Full Level************

How can I put it? Strictly speaking, it's very good. At least I can completely understand the protagonist's thinking. It's no problem for me. However, the last wave of Eye of the Void doesn't seem to fit the protagonist's personality. With her previous caution and vest-protecting character, I must make sure to die before leaving without leaving any hidden dangers. (There can be no possibility of subtlety) Let me tell you a few points that may be minefields for others. First of all, it is not invincible. The protagonist will have something to be afraid of. Although the author did not label it invincible, the God of Creation is too high and misleading. Secondly, this book will return to Earth later, which is half a minefield for me. Also, when I was reading this book, the words were all piled up together, which made me feel uncomfortable and tired. This is the first time I encountered a book that I only wanted to listen to but not read (I know the author may be doing it because of acting and needs to add more modifiers to avoid misleading readers). But it is very tiring. I hope you can pay more attention to this. Nothing else matters at the moment. All aspects of the details are handled relatively well. The world view is large and I dare to write about it. It also creates a rich and diverse sense of another world. At least it looks very smart to me. Except for the messy words, the other impressions are good. I have seen that in some articles of this type, the world view is very important when you delve into it, but it seems that it is a bit stuck on the ground, and the world view is not written at all, and it is just pulling on the coat of tiger skin.

It's quite good. It has the familiar flavor of a light novel. As expected, newcomers have to use their imagination to write it. After all, wouldn't it be very tiring if you keep trying to be more realistic about whether it is reasonable or not? In fact, I really don't care about those so-called bad things. I just just laugh and look at it and pass it by.

I feel that the writing is still very smooth, but the description angle is too single and the perspective of the article is too cramped. I have read more than 30 chapters so far. The villain organization (I don't know if it counts) and the decent organization actually have no description of good and evil. They are more like two different schools fighting. By analogy, it is like an academic struggle between mainstream theory and second-rate theory. I don't know what the next development will be. It is recommended that there be more profiling and background description (this background is not purely hypothetical). For example, describe the influence of mainstream society, whether it is harmful or beneficial, to help readers judge their stance.

It's relatively good-looking, and I keep up with the main line every day. I won't comment on works that appeal to my appetite, because I like slow-paced works with light writing, which perfectly blend with my mood. Compared with the dehumanized God of Creation, I miss the humane consultant who does magical experiments with her more. I haven't gotten used to it yet, and the author doesn't have to change the rest of the content for me, because I'm quite satisfied [laughing] Send love [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] The once lush bluebell withered, and it withered little by little. The person who took care of it seemed to have changed its appearance, until it never bloomed again. The person she once was may have disappeared. So, will human nature really be formatted? Okay okay okay. By the way, does anyone really like this type of book? I think reading this kind of book can calm my heart. I wonder what other readers feel.

It's okay, but each paragraph is too long and looks tiring [smile]

Anyway, I feel like I understand it. The carved road is as graceful as a frightening dragon, but it is difficult to explore the life of dragons in the emptiness The Tao of the Dharma is extremely elegant, and there is no mention of the difficulty of the reward at all. Pianruo, grand and mysterious, Taoism and Dharma are different in appearance The carved silt channels and silt joints are not the same.

Very much like a light novel

I like this kind of book, thank you to the author! [Sending Hearts]

Mengyao who almost turned into a pig by pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger The shivering world [face covering]