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A masterpiece, an absolute masterpiece! The protagonist is vividly described and has his own independent personality. He is neither bitter nor dark. The character is three-dimensional, the supporting roles are vividly described, and the plot is coherent and harmonious. Even the monsters and aliens in the play have their own little thoughts. The description is particularly vivid. The main line is used to participate in daily life, which makes the characters vivid. At the same time, the protagonist has a golden finger , but not too big. It is neither invincible at the beginning nor depressed all the time. It is in line with the feeling of excitement, but it does not have the extreme excitement and lawlessness. It seems that the protagonist is already invincible now, but it can be seen from the clues that the protagonist is in a dangerous situation, which gives people a sense of tension. It feels as if a decisive battle is coming. It is an absolute masterpiece! The most amazing thing is that although there are characters from other worlds in the play, they only retain the background and talents of the characters, and do not bring their abilities to this. Even some martial arts practitioners with relatively high combat effectiveness have appropriately simplified their combat effectiveness. They are in a state of thinking but not going against the will of heaven. There will be no conflict of combat power in this world or various comparisons and debates. When the characters appear, you can adapt to the development of the plot and there will be no situation like a particularly weak character in the later stage or a particularly strong character in the early stage. Five stars are required! I can't think of any adjectives. This reversal is too great. Five stars, it must be five stars!

It's a very interesting book. The protagonist is well portrayed, but there are still some shortcomings. The protagonist's expressions are very exaggerated when he sees certain characters. There are too many characters in the base, and many characters have no role behind them. I also hope to add more skills to the protagonist

What a great book, great. It's a hopeless world but there is still hope in people's hearts. Use yourself to make the world what we like [Like][Like][Like]

1. Oven is one of the few people who has a bond with the defense team. After reading too many other Ovens, I feel that the protagonist has become a little bit divine and feels a bit alienated. This book describes the bond with the team members quite well. 2. Although many characters from other works have been sewn into it, it is not OOC and feels quite novel (at the same time, there is no need to overly understand the original work, which reduces the difficulty of reading) 3. Personally, I feel that the plot is quite smooth. Although the protagonist's ability to stack boxes is quite outrageous, the villain's ability to stack boxes is also quite shady, and his combat power is not considered collapse. In summary, it should be able to get 8 points or more [eating melon]

One that summons monsters is much better than some Otvin ones [face covering]

Yes, Owen is a good book. Regarding monsters, you can add some from Ultra Q appropriately. If you want to attract readers, you can add some popular ones.

Hao Kan, the protagonist is a pure succubus

When you eat too much shit, if you come back and read this kind of article, you will feel that you have regained the feeling you had when watching Ultraman.

It's very interesting and completely rewrites the story of despair.

No problem at the moment 12345

I was scared to tears by the composition of the defense team.

So far, it looks good, nothing toxic, and the main character doesn't pull his crotch either [eat melon]

It's a very nice fanfic, with fluent writing and delicate characterization. The originally poorly written subject matter gives people a refreshing feeling. The only shortcoming is that the number of words is too few.

When will you start eating meat?

It's okay, it's pretty good-looking [laughs]

Very good looking, Otto is full of energy

Keep writing and don't stop! [Laughs][OK]

The author is awesome! !

Come on brother, you can write it

I think we should first get a statue of Tiga and then worship it every day [laughing]

It's a bit like a female video article, so there's no big problem

The writing is okay, there is no poisonous point, just write it normally and it will be a good book.

So far, there's nothing sinister about it and it looks pretty good.

I've read Chapter 13 so far, and it doesn't have any bad points. I see that there aren't many people rating it, so I'll give it a rating first and make changes later if there are any.

If you can keep writing like this, it will be another masterpiece, a 9 out of 10

The character creation is particularly good, the plot does not collapse, and the elements are the icing on the cake.

Five-star review, absolutely a good book. I have read so many books and given few five-star reviews. Based on my experience of reading 6,000 hours of novels, this book is considered a masterpiece. It is a complex emotional drama, there is no complicated plot, and there is no sudden power. Everything seems to be a matter of course. The author keeps writing and don't stop [like], keep fighting. Overall, it can be put on the bookshelf. It is a very good work.

A very good Ultra novel

The best article on how to conquer the Ultra Spirit that I have ever seen

It would be good if it can be kept up.