(Absolutely a single female protagonist!!)
(The heroine is a virgin, both are heroines and have no independent personalities)
[Single female protagonist + empress master + strong female and weak male + vest + daily life]
When Jiang Ruoli, the empress of the Demon Sect, was seriously injured, she was rescued by the mortal Lin Zhi.
She secretly resumed her cultivation and planned to take this young man with a cauldron physique into her own hands.
Unexpectedly, Lin Zhi was lively and lively, collecting medicine for her injuries every day, and even said with a smile: "You are more clingy than the puppy I picked up."
Until that day, the Heavenly Demon Palace recruits disciples.
In order to save her from a serious illness, Lin Zhi resolutely chose to join the Demon Palace: "Just change the medical fee."
Above the main hall, Jiang Ruoli appeared masked and pointed at Lin Zhi while everyone was shocked:
"I want this cauldron."
Lin Zhi's face turned pale, and there was only one thought left in her mind.
"It's a bad thing. It's going to be used as a power bank."
Reader comments
The first opponent kills Chen He first to avoid being banned [face covering] [OK]
The plot description is very comfortable, and the character creation is quite interesting. The pace is not too fast, but it is very suitable. The emotional changes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are described very delicately. The overall writing style is more detailed and slow-burning. It is not recommended for those who like to read refreshing novels. Also, a bunch of people in the comment section giving one or two stars are really annoying.
So far, it is very good. This kind of novel is more interesting for daily life. It can be seen that the author has a lot of thoughts in this work. It is not brainless and sweet, but a very wonderful feeling and very logical. Even if there are loopholes, the author still finds ways to get around it. Especially, the young man's inferiority complex is vividly written, which is really interesting.
The early characterization shows the author's skill, because the boring scenes in the early stage are very impressive in making people retain them.
The current problem is that the progress is a bit slow, and the portrayal of the male protagonist is like a transvestite. Most of the people who read this kind of novels are boys, so I think it is necessary to change the portrayal of the male protagonist. Readers will find out that they are a transvestite when they come in. The male protagonist should be tougher on both identities of the female protagonist, instead of being submissive all the time, making it like a sexual transfer story. He has to be as shy as a girl. I have read the novel and I still read the novel. What is the meaning of being a submissive myself?
Some characters, such as Liu Qingyi of the Hundred Flowers Sect, have appeared and there is no need to have other characterizations. They are just tool people to promote emotions.
There is much to be done.
Don't be a King Kong Barbie, the little devil is pretty good [laughs evilly]
Jiang Ruoli is like a magic pill [laughs]
To be honest, the protagonist can be with her, I can only say Ace Amu [angry]
It's still good so far. As long as the plot doesn't get messed up later, it will definitely be a hit🔥
It looks good so far, please keep up the good work, author [laughing evilly]
It looks okay. I usually look at it to kill time if I'm not interested.
It's a very good book. Good luck to the author.
The details of some scenes may be a little neglected, but the psychological description of the male protagonist and the female protagonist's tangle is very good, and the portrayal of the fighting scenes is also excellent. It is a rare piece of fine grain [heartfelt]
5.1 Is really a bit exaggerated. The author's writing style is neither superficial nor obscure, and the rhythm and plot connections are also smooth. In terms of character creation, in the early stage, the male protagonist embarked on the path of immortality from a mortal, he was reckless and youthful but sincere, while the female protagonist lost all her skills and was picked up. Later, the role play of the main body + clone also has a lot of contrasting and refreshing feelings. After the window paper was broken and the hero ran away from the heroine in despair, the heroine became an emotional novice in the subsequent plot of chasing her husband. The hero did not forgive without thinking, but he did not hate each other until death. The degree of entanglement was just right. I really think it is a good one in 🍅. 5.1 Is really too exaggerated,,,
Very nice, I recommend watching it.
It's okay, come on, author
Not poking or poking suits my taste
It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low?
The author's writing is good, and I can actually read it during the period of book shortage.
Super hot, come and taste [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
Super invincible and good-looking. The male protagonist is so lovable. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Good-looking, basically nothing poisonous
Ok ok ok
Good, good, good
Keep up the good work, author!
Good luck to the author!
[Laughs] [Flying Kiss] [Flying Kiss] [Flying Kiss] I like to watch this kind of thing, see how the heroine pursues her husband later
I simply like it, I like forced love! !
Come on, it's still okay despite its flaws. As long as the plot behind it isn't too vicious, this book won't be too bad.
At present, it seems that the level of Tomato is about 8.5. I will give you five stars to help you improve your score.
The first opponent kills Chen He first to avoid being banned [face covering] [OK]
The plot description is very comfortable, and the character creation is quite interesting. The pace is not too fast, but it is very suitable. The emotional changes between the male protagonist and the female protagonist are described very delicately. The overall writing style is more detailed and slow-burning. It is not recommended for those who like to read refreshing novels. Also, a bunch of people in the comment section giving one or two stars are really annoying.
So far, it is very good. This kind of novel is more interesting for daily life. It can be seen that the author has a lot of thoughts in this work. It is not brainless and sweet, but a very wonderful feeling and very logical. Even if there are loopholes, the author still finds ways to get around it. Especially, the young man's inferiority complex is vividly written, which is really interesting. The early characterization shows the author's skill, because the boring scenes in the early stage are very impressive in making people retain them. The current problem is that the progress is a bit slow, and the portrayal of the male protagonist is like a transvestite. Most of the people who read this kind of novels are boys, so I think it is necessary to change the portrayal of the male protagonist. Readers will find out that they are a transvestite when they come in. The male protagonist should be tougher on both identities of the female protagonist, instead of being submissive all the time, making it like a sexual transfer story. He has to be as shy as a girl. I have read the novel and I still read the novel. What is the meaning of being a submissive myself? Some characters, such as Liu Qingyi of the Hundred Flowers Sect, have appeared and there is no need to have other characterizations. They are just tool people to promote emotions. There is much to be done.
Don't be a King Kong Barbie, the little devil is pretty good [laughs evilly]
Jiang Ruoli is like a magic pill [laughs] To be honest, the protagonist can be with her, I can only say Ace Amu [angry]
It's still good so far. As long as the plot doesn't get messed up later, it will definitely be a hit🔥
It looks good so far, please keep up the good work, author [laughing evilly]
It looks okay. I usually look at it to kill time if I'm not interested.
It's a very good book. Good luck to the author.
The details of some scenes may be a little neglected, but the psychological description of the male protagonist and the female protagonist's tangle is very good, and the portrayal of the fighting scenes is also excellent. It is a rare piece of fine grain [heartfelt] 5.1 Is really a bit exaggerated. The author's writing style is neither superficial nor obscure, and the rhythm and plot connections are also smooth. In terms of character creation, in the early stage, the male protagonist embarked on the path of immortality from a mortal, he was reckless and youthful but sincere, while the female protagonist lost all her skills and was picked up. Later, the role play of the main body + clone also has a lot of contrasting and refreshing feelings. After the window paper was broken and the hero ran away from the heroine in despair, the heroine became an emotional novice in the subsequent plot of chasing her husband. The hero did not forgive without thinking, but he did not hate each other until death. The degree of entanglement was just right. I really think it is a good one in 🍅. 5.1 Is really too exaggerated,,,
Very nice, I recommend watching it.
It's okay, come on, author
Not poking or poking suits my taste
It's very beautiful, why is the rating so low?
The author's writing is good, and I can actually read it during the period of book shortage.
Super hot, come and taste [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
Super invincible and good-looking. The male protagonist is so lovable. Good luck to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]
Good-looking, basically nothing poisonous
Ok ok ok
Good, good, good
Keep up the good work, author!
Good luck to the author!
[Laughs] [Flying Kiss] [Flying Kiss] [Flying Kiss] I like to watch this kind of thing, see how the heroine pursues her husband later
I simply like it, I like forced love! !
Come on, it's still okay despite its flaws. As long as the plot behind it isn't too vicious, this book won't be too bad. At present, it seems that the level of Tomato is about 8.5. I will give you five stars to help you improve your score.