Iron Ten*****

No, author😭😭, don't disappear Where should I go to find Elsa [crying] [crying]

I have to say, this book is still very well written. Although there are some small flaws and bugs in the early stage, it can be said that the more you write, the better it gets. At this point, I feel that the protagonist is too small. At the beginning of the article, he was taller than his peers, but later he became extremely short. Then he became mature after doing experiments, and finally turned into a lolita again. By the way, can it still grow a little longer?

Good books should not be buried. When the author gives the order, we will make you the new tomato king. Goodbye, the third magician [crying] [crying]

It's okay. The subject matter is good and similar to Tanya. Are there any similar ones on Tomato?

The writing power is acceptable, the pace is bright and comfortable, the characters are not detailed but definitely three-dimensional, and the plot is slow and clear. Except for the initial description of the First World War, which is a bit slow, there are no major shortcomings. It is a type of plot that I like very much, but I would like to give you a small suggestion. There should be something positive and uplifting in the book. I don't want to lose half of the book yet. (A little bb: In fact, I feel that little Elsa still has a contrast between being an irritable loli with a smooth flow...)

Overall good. It's just that there are some flaws in Xingyue. The character descriptions are very three-dimensional. But the author, can you let Mary follow the protagonist all the time? I quite like their characters. @ The white crow under the iron cross 1

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The quality is nothing to say. Although it is a time-travel novel, it does not make too much use of time-travel settings and deus ex machina, and the plot connection is not too abrupt. The transition between the Empire chapter and the Holy Grail War chapter is relatively smooth. There are almost no major poisonous points, and the rest of the small poisonous points are a matter of opinion, depending on whether you can accept it. The protagonist is an egoist. So far, every possible romantic partner (such as Chris, Mary, etc.) Seems to serve the plot more than being written as a CP. I'm a bit dumb and can't say anything good about it, but I definitely recommend it.

The author's writing style is very good [Chigua], and the plot is very interesting. It's a pity that Erchuang didn't see it [face covering].

Chapter 9 Substitution? [What] [What] has changed the character so much? [What][what]

I have been following the book from less than 100 chapters to now. The author's writing style is very good and there are no big logical problems. Moreover, the group is also very active in discussing the follow-up of this book with book friends. I am looking forward to whether the follow-up of this book will be a successful conclusion.

It's a good book, but it's not popular [face covering], is it the mythical river crab that eats up all the good ideas? [Eating melon]

It's fun, but you need to use your brain to see it.

Chapter 9 has changed a lot, but it's okay to continue reading. The heroine hopes that she is single and doesn't suddenly cause any emotional drama.

Why not tno world view? I'm used to seeing normal World War II.

Already preparing for the second brush

A battle with Western fantasy

Looks good, nothing wrong with it [Like] Now that I have read the back part, I can only say that I hope the author can finish this book in his lifetime.

Very nice, I like it

Holy Grail + some elements of Tanya

Yes, there is no big poison for the time being, and the damn one is dead (seeing the end of the battle, Xi'er came to power)

There is potential, a little logic flaw, but the flaws do not hide the flaws.

Come on, author, you have great ideas

The book is a good book, Elsa is a good Elsa, and the author is... Not my brother? What did you say you wanted Jiba to do? What did you say you forged? ! [Shock]

Extremely crazy, gentlemen, I love war

Yo, ya, ya

It looks good, but what will happen to the protagonist after World War II is over [Thinking]

Excellent product. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time.

Good looking Nirvana, the author should pay attention to a healthy routine [laughing] [blowing kiss]

The writing and logic are quite good, but due to the frequent changes in the main plot direction in the early stage and the mixed and slow foreshadowing, I finished reading the first ten chapters and wanted to polish it before I even read the fate content.