Test the waters
I regret some things
Why can't the protagonist's name be changed?
Okay, let's take a break after this month and make major changes (about half a month)
I'll fix it later.
Don't look at it, it's a bit shameful
The push effect is not good
So I made a new outline
(honest)
Reader comments
It's so well written, teacher. It's not heartbreaking, but the sadness that gradually spreads. Like water vapor, it fills up the room unknowingly, making it so congested that people can't breathe [crying] The stamina is so great that I have to watch cookies for three days in a row before I can recover [crying]
So sweet, hey hey, hey hey, hey hey hey
It's so well written, teacher. It's not heartbreaking, but the sadness that gradually spreads. Like water vapor, it fills up the room unknowingly, making it so congested that people can't breathe [crying] The stamina is so great that I have to watch cookies for three days in a row before I can recover [crying] So sweet, hey hey, hey hey, hey hey hey
It was so cruel that the tears kept flowing.