[System Stream] [Shuangwen] [Depreciation Stream] [Martial Arts Online Games]
Who knows! Entering the 3.0 Version of "Yanyun Sixteen Tones", the combat power of the entire server suddenly shrank by 10,000 times!
Others were beating me up and scraping (1 point of damage/hit), but I punched out a critical hit of 120,000, directly embedding the monster into the wall!
Others apply the golden sore medicine as if they have not applied it (0.05 Blood points/second). I apply the ordinary medicine and return 500 blood per second. I can save the whole team with one hand in a team battle!
Xiao Jinye, the No. 1 Player in the entire server, wildly boasted that "40,000 combat power is invincible", but I clicked on the real combat power perspective - this guy's real combat power is only 4 points?
What's even more outrageous is that I activated the system: 1:100,000 in exchange for treasure money, 1 fragment in exchange for gold equipment with full attributes, and even GM Lin Shutong checked me for "cheating" and was deceived by my fake panel!
Until the Khitan BOSS slaughtered the city with 300,000 real combat power, all the players on the server cried and begged me to take him away: "Master! Please share 100 million combat power!"
I took out the Tai Chi book: "Let's make a deal first, follow me, don't use the depreciation of combat power as an excuse!
——You are weak, you are really weak, it is not the fault of the version!
Reader comments
Not bad, not sloppy
The use of the environment in combat is well written! For example, the terrain of Guixu Plain and the confrontation between white light and black fog make the fighting more layered.
The writing style has a martial arts flavor, but occasionally modern words are thrown in and it makes it a bit confusing. For example, would it be better to replace "critical threshold" with "Tiangang pole number"?
The supporting role creation needs to be strengthened! Except for the protagonist and Su Yu, everyone else is like a tool man. For example, Lin Ah Rang's teammates should be given more roles.
The existence of the real world line is a bit weak. What is Tianshu Yuan planning? I hope this line can be strengthened in the future, it feels like it will be a big conspiracy.
It is not easy to control complex settings like this. Although there are many clues at present, they are not confusing. Does the author have a clear map in his mind?
Can Su Yu return in some form? Even if it is just a fragment of memory or inherited will, leave a thought to the readers.
The level of villain power can be richer. In addition to Tianshu Yuan and Chen Mo, are there any neutral or hostile forces from other positions?
There could be more improvisation in combat. Now sometimes it seems a bit clumsy, relying on brute force or external force to break the situation.
The power upgrade system must be stable! Don't turn into a god fighting in the later stage. Now this kind of growth at a cost is very good
I hope the heroine (if there is one) is a strong and independent type who can fight side by side. I don't want a vase and I don't want to hold you back, please!
The equipment system could be more enriched. The main thing now is the jade pendant, and I look forward to the appearance of more magic weapons and magic weapons with stories.
Daily reminder to check in! Updated today? No. Then I'll ask again tomorrow. Author, have you seen the expectant eyes of readers?
The villain's motivations will be revealed soon. What exactly does Tianshu Yuan want to do? What is the purpose of doing experiments? If you drag this suspense for too long, you will get tired.
Let's start the villain's story line quickly! I am very curious about why Chen Mo became the agent and what has he experienced?
The environment is more than just a backdrop! This is well done. The battlefield environment will affect the battle situation and make the battle more variable.
Can multi-perspective narratives be considered? Occasionally unfolding it from the perspective of Chen Mo or a senior official of Tianshu Academy can make the villain more three-dimensional and the world view fuller.
The plot progress is a bit slow at times, especially in the foreshadowing chapters. You can appropriately compress the description and speed up the pace. After all, online readers have limited patience.
The setting can support a long novel, but it is currently less than one-tenth of the way through, right? It feels like I can write millions of words. Does the author have any long-term plans for serialization?
The world view can be displayed through side tasks. For example, let the protagonist accidentally trigger ancient events during exploration and slowly piece together the truth of the world.
Rhythm control needs to be strengthened. Some chapters have an explosion of information, while others are a little draggy. It is recommended to adjust the detailed distribution.
I cried! The scene where Su Yu burns herself and lights up the flame of protection is so graphic. When the Xuanmai Jade Pendant was broken, my heart was also broken. The author apologized for my tears!
Open the new map quickly! I want to see the whole picture of the prehistoric world, the different regional features, customs and customs.
The core setting of "fairness" is implemented well! It is not just a slogan, but it is embodied in specific rules such as spiritual pulse sharing and free basic treatment, so that readers can actually feel the changes.
The setting instructions could be more subtle. For example, revealing it through characters exploring ruins and interpreting ancient books is more natural than direct narration.
Urgent update! The first thing I do when I wake up every day is check for updates. Keep writing, author, and wait to see how the white light seeds in the core of Gui Xu germinate!
The author is a foreshadowing maniac! Now I suspect that every prop and every sentence is foreshadowing, and the reading experience is like deciphering a mystery.
New female characters will appear soon! He must have an IQ that doesn't hold him back in online combat, and someone who can resonate with the protagonist's soul.
Multi-line narratives may be considered. For example, it occasionally cuts to discussions within Tianshu Academy and turmoil in other areas of the prehistoric world, making the world more vivid.
The author is definitely a stickler for details. The cracks in the jade pendant, the black blood dripping from Chen Mo, and the stiff lines on the core, these small details make the picture particularly realistic.
Not bad, not sloppy
The use of the environment in combat is well written! For example, the terrain of Guixu Plain and the confrontation between white light and black fog make the fighting more layered.
The writing style has a martial arts flavor, but occasionally modern words are thrown in and it makes it a bit confusing. For example, would it be better to replace "critical threshold" with "Tiangang pole number"?
The supporting role creation needs to be strengthened! Except for the protagonist and Su Yu, everyone else is like a tool man. For example, Lin Ah Rang's teammates should be given more roles.
The existence of the real world line is a bit weak. What is Tianshu Yuan planning? I hope this line can be strengthened in the future, it feels like it will be a big conspiracy.
It is not easy to control complex settings like this. Although there are many clues at present, they are not confusing. Does the author have a clear map in his mind?
Can Su Yu return in some form? Even if it is just a fragment of memory or inherited will, leave a thought to the readers.
The level of villain power can be richer. In addition to Tianshu Yuan and Chen Mo, are there any neutral or hostile forces from other positions?
There could be more improvisation in combat. Now sometimes it seems a bit clumsy, relying on brute force or external force to break the situation.
The power upgrade system must be stable! Don't turn into a god fighting in the later stage. Now this kind of growth at a cost is very good
I hope the heroine (if there is one) is a strong and independent type who can fight side by side. I don't want a vase and I don't want to hold you back, please!
The equipment system could be more enriched. The main thing now is the jade pendant, and I look forward to the appearance of more magic weapons and magic weapons with stories.
Daily reminder to check in! Updated today? No. Then I'll ask again tomorrow. Author, have you seen the expectant eyes of readers?
The villain's motivations will be revealed soon. What exactly does Tianshu Yuan want to do? What is the purpose of doing experiments? If you drag this suspense for too long, you will get tired.
Let's start the villain's story line quickly! I am very curious about why Chen Mo became the agent and what has he experienced?
The environment is more than just a backdrop! This is well done. The battlefield environment will affect the battle situation and make the battle more variable.
Can multi-perspective narratives be considered? Occasionally unfolding it from the perspective of Chen Mo or a senior official of Tianshu Academy can make the villain more three-dimensional and the world view fuller.
The plot progress is a bit slow at times, especially in the foreshadowing chapters. You can appropriately compress the description and speed up the pace. After all, online readers have limited patience.
The setting can support a long novel, but it is currently less than one-tenth of the way through, right? It feels like I can write millions of words. Does the author have any long-term plans for serialization?
The world view can be displayed through side tasks. For example, let the protagonist accidentally trigger ancient events during exploration and slowly piece together the truth of the world.
Rhythm control needs to be strengthened. Some chapters have an explosion of information, while others are a little draggy. It is recommended to adjust the detailed distribution.
I cried! The scene where Su Yu burns herself and lights up the flame of protection is so graphic. When the Xuanmai Jade Pendant was broken, my heart was also broken. The author apologized for my tears!
Open the new map quickly! I want to see the whole picture of the prehistoric world, the different regional features, customs and customs.
The core setting of "fairness" is implemented well! It is not just a slogan, but it is embodied in specific rules such as spiritual pulse sharing and free basic treatment, so that readers can actually feel the changes.
The setting instructions could be more subtle. For example, revealing it through characters exploring ruins and interpreting ancient books is more natural than direct narration.
Urgent update! The first thing I do when I wake up every day is check for updates. Keep writing, author, and wait to see how the white light seeds in the core of Gui Xu germinate!
The author is a foreshadowing maniac! Now I suspect that every prop and every sentence is foreshadowing, and the reading experience is like deciphering a mystery.
New female characters will appear soon! He must have an IQ that doesn't hold him back in online combat, and someone who can resonate with the protagonist's soul.
Multi-line narratives may be considered. For example, it occasionally cuts to discussions within Tianshu Academy and turmoil in other areas of the prehistoric world, making the world more vivid.
The author is definitely a stickler for details. The cracks in the jade pendant, the black blood dripping from Chen Mo, and the stiff lines on the core, these small details make the picture particularly realistic.