chongli has a sense of responsibility and can always show his love for Nannan.

It's really good to read. I've read a lot of fast-traveling articles. In fact, many of the plots are similar, but this article has its own new ideas. The protagonist's outlook on life is very positive. I also like the summary comments of each section. I read most of the previous articles as cool articles without thinking, but there are many things about this article that touched me. In fact, imperfection is often a kind of perfection. Many details really make me feel that everyone in the book has his or her own life. There are many choices and emotions. In fact, it is not necessarily possible to tell who is right and who is wrong. Life is sometimes an unknown process. Experience tolerance with a gentle heart. There are a lot of details that I can't write out right away, but this is a really gentle article and very beautiful! ! ! ! !