The White Raven Beneath the Iron Cross

No, author😭😭, don't disappear Where should I go to find Elsa 😢 😢

I have to say, this book is still very well written. Although there are some small flaws and bugs in the early stage, it can be said that the more you write, the better it gets. At this point, I feel that the protagonist is too small. At the beginning of the article, he was taller than his peers, but later he became extremely short. Then he became mature after doing experiments, and finally turned into a lolita again. By the way, can it still grow a little longer?

Good books should not be buried. When the author gives the order, we will make you the new tomato king. Goodbye, the third magician 😢 😢

It's okay. The subject matter is good and similar to Tanya. Are there any similar ones on Tomato?

Overall good. It's just that there are some flaws in Xingyue. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional. But the author, can you let Mary follow the protagonist all the time? I quite like their characters. @ The white crow under the iron cross 1

The writing power is acceptable, the pace is bright and comfortable, the characters are not detailed but definitely three-dimensional, and the plot is slow and clear. Except for the initial description of the First World War, which is a bit slow, there are no major shortcomings. It is a type of plot that I like very much, but I would like to give you a small suggestion. There should be something positive and uplifting in the book. I don't want to lose half of the book yet. (A little bb: In fact, I feel that little Elsa still has a contrast between being an irritable loli with a smooth flow...)

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The quality is nothing to say. Although it is a time-travel novel, it does not make too much use of time-travel settings and deus ex machina, and the plot connection is not too abrupt. The transition between the Empire chapter and the Holy Grail War chapter is relatively smooth. There are almost no major poisonous points, and the rest of the small poisonous points are a matter of opinion, depending on whether you can accept it. The protagonist is an egoist. So far, every possible romantic partner (such as Chris, Mary, etc.) Seems to serve the plot more than being written as a CP. I'm a bit dumb and can't say anything good about it, but I definitely recommend it.

I have been following the book from less than 100 chapters to now. The author's writing style is very good and there are no big logical problems. Moreover, the group is also very active in discussing the follow-up of this book with book friends. I am looking forward to whether the follow-up of this book will be a successful conclusion.

The author's writing style is very good [Chigua], and the plot is very interesting. It's a pity that Erchuang didn't see it 🤦.