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This is the first book on Tomato where the main character is innocent and the writing is pretty good.

The protagonist is Wu Le Jing Zi, which is quite novel and attracts the attention of the Star God. The plot has been changed a lot, especially that of Yun Shang Wu Xiao, which is basically completed. In addition, many other plots have been changed by the protagonist, and there is a lot less tragedy - but I can't think of what the author should write next, because some of the changes are basically directly related to the main plot. But the novelty is real, and I am looking forward to the next plot. In fact, my favorite one at the moment is still about Yun Shang Wu Xiao, which is indeed a bit boring now. But it's surprising that there are so few people. I think this book is okay.

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It can be seen that the protagonist is working hard to write this article. So far, no logical loopholes have been found. It is much better than other authors. It is at the level of an envoy or a god. The only shortcoming is that there are too few and it is not enough to read.

The writing is very good and the pace is tight. It is a very good book. I recommend it.

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The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of Black Tower is rare [Sending Hearts] Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Black Tower is extremely smart, Ms. Black Tower is talented, Ms. Black Tower has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Black Tower is extremely intelligent, Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Black Tower has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Black Tower is wise and thoughtful, Ms. Black Tower is talented and beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Black Tower is naturally beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of Black Tower is rare [Sending Hearts] Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Black Tower is extremely smart, Ms. Black Tower is talented, Ms. Black Tower has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Black Tower is extremely intelligent, Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Black Tower has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Black Tower is wise and thoughtful, Ms. Black Tower is talented and beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Black Tower is naturally beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of Black Tower is rare [Sending Hearts] Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world, Ms. Black Tower is extremely smart, Ms. Black Tower is talented, Ms. Black Tower has extraordinary intelligence, Ms. Black Tower is extremely intelligent, Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in elegance, Ms. Black Tower has a beautiful heart and mouth, Ms. Black Tower is wise and thoughtful, Ms. Black Tower is talented and beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is like a fish and a wild goose, Ms. Black Tower is naturally beautiful, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful and fragrant, Ms. Black Tower is beautiful! Let us sing for the Black Tower. The Black Tower's beauty surpasses the universe, the Black Tower's knowledge is famous among thousands of stars, the Black Tower's name resounds throughout the world, and the Black Tower's power reaches the sky and the earth! She wakes up my sleeping soul, answers my doubts, and is illuminated by her thousands of mirrors, and I fall head over heels in admiration! She is our great god, she is our shining light! Let us sing the praises of the Black Tower. The incomparably beautiful Lady of the Black Tower awakens "nothingness"! The naturally beautiful Ms. Heita makes "Tonghe" sing! The beautiful lady of Heita is praised by "pure beauty"! The beauty of the black tower is rare [send heart]

Recommend, good to read, love to read, not a bastard, rarely review the book, as the title says, he who is the Memory Order has most of the Star Gods and an invincible light cone. Not long after he was born, he fought with Foehn Feng, and later on, he fought with Xing Xiao (I don't think this is a spoiler in the review)

The subject matter of this book is novel. It is the first book about Shizuko I have encountered. The structure is clear, the plot is exciting, and the author's writing style is very good.

Yes, if you have anything you don't understand, please feel free to comment. The author is really good at it. Yes, I can chase it. Hope it can be updated soon. @Write something yourself Author, I believe you will never stop updating, right? As long as it keeps going I will chase.

Yes, the author also listens to the advice

The best Star Iron fanfic I've seen so far

Very good, it is a fanfic with great potential. I hope you can take it further and attract more people.

The writing is good. I came early and the variables are getting bigger and bigger. It should be very different from the game. It looks good.

It's pretty good, you can watch it

The best fanfic written, [love] [love] [love]

It's well written, but the mirror flow is so bad This ending would have been good, but to get back on track in this way, it would be better to give her death and be completely free.

We usually don't comment on good books. If we comment on them, they are usually good books. Chapter 30 The protagonist written by the author has the feeling of being in the game but not in the game. It can be understood as the black swan feeling, which is difficult to describe.

I hope the author secretly updates 10,000 chapters in one day to scare us readers.

Unexpectedly, Ying Xing died in the end😭 Author, write about knives. Hurry up. Bengtie fandoms and Bengtie's exclusive knives. As a Bengtie fanfic writer, you must learn to write about knives.

I read it in one day. Unfortunately, it took almost three hours because I was in school.

Oh, the waitress is Chang Yeyue. Well written [laughing evilly]

A pretty good fan fiction [laughs]

It's beautiful. The author's writing style is very good. I hope the author's writing will get better and better [adoration][adoration][adoration][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Very good book, full support, cheers to the author [like][like][like]

A very good fanfic that makes up for a lot of regrets. It's almost a brand new plot. Jingyuan also realized his dream and became a patrol ranger.

Very interesting topic, looking forward to further development

The storyline is well integrated and the protagonist's skills are quite interesting.

The narrative is different from the past, the story is very good, and the grasp is good. It is a different kind of fan fiction.

Very nice, I can look forward to the future

Recommended, very worth recommending