Wearing Books************

Now that I have read Chapter 10, I actually feel that what the previous review said is because the psychological description and motivation are insufficient. The change in Baishuixi's attitude is not natural enough, and the perspective has also changed from Baishuixi to Xia You. As a result, Baishuixi's psychological activities are not transitional enough, and most of them are missing. It looks like she was still being venomous in the first few chapters, but her attitude softened inexplicably later and she did some ambiguous actions that were obviously not in line with the current character design, so it looked a bit awkward or confused. But the writing is good, but the plot and emotional transitions may need to be refined. Take your time and follow your own pace. You can establish a rough outline of the main line, or mentally determine how long each stage may take and how many chapters it may take, because it feels like you have no direction. Come on, keep an eye on yours!