I Am Here***********

Come on! Not bad among tomatoes. The relatively new ideas and themes [Blowing Kisses][Flowing Kisses] are great and great. First of all, I haven't seen an important male character yet. The male character who died eight times in the back is best not to be tied up with the female protagonist and communicate with him. I hate him a bit. The plot and imaginative characters are all okay. Focus on the subject matter. The imaginative ideas and plot are very important. Then the use of flashbacks can lead to subsequent readings, Conan's physique, and people dying wherever he goes. If he did it like this, it would be a bit far-fetched. Every time he killed something in the dungeon, some people around him would die as soon as he came out. The writing is not very good in some places. But this kind of literary imagination and character design are the most important!

Mark it looks good No CP + Second Life Solved Case + Realistic Bloody Murder Case + Flashback It's quite funny. The heroine is just like Conan. There are always cases wherever he goes😆😆. It's quite interesting how the cases in the game and real cases reflect each other. Looking forward to the update.

I like the theme very much, the world is complete and there are many vests, and the western fantasy fairy tale + system panel accompany you everywhere. Overall, it has great potential now, and I am looking forward to the plot in the future. It's just that I encountered it too early. I have never read such a new book, and it doesn't even have twenty chapters! Regarding the plot, the protagonist has chosen the "immersive" mode. The disadvantages of pain are gone, but are there any advantages? Like higher potential? Otherwise, I still feel a bit disadvantaged... I hope that the "immersive" option can be improved in settings in the future [Stacking armor, just a little idea, no pointers or any other meaning] The plot is currently in the first single companion plot, and the interaction between the single protagonist is quite good, but I still feel that it is good to watch alone. Unfortunately, this is the latest chapter, and the presence of subsequent updates is probably still there, and I cannot fast forward to the later plots. It is still too early to encounter. Overall, it's pretty good so far. I hope the level will be maintained and improved in the future. Drive high and go high. Come on~

It's very interesting that every time a chapter opens, a flashback is used. Each time, the murder case that the protagonist is involved in is introduced, as well as the skills the protagonist acquires in the game. To be honest, it's quite interesting. But the protagonist may be a little too indifferent towards NPCs at the moment, and maybe I personally can't stand this. That is to say, the protagonist treats the NPC too much as a background. It seems that the only way to analyze the NPC's reaction is to analyze it with a particularly calm emotion. It's not that I don't have sympathy for NPCs or anything like that. So cool. But this may also be the professional quality of the protagonist. Anyway, the author should keep up the good work, this is still a very good article in Tomato.

I really like the author's writing style. I feel that this book has improved a lot compared to the previous works. The plot description is crisp and clear, the rhythm is very stable, and the character creation is also rich. From my daily interactions with the author, I can feel that he is a very good person who polishes his works carefully. Those who say that the protagonist has a bad character are actually elements of the novel. The protagonists of many literary masterpieces are not perfect, right? Many of them are even bad people in the modern sense. How can you tolerate literary masterpieces, but you must insist on the protagonist of an online novel to be a kind, gentle and disciplined image for readers? I'm looking forward to seeing the next plot, I wish you all the best [Love] I'll be waiting for you, I'm looking forward to it [Sending my heart]

It's a good-looking novel, no cp, strong female, and I haven't seen any highlights so far. I hope I won't be tied too deeply to the man who died eight times. I feel like it's a bit of a drag.

It's very interesting. The heroine's judgment ability is very good. It progresses step by step. Each world has better judgment than the other. The personality charm is full of twists and turns. Every world is a fairy tale, but it is a dark fairy tale version. There will not be an overly strong golden finger or halo. What stands out is the heroine's self-judgment and solution ability. It is so good to read, but there are only more than thirty chapters, which is not enough to read [crying] [crying]

It's pretty cool, but now that I can use the skills in real life, I don't feel like it threatens my name and I feel like I'm not very smart anymore.

I really like this setting and mechanism. It feels like it can be regarded as a high-quality fairy tale infinite flow, which burns the brain but does not hurt the brain. It is rare to encounter a heroine who is not outstanding in appearance or intelligence but has a charming personality. There are always some unexpected plots, then sudden humor, and the scenes are so delicate.

It seems to suit my taste and it's good to watch. It was a little confusing and unclear at first, but the plot became fascinating later on. The plot is quite compact and exciting. It's so funny when the heroine complains about the game, but there are too few chapters and it's not enough to read. The author will update it quickly.

It's quite interesting. I've only finished the first volume so far. I feel like people die very quickly.

It's so exciting that I couldn't sleep at night. I read this book. I thought it was a traditional fairy tale, but I didn't expect it to be reversed again and again.

It's very beautiful. I enjoyed watching it. I really like the heroine's character. Her IQ is also online.

I have finished watching Princess and the Pea now. It is very interesting. I am really looking forward to the future development of the game. Please keep updating!

Looks good, feels like a struggle

Nice! Very interesting to write!

The first dungeon at the beginning is so interesting, it's so addictive.

I wasn't interested in the world view at first, but the more I read, the more I liked it. But I don't know if there are any similar meal replacements.

It's so beautiful that I couldn't stop reading it once I started reading it. Why is Haowenyu serialized? Sad…

Nice! ! I really like the dungeon setting in the western fantasy world where you are always facing the threat of death. The suspense is set very well. I was always afraid of the protagonist game over.

It's good to watch, the plot is novel, the female protagonist is smart, the realistic plot is a bit bloody, the plot of the game is like solving a crime, the author is quick, quick, quick, too little, not enough to watch

Very nice and novel setting

It's really beautiful. I thought it was just average, but it looks really good. Please keep updating.

It's beautiful, not enough to watch [like][like][like]

Finally came across a good novel, the author must continue reading more [crying]

It's good to watch, it has a fairy tale and western fantasy flavor, the plot is suspenseful and exciting, and it's fresh.

It's good to watch, I think the protagonist is very powerful and the story is interesting! Looking forward to updates!

Yes, the rhythm is well controlled and quite interesting. I just feel like there's still a lot of foreshadowing in the first world that I haven't written yet, come on